NiBir Story-My Hell My Heaven epilogue up

mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: itzanya32
Seems like something is wrong wid kabir...
But the update was nice..
Countinue soon...

thanks😊

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Amina...
Awesome update ...!!!
I think Kabir Has Personality Disorder ...!!!
but anyway ... Loved the Update ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!

thanks amina😊

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Sorry for late reply..
I loved the chapter.. Kabir definitely has some personality problem like dual personality or split-personality.. This is ver interesting.. Continue soon 😊

thanks krishi😊

no need for sorry yaar😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Awesome update chiku 😳
Very well written 👏
What's wrong with Kabir why is behaving so weird
🤔
Nisha apne Dil ka haal billi k sath share Karing aww 😳 😆
Loved it chiku 😳 ❤️
update soon
I'm so excited to read more
Thanks for the pm 🤗

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Superb start 👏
Beautifully written 👏
Aur yeh kabir mai pakka kuch locha hai 🤣
Update soon

P.s- Update soon means jaldi ok 😉 😆

thanks sujoy😊

dont worry iss ke updates jaldi milenge😉

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.
Very intriguing update ritika!
Kabir's behaviour has really piqued my curiosity now!
Nisha's confusion over the same was well portrayed and written 👍🏼
Also your description of his contrasting behaviour was really good 👍🏼
Waiting for the story to unravel!
Do continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

thanks vishu😃

glad you liked it😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: poornima_15
Wow ritika this is a different story and very interesting 😊
The prologue was very different and made me eager to read more and luckyly chapter 1 was already posted 😆
Now the chapter 1 it ws so good kabirs personality is becoming a mystery and hope you'll solve it soon .. 😉
Sorry for late comment and plzz jldi update karo ye story ka next part can't wait ... 👏

thanks pooh😃

i am happy u liked it

no need for srryies

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: _A-Hopeful-Ray_
Yr.. This is totally different
Luving it so much!!

maggu🤗

thanks yaar

will update soon

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: janvi1018
Superb!!!
Loved it
I guess kabir ka double role hoga...

thanks janvi

dekhte jao😉

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ashveena.
Awesome update chiku 😳
Very well written 👏
What's wrong with Kabir why is behaving so weird
🤔
Nisha apne Dil ka haal billi k sath share Karing aww 😳 😆
Loved it chiku 😳 ❤️
update soon
I'm so excited to read more
Thanks for the pm 🤗

thanks ashoo

you will get to know what's wrong with kabir soon

and nisha dairy mein likh rhi hai dairy ka naam usne kitty rakha hai billi nhi hai koi🤣

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