NIBIR TS- Bol Do Na Zara ( Epilogue updated pg 25) completed

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Snow12345654321

@Snow12345654321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Awww...sooo cute epilogue

Lived it so much 😳

Perfectly written😳

All your stories are just fabulous😃

Thnx for the pm

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

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anmol a very beautiful end to your story😳

loved it❤️

loved the confession scene

very nicely written👏

the way u described nibir's bonding then kanish and nisha's bonding with kabir's family was very nice

i really enjoyed reading your story😃

and want to read further from you🤗

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Soundharya

@Feltonate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Very awesome ..

Nibir and Kanish ...

Do write more

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Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

All parts were awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it !!!❤️

Part-3a
Loved it !!!❤️
What plan made by kabir 😉😉😉😉😉
Joru ke gulam ki joru ko ullu bna diya 😆😆😆😆😆
Nisha 😭😭😭😭😭
Haww kabir ne nisha ko dokha diya but ushki mistake nhi thi 😲😲😲😲😲

Part- 3b
Awesome 👏👏👏👏👏
loved it❤️
Viraj going to jail and chaki peesing and peesing and peesing 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Saurav bhukad 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Nice plan by the group 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Ish part mai mujeh laga ki nibir ek nhi honge

Epilogue

No words to describe it ... it was awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it❤️
Nibir 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Kaniska 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Gangwalians 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Bas itna hi bol pavungi becoz jo words heart mai arhe hai voh i can't describe but yes the story was awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Hell aur Heaven dono ke darshan kradiye 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Jaldi seh dusri individual story start kro i m waiting 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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tanisha

@tani_0209

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

superb..

loved it to d core

it was one of d best epilouges i hav read so far

u hav written it xtrmly well

i was really nt satisfied wid d end

bt d epilogue made me frget dat..

it was soo wrth reading

4m dere confession 2 dere love making scns n nt to frget

dere cute KaNish such a cute name

it was really vry nyc..

ty 4 d story

plz write another wenevr u can

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alisha17

@alisha17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Lovely ending to ur story

Thank you for the pm

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Mindblowing epilouge
loved it
beautifully written

thnks for pm

keep writting dear

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Unres on pg-25
Finally 😆

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950842

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Wow!! Amazing epilogue.

Loved this tale.

When are you starting another one? (:

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
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Anmol superb epilogue 👏
Loved it
Finally everything is happy happy 😳
Nibir romance ☺️ tune toh blush kara diya 😆
Nibir and kanisha was lovely 😳
Loved the story 😳
Beautiful story beautiful epilogue 👏
Truly loved it
Do write more

Thanks sujay 😳

Blush kiya na wahi karvana tha 😃

And for writing let's see 😉