Nibir FF - FITOOR (Updated part 4) 18 August'18 - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nisha went to the room jahan Kabir ruka Tha before their 2nd marriage in gangwal house
She went to window side and stood there thinking abt the last day she spent with Kabir ...


FLASHBACK
Nisha was helping Kabir in his final packing ...
She was more excited then Kabir thinking that he is going to accomplish his dreams.. She was very happy for him...
Kabir's face sometimes look dull n upset but when she looks at him he immediately smile...
she was confused why he was behaving weird
"Kabir Tu khush nai hai kya?? U r going towards ut one n only dream... London school of dance!! Tujje to khushi se nachna chaiye aur Tu to murjhaya Hua phool lag raha raha hai!! Hua kya h tujhe ??"
"sapne badal gye mere ab but tujhe nai bolsakta.." Kabir mumbled but its went unheard by Nisha
He went to her n asked "Tu sachme khush hai mere London jane se?" he asked innocently
"khush?" she said n looked at him then shouted "bahut bahut bahut khush Hu duffer!" Kabir again smiled in reply (a sad smile)
"phir se wahi ... Murjhaya phool!!" nisha sighed saying that!!
"What murjhaya phool?pagal hai kya?me apna Sapna pura karne ja raha Hu !! Mujhse zyada khush aur kon hoga?"
"acha to aise muh latakaye Kyu ghum raha hai?jab Teri taraf dekhti Hu to jhut mut ka muskura deta hai!! "
"acha wo..."
" Wo... Kya?" Nisha said
"wo me actually..." he said looking here n there...
"wo me janbujh ke kar raha tha... Tujhe ullu bana raha tha! U know I m very good actor aftr all" he said proudly
Nisha looked at him suspiciously
"pata nai Kyu mujhe aisa lag raha hai Tu jhoot bol ra h.."
M.. Ma..main k..k..Kyu jhoot bolunga?" he asked stammering
"dekh abka matlab pakka kuch chhupa raha h!!"
"Aisa kuch nai hai ne kuch nai chhupa raha!!" replied looking at other side
"agar nai hai to nazre kyu chura raha hai?"
Kabir looked at nisha
He thought that don't know dubara nisha se kabi milega b ya nahi ? He decide to tell her abt him feelings , kya pata nisha k Mann me b kuch ho.. Aur .."
"Kabir.. Kya soch raha hai? Bolna!! Baat kya hai? Subah se itna gumsun hai Tu! Kuch baat to zarur hai.. Im sure!!"
"Actually kuch hai.." he said
"kuch kehna hai tujhse... Pata nai ye sunke Tu kaise react karegi?shayad naraz ho jaye but jane se pehle bol hi deta Hu!!" he continued in a serious tone aftr a pause
Nisha looked at him for while then said
"oye .. Ruk... " she checked his forehead n neck
"tabiyat to thik hai na Teri? Aise serious tone me baat karte pehle Kabi nai dekha tujhe!!" she laughed saying that..
"Nisha yar" Kabir cribbed
"Kabir.." nisha said putting hand on his shoulder "kahin pyaar vyaar to nai ho Gaya na mujhse? Aur tune jane ka irada to nai badal liya!" she said seriously but again burst out laughing
seeing kabir's reaction bcoz he was in shock..
Nisha stopped n again looked at him who was still shocked and she again started laughing seeing him
Kabir turned his face to other side he was not in shock now but he was hurt
He was actually going to say it only and she is making fun of it.. He closed his eyes to control the tears and decided that he won't tell her abt his feelings now..
But he hav to say something kyunki usne bola hai ke kli baat hai Jo wo nisha ko batana chahta hai but ab bole kya? He was thinking it only
"Kabir... Yar uder kya hai Jo bar bar Tu dekhte khada ho jata hai?me idhar Hu.. Yahan dekh ! Mujhse baat kar!!" nisha said and turned him
"Tujhe hasne aur mujhe chidane se fursat ho to kuch baat Karun me!!" he taunted her
"ha Tu achanak itna serious ho ra n atak raha hai aur aisa to log tabi karte hain jab pyaar vyar ho jaye..."
Kabir again got silent for a moment n looked at her
But control himself and replied
"Tujhe bada knowledge hai pyaar ka?? PhD Ki hai tune pyaar pe?" he mocked her
Nisha rolled her eyes
Then said " hum ye faltu Ki bakwas kyu kar re hain?"
"me kahan kar raha Hu? Tu kar rai h!!" he replied
"acha chhod.. Ye Bata flight kitne baje Ki hai? Me scooty me petrol bhara leti Hu.. Takey raste me bandh na ho jaye!!"
"scooty?? No ... Plzzz no..."
He shouted
"kyun meri scooty se tujhe kya problem hai?"
"M.. M.. Mujhe kya problem hogi?mujhe koi problem nai hai.." he replied
"Tu phirse atka.. "
Kabir looked here n there then said
"me to ye bolra Tha Ki scooty Ki kya zarurat hai? Me khudse chala jaunga!! Teri scooty me kyu le jaun!!" she was still glaring at him , she wasn't convince with his answers
"sach bol Kabir.. Kya baat hai!!"
She said sternly
"Sach bolunga to tu maregi..." he said pouting
"Marungi...?" nisha was confused why he was saying so...
"wait a minute .. Kya kiya hai tune?me pehle kyu nai socha ye.. Tu jab b aise weird behave karta h koi na koi gadbad ki hoti hai tune!! Seedhe se bol kya kiya warna me abhi marungi !!"
Kabir looked down n said "nisha .. Wo teri scooty..." he said scared
"kya Hua meri scooty ko?" she asked getting hyper!
And ran outside ..
Kabir followed her
Scooty Ki headlight tooti Hui thi
"Kabir .. Gadhe..kahan thoki tune meri scooty aur kab? Aur mujhse Bina puche tune meri scooty ko hath b kaise lagaya??" nisha shouted in anger
"wo subah me jaldi uth gya Tha and Tu so rai Thi aur mujhe market se kuch saman lene Jana Tha to Mein.."
Kabir said like innocent kid
She was hell angry on she can murder anyone if someone hurts her scooty... Her scooty was her jaan
"Mujhe pata Tha Tujhe jab pata chalega mujhpe chillayegi isliye mera mood off hai subah se"
He said giving a reason to sadness
"Han to kya arti utaru Teri?"
She replied frustrated but after a few mins she realized its kabir's last day here... and she hav decided last night that she will not get angry on him at all..
She took some deep breath to calm her self down then said "andar chal.."
"nai Tu ja me baad me ata Hu" Kabir was abt to runaway from there bcoz he thought she is taking him inside to give some punishment
She glared at him ..
Kabir went inside with her jaise chote bachche ko mummy dant ke le ja rai ho 🤣
"Kabir its ok " nisha said seeing his upset face
"Ok?" he asked not understanding what she said
"matlab Tu pitne..." she said looking at her hand as if was going to beat someone n getting ready for it
Kabir get more scared
"wala nai hai.." she completed while moving towards him
Kabir closed his eyes thinking she will punch him but then he realized what she said n looked at her she couldn't control anymore n laughed
It took him time to register what actually happened
But seeing her laugh he smiled n this time it was genuine
"thankgod Tu gussa nai hai!! Me to dar hi gya Tha!!" he said
"pata hai .. " she replied
"but ye ajooba kaise ho gya?matlab Tu apni scooty ko aisi condition me dekhke b gussa nai hai?"
Nisha narrowed her eyes at him
"Tu chahta hai me gussa Hu kya?"
"mera dimag kharab h kya Jo aisa chahunga?"
"To faltu ki bakwas bandh kar"
She said throwing draggers at him from her eyes
Aftr a min Kabir said
"ice cream khayegi?"
"Ice cream?" nisha asked confused
He went to kitchen and bring her favorite ice cream from fridge
Nisha got again excited seeing her fav ice cream
"Tu ye kab laya ??"
"wo aj subah hi..." he said smiled cheekily
She again gave him an angry look
"actually ye lene k bare me hi soch raha Tha mera dhyan nai Tha to scooty ko thik Diya" he said pouting
Nisha galred at him for while then smiled
Both enjoyed eating the ice cream together
"Kabir will u miss me?" nisha asked while eating..
"ofcorse i will.." he said n she smiled
But then he immediately said "actually no.."
She looked at him confused
"what? Aise Kyu dekh rai hai?" he asked
"Tu mujhe miss nai karega?"she asked sadly
"why would i miss u?tujhse to peecha chhuda k bhag raha Hu! Tujhe Kyu miss karunga!! "
Nisha frowned
"jab dekho tab mujhpe chillati rehti hai Tu... I cant wait now... Kab me London pohchunga? And i will b again a free bird!! Teri kitkit se dur..kitna sukoon hoga wahan.." he said dreamily
"u know wat me socha Tha tujhe aj na dantugi na marungi but Tu ... "
Nisha said fuming
Kabir looked at her from corner of his eyes.. She ws fuming in anger
He understood wat is she upto.. And ran from there to save his dear life..
Nisha ran behind him saying
"Tu pitega mere sath se..." she said while running
They were in hall and ran in full house nisha was throwing on him watever she gets..
Finally aftr a long chase.. They both sat on sofa all tired .. She looked at him still angry but then both burst out laughing
Kabir pulled her in a side hug saying
"London pahunchke sabse pehle me tujhe hi call karunga apnenew number se!!"
"promise?" she asked forwarding her hand he replied "promise.." holding her smilingly
They share an eyelock
FLASH BACK ENDS



