As The Storm Rages On [NiBir TS] Updated Part 2 Pg 5

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

that was really so beautiful!

the bond between them is so heart touching!❤️

it was simply superb, and the words you used were so apt!😳

the description you gave of how she's alone was really adorable and even i could feel how she must have felt!😊

such an awesome writer you are!🤗😊

with every part you write, you make me wanting more and more of it!😳

don't take me as a desperate person, but another part please!😆😆

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Tannu please make this story as a ff or ss
Seriously i am loving this story alot
Superb update
Beautifully written
Loved it
Please make it as a ss or ff please 😃

P.s- Congo for becoming dazzler 🥳

Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Another beautiful part ... Their emotions were wery well written ... Write more ... 😊

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

First of all thank u so much for the 2nd part🤗

The update was amazing...I just luved it❤️

It was so beautiful

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

nice OS but kuch samaj me nai ata kya tha??
nisha kyu upset thi??
and chhupke kabir k ghar me kyi ghussi??
so much confusing it was!!

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

tanu very very beautiful and a heart felt update

nisha feels lonely and alone in her own house kabir is too alone and both becomes each other's companion

the silent conversations between them and the way they understand each other is simply beautiful

i want u to just keep writing this

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

Viewbie

+ 35

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

OMG!!!😲
How did I miss this
M so sorry Tannu😔
Anyways, That was Awesome👏
Thanks fr writing on my insistence🤗

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950842

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu
Awesome...👏
Beautifully written..😳😳
Keep writing..😊😊

Thank You so much 😳

Glad you like it 😆

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sam_premc
that was really so beautiful!
the bond between them is so heart touching!❤️
it was simply superb, and the words you used were so apt!😳
the description you gave of how she's alone was really adorable and even i could feel how she must have felt!😊
such an awesome writer you are!🤗😊
with every part you write, you make me wanting more and more of it!😳
don't take me as a desperate person, but another part please!😆😆

Awww!! Thanks for such a sweet and detailed reply 🤗

Means a lot that you took out the time to read and deeply analyze my humble work 😳

Glad you like it 👍🏼

Will think about a third part, but not gonna drag this beyond that 😆😆😆

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950842

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Tannu please make this story as a ff or ss
Seriously i am loving this story alot
Superb update
Beautifully written
Loved it
Please make it as a ss or ff please 😃
P.s- Congo for becoming dazzler 🥳

Thanks a lot Sujay!! 😊

Glad you like my work 😆

Thanks for noticing I'm a Dazzler now! 😳