RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09* - Page 40

Originally posted by: Krish58

Okay needa last two chap of khamoshiya ke liye comment de rahi hoon.

Nisha and bunty bond agar ghotala family ke style mein kahu toh it was mmm ...

Par par bunty ke real parents aagaye to take him..nisha somehow not sure about bunty parents ..and she gifts him phone so that they can stay in touch..mmm nice idea needa..okay jiska dar tha wohi hua ..who are this all people and bunty ko kaid mein rakha hain nisha goes to save bunty..

Aage kya hoga waiting for it..will continue soon dear..mast updates diye hain

Originally posted by: Krish58

Hmm needa hal e dil ka prolouge padha and chap 1..

It was amazing dear ..Kabir ka intro was good one dear..bahut mast intro tha..and chap1 u further gave light to Kavita character..hmm so he have only one best buddy but what is that secret Jo usne uske best friend ko bhi nahi bataya..waiting for it to come..

Overall I like it...dear😉

Originally posted by: Krish58

Lol needa mera moblie ko na hemant pasand aagaya hain... lagta hain...

Okay next 3 chaps ka comment I.e 2-3-4 ka review.deti hoon..

Hmm so kabir is adopted..and his friend is missing..sauta..kaha hoga woh...kahi woh fas toh nahi gaya na kahi ..

And kabir ka his self talk with himself on kaisa dost hoon was mast..yr..mazaa aaya mujeh.. kabir worried about him..hmm family matter of saurav...a d kabirne location patah lagaya with yhe help of his telecoms company..okay kabir in village and uss pe attack hota hain..he hides in a hut...and koi aur bhi hain waha.. it's nisha right!!!.kabir is intelligent and let's see aage kya hota hain..where is saurav kahi village people me ullu toh nahi banya kabir ko by saying ke they ran away...

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome update

You are increasing suspense...

Do update soon...!!!

Originally posted by: Krish58

Hmm needa next 3 chaps ke liye. I.e. 567 ke liye review

Hmm so woh ladki is dolly..hmm I thought nisha hogi par koi nai dolly thi..ahe helped kabir ..hm. so I was right yeh sab sarpanch ne kiya tha..thank God kabir came to know about truth by letter..saurav is smart...usse patah tha kabir jaroor aayega.. hum so nice plan by kabir and dolly and that kadha. Thing was mast..finally gaonwalo came to know about truth.. acha hain..and sarpanch punished..

Ab kabir ke office mein aisa kya hua.. hoping for best...

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