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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Awesome update ...!!!
I think Kabir Has Personality Disorder ...!!!
but anyway ... Loved the Update ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Sorry for late reply..
I loved the chapter.. Kabir definitely has some personality problem like dual personality or split-personality.. This is ver interesting.. Continue soon 😊

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Superb start 👏
Beautifully written 👏
Aur yeh kabir mai pakka kuch locha hai 🤣
Update soon

P.s- Update soon means jaldi ok 😉 😆

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Very intriguing update ritika!

Kabir's behaviour has really piqued my curiosity now!

Nisha's confusion over the same was well portrayed and written 👍🏼

Also your description of his contrasting behaviour was really good 👍🏼

Waiting for the story to unravel!

Do continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Wow ritika this is a different story and very interesting 😊

The prologue was very different and made me eager to read more and luckyly chapter 1 was already posted 😆

Now the chapter 1 it ws so good kabirs personality is becoming a mystery and hope you'll solve it soon .. 😉

Sorry for late comment and plzz jldi update karo ye story ka next part can't wait ... 👏

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MetaphorMaggy

@MetaphorMaggy

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Yr.. This is totally different

Luving it so much!!

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janvi

@janvi1018

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Superb!!!

Loved it

I guess kabir ka double role hoga...

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Its damn interesting concept Ritu👏

Kabir ko Dissociative Identity Disorder/ Split Personality disorder hai kya??🤔

Nisha has a baby😲😳

Update soon but after Raabta😉...please😳