Nisha came out from her thoughts listening to some voice outside from room
Jwala , dolly n kirti were walking in corridor
"ye tauji kitna gussa ho jate hain Kabir jiju ka naam sunke..." said jwala
"How blah jwalu .. Ab Kabir ne apni image bigadi h sabki nazar me to wo gussa to honge hi na!!"
"shhh.. Chup karo dono.. Kabir ka naam b nahi lena hai hamen iss ghar me !! Abhi tumdono ne mujhe promise kiya tha na? aur ab todre ho?"
"sorry dolly di , but mujhe acha nai lagta jab tauji jiju k bare me galat bolte hain n wo letter wo unko abtak yaad h!!"
"jwalu mana ki jo sab sochte hain wo Kabir ne nahi kiya but dhoka to diya h na usne Nisha ko!! Tune dekha na Nishu ne apna kya haal bana liya h uski wajah se!!"
Dolly was scolding jwalu and kirti noticed the door of kabir's room open
Usne ishare se sabko shant hone ko kaha n when she sneaked in Nisha was standing at window side..
They again felt bad thinking Nisha ne unki discussion suni hogi n ye sab baatein yaad dilake uske zakhm phir taze kardiye humne..
They went from there silently
Nisha again went to her memories n remembered that day n that letter and the actual story of it..


