NIBIR TS- Bol Do Na Zara ( Epilogue updated pg 25) completed

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01
Very awesome ..
Nibir and Kanish ...
Do write more

Thank u 😳

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: TASYAM
All parts were awesome 👏👏👏👏
loved it !!!❤️

Part-3a
Loved it !!!❤️
What plan made by kabir 😉
Joru ke gulam ki joru ko ullu bna diya 😆
Nisha 😭
Haww kabir ne nisha ko dokha diya but ushki mistake nhi thi 😲

Part- 3b
Awesome 👏
loved it❤️
Viraj going to jail and chaki peesing and peesing and peesing 😆
Saurav bhukad 😆
Nice plan by the group 👏
Ish part mai mujeh laga ki nibir ek nhi honge

Epilogue

No words to describe it ... it was awesome 👏
loved it❤️
Nibir 😳
Kaniska 😲
Gangwalians 😡

Bas itna hi bol pavungi becoz jo words heart mai arhe hai voh i can't describe but yes the story was awesome 👏
Hell aur Heaven dono ke darshan kradiye 😆
Jaldi seh dusri individual story start kro i m waiting 😳

Thank u ansh 🤗

Yaa I will start new story only when you comment regularly what's say 😉😆

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: mishri0209
superb..
loved it to d core
it was one of d best epilouges i hav read so far
u hav written it xtrmly well
i was really nt satisfied wid d end
bt d epilogue made me frget dat..
it was soo wrth reading
4m dere confession 2 dere love making scns n nt to frget
dere cute KaNish such a cute name
it was really vry nyc..
ty 4 d story
plz write another wenevr u can

U like it that is enough for me 😊 😃

Thank u so much 😳

I'll try soon to write another one

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: alisha17
Lovely ending to ur story
Thank you for the pm

Thank u 😊

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: anu012
Mindblowing epilouge
loved it
beautifully written

thnks for pm

keep writting dear

Thank u anu 😃

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: RTme0w
Wow!! Amazing epilogue.
Loved this tale.
When are you starting another one? (:

Thank u tannu 😃

Let's see kab start karti hun 😉

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Nice epilogue..
Bahut chota nai tha??! 😲🤣
Loved the part above & below the whole song section .. 🤣
Wo pura song wala part I have ignored 😆
I know yahan iss forum me under 18 bachcho ko v wp stuff pasand h but m not among them
I love cute n crazy fights more than romance 😈
Amnol don't mind pllzzz
But mere dil me Jo ata h type ❤️
I m bindaas 😆
But but SR type 🤣
Sorry if u feel bad with my comment 😔
But loved the whole story ❤️
Its was awesome [<=D]

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
Nice epilogue..
Bahut chota nai tha??! 😲🤣
Loved the part above & below the whole song section .. 🤣
Wo pura song wala part I have ignored 😆
I know yahan iss forum me under 18 bachcho ko v wp stuff pasand h but m not among them
I love cute n crazy fights more than romance 😈
Amnol don't mind pllzzz
But mere dil me Jo ata h type ❤️
I m bindaas 😆
But but SR type 🤣
Sorry if u feel bad with my comment 😔
But loved the whole story ❤️
Its was awesome [<=D]

Its completely your choice what you like and what not I understand...😊

And thank you for commenting 😳

And I loved your comment becoz what you feel you share with me so thanks once again 😳

Agr chota hai toh next time or chota dungi 😉 🤣