As The Storm Rages On [NiBir TS] Updated Part 2 Pg 5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Lovely part...

Beautifully written...

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Another beautiful part ... Their emotions were wery well written ... Write more ... 😊

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

First of all thank u so much for the 2nd part🤗

The update was amazing...I just luved it❤️

It was so beautiful

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

nice OS but kuch samaj me nai ata kya tha??
nisha kyu upset thi??
and chhupke kabir k ghar me kyi ghussi??
so much confusing it was!!

Originally posted by: mishrialways

tanu very very beautiful and a heart felt update

nisha feels lonely and alone in her own house kabir is too alone and both becomes each other's companion

the silent conversations between them and the way they understand each other is simply beautiful

i want u to just keep writing this

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

OMG!!!😲
How did I miss this
M so sorry Tannu😔
Anyways, That was Awesome👏
Thanks fr writing on my insistence🤗

Awesome, Amazing, beautiful !!!
Loved it a lot !!!
love the way you explained loneliness of nisha and how kabir fulfill her this loneliness with lots of love !!!
Thanx for second part !!!
Do write more !!!

Originally posted by: TASYAM

Awesome, Amazing, beautiful !!!
Loved it a lot !!!
love the way you explained loneliness of nisha and how kabir fulfill her this loneliness with lots of love !!!
Thanx for second part !!!
Do write more !!!

Originally posted by: RTme0w

Thanks a lot dear!!

Glad ya like it so much!!

Read your piece, quite talented yourself, Madame!!

Thanks tannu 😳
I think yha par kuch ulta hogya
But thanks i wont believe that i am talanted in writing skills😳
But you are more talented then me i think 😎

Originally posted by: TASYAM

Thanks tannu 😳
I think yha par kuch ulta hogya
But thanks i wont believe that i am talanted in writing skills😳
But you are more talented then me i think 😎