FLASHBACK
Kabir was writing something on a paper , Nisha went to him to see wat was he writing but he hide it.
"Kabir kya chhupa raha hai?dikha mujhe tune kya likha?"
"Nisha tere wo kam ka nai hai! Tu ye le..."
He gave her another paper (a letter)
She read it... And asked , wat is this for?
He replied "jab me chala jaunga to Tu apne gharwalo se kya kahegi?Kabir kahan gya?"
"yeto meine socha hi nai!!" nisha replied
"tune nai socha but meine sab soch liya hai!! Apne sapno Ki taraf ja raha Hu but apni best frnd ko problem me phasa k thodi na jaunga!" he said smiling
Nisha smiled back
"so tell me wats the plan?" she asked sitting on the sofa
Kabir too sit beside and explain that how she hav to act as a cry baby n call her family to come here and then just gave this letter to them crying and rest they will understood their self
He also give her a small bottle
"Ye le glycerine, jhoot moot ka rone me help milegi.." he mocked her
"mujhe iski zarurat nai hai!! I will manage..." she replied giving it back to him
"nishaaa ... Dekh thodi der Rona hota to thik Tha ! Tu kar leti but tujhe bahut der Rona padega takey Tu sabko convince kar sake Ki me bura aur Tu innocent h and Tu sachme upset h bahut zyada!! So take it now!! Zarurat pade to use karlena!!"
He stood giving her glycerine and took all his luggage
"chal ab nikalta Hu!!" he said
"oye nikalra Hu matlab? Me aa rai hu tere sath tujhe airport drop karne! Meri scooty.."
She stopped realizing her scooty in not in good condition
"meine cab book Ki hai usme chala jaunga !! Tu yahi reh aur Tu rone Ki practice chalu kar!" he chuckled saying
"shut up !! Kabir.. Me cab me hi tere sath aungi and tujhe see off karke hi lautungi..."
"but Nisha..."
"No more arguments kabir" she said and went out taking on of his bags
They were abt to sit in cab when someone came there and kabir went to the boy n give him a letter and some money , said something
He came back and both sat in the cab
Nisha asked " wo ladka kon Tha aur kya Diya tune usey?"
"kuch nai bas aise hi.."
"Kabir..."
"kya?"
"ye second time Tu aisa kar raha hai!! Pehle wo letter chhupaya ab ye.. Bolna kon Tha wo aur.."
"offo nisha.. ok Batata hu.. Mere yahan se chale jane ke kuch hours baad wo wo ladka tere ghar pe yani gangwal house me ek letter pahunchayega!"
"letter?"
"Han letter .. Wahi wala jo me likh raha tha!!"
"oh acha but kya hai us letter me? Tune mujhe kyu nai dikhaya wo?"
"kyunki wo tere dekhne layak nai h" he mumbled chuckling
"kyaa?mere dekhne layak nai matlab?" nisha asked
"matlab usme Teri n Teri family Ki bhuraiyan hain!" he again chuckled
she looked at him confused "tere gharwalo Ki nazar me mujhe bura banna hai!! To bas ye samjle k uss aim ko hi pura karne k liye wo letter likha hai!!"
He smiled sadly
FLASHBACK ENDS


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To be continued...

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Reswa .unreswa
Super Nibir scenes
To ye Tha wo letter k piche Ka raaz...
😆😆😆
Edited by -VisheshTippani - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Nice update👍🏼

Kabir ko itna negative dikhaye mujhe acha nhi laga😔 itna bhi burai mat karo kabir ka😔



haha 😆
burai nai karenge to kabir k Jane k baad nishu ko sab blame karenge na buddhu 😛
isliye kabir ka bura banna is imp
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha0606

nice update😃

yaar kabira ko ithna bura dhikhaya...abbb jab wo waapas aayega kaise manayega sabko😒😔
plesa jaldi update karna😊please please please😃😃



tension mat le sab thik ho jayega 😆
me hu na 😉
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani


Donp hi...pehle update de phir nikal patli gali se😆



oye madam ye meri story h mera thread h !!
tu nikal idar se 😛
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

Very nice update... Waiting for next part. 😊



ur wait will b over soonest...
I m going to update now 😊
Posted: 8 years ago


thanx hiyu 😊
Posted: 8 years ago


thanx again 😃
Posted: 8 years ago


my pleasure 😉
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Awesome update😃kabir k letters were very well written the one to nisha sad but still sweet one and the one to others bura Damad act ki yaad aagayibut hope to see happy moments soon

.😊



thanx poornima 😊

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