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CRYING FAMILY 29.7
Anupamaa 29 July 2025 Written Update & Daily Discussions Thread
Bin tere
Part(a)
A girl around 23yrs was sitting on her armchair...
Looking at a pic..
Not in her phone or camera or any photoframe
It was just a photograph ...
Her wedding photo it was...
She was looking at the photo intently
"Aj 2 mahine pure ho Gaye hai!! Par ab tak tune koi call nhi kiya!!! Mein aj bhi tere call ka wait kar rahi Hu Kabir... "
Hai kya ye Jo tere mere darmiyan hai...
Andekhi ansuni koi daastaan hai..
"Ek pal k liye lagta hai ke Tu shayad kabi call nahi karega! Mujhe ye umeed chhod deni cahiye... Par agle hi pal jab phone ring Karta hai lagta hai jaise Tera call ho.. Par nai hota..."
A drop of fear rolled down her cheek
Lagne lagi ab zindagi khaali... Hai meri..
Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali...
"I miss u Kabir... I really miss u.."
Bin tere Bin tere Bin tere ...
Koi khalish hai hawaaon me bin tere..
She hugged the photo close to her heart
Bin tere Bin tere Bin tere ...
Koi khalish hai hawaaon me bin tere..
Just then she heard some footsteps... Someone was coming to her room...
She immediately hide the photo somewhere and looked up...
"photo hides karne Ki koi needs nahi hai nishu..." said the voice ...
Voice of the person of who entered in the room...
"photo?konsi photo? Mein to.. Mein.. Wo.. Mein..."
" han photo.. Kabir aur Teri weddings photograph..."
Wo nishu ke pas Jake khadi hoti hai and wo photo jahan usne chupayi Thi wahan se nikal ke uske hath ne deti hai!!
"ye photographs.. Bol me jhuth bol rahi Hu? Tu talks nahi kar rahi Thi is photograph se?"
Nisha remained silent.. And looked down
Dolly cupped her face and said
"Tu Kyu har bar humse apna pains chupati hai?We knows everything na?Hum sab cousins jante hain Ki tu Kabir Ko kitna miss karti hai!! "
Nishu hugged her and started crying like a baby
Dolly patted her hairs and tried consoling her!!
"Kyu dolly di?Kyu kiya usne mere sath aisa? Kyu toda usne apna promise? Kya uski life me meri koi importance nai hai?kya usne kabi b mujhe dil se apna dost nai samjha?Kyu nai kiya ajtak koi b call usne?Kyu?dolly di Kyu??"
She cried more!!
"Nishu.. Nishu.. Calms down!! Tu uss insan ke liye ansu baha rahi hai jise Teri koi parwa nhi!! Meine pehle b kaha tujhse bhool jaa usey!! Jaise wo bhool gya hai tujhe!! "
Nisha broke the hug and asked innocently "kya wo sach me mujhe bhool gya hoga?"
"I don't knows nishu.. But agar usey Teri fikar hoti to aise Karta kya?? Apna promise todta kya?usney jane ke baad koi call nai Ki !! Iska ek meanings hai!! Wo tujhe forgets gya!!"
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On terrace
All cousins except dolly & nishu were on terrace with Aman and Saurav also present there!!
All gangup to have some fun and cheer up nishu.. Who nowadays stays quiet, alone and upset
"Yar ye dolly di kahan reh gyi??" said sukku
"unhe to nishu bro ko lene bheja Tha!! Aur wo khud hi gayab ho gyi!!" jwalu said sadly
"ruko guys Mein call Karta hu usey!! " said Saurav
Saurav called but no one picked the call.. He got tensed!! He called again!!
"kya hua Saurav ? Itna tension me kyu dikh raha hai ??" asked umesh
"dolly phone nai utha rahi!!"
Saurav gabrate hue jawab deta hai!!
"phirse try kar..." sukku reply him
He call again but dolly didn't picked
"mujhe darr lag raha hai wo thik to hogina??"
"Saurav jiju kahi dolly di ko raaste me chakkar..."
"how blah jwalu... Kuch b mat bol... Kuch nai Hua higa unko!! " she shouted on jwala then "Saurav Tu Nishu ke number pe call kar" kirti said looking at saurav
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"aap sahi keh rahi ho dolly di... Agar usey phone karna hota to abtak kar deta!! Mein hi pagal Hu Jo abtak uske call ka wait kar rai.."
A drop of tear escaped from her eye...
She got up and said looking at dolly "Par bas... Ab aur nahi... Mein aur ansu nahi bahaungi... I will move on... Bhool jaungi usey jaise wo bhool gya hai mujhe..." she said wiping her tear
Dolly smiled as she thought forgetting Kabir will b good for nisha and their old nishu will be back.. happy and smiling one...
"dolly di i promise ab phone bajega na to Mein excited nai hongi... Ab Kabir ke phone ka intezar karna bandh... "
She said holding dolly's hand
Just then nisha's phone rang
And she hurried to pick the call as she always do...
But her smile faded seeing the caller id
Dolly hit her head with hand
"iss ladki ka kuch nai ho sakta!! "
Nisha cut the call irritated
He again called and she again rejected...
Dolly came to her put her hand on her shoulder.. She turned to her
"abhi promise kiya tune ... And see wats you doings Nishu!!"
Nisha bit her tongue
"I m sorry dolly di mein..."
"aise kaise chalega Nishu?? Tujhe Kabir ko apne dil senikalna hoga!! Tu kab tak..."
"kaise nikal du??"
She closed her eyes for a while
To control her tears
"nahi nikal sakti... Pyaar karti hu mein uss se... "
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"phirse kat diya"
Saurav said sadly and looked up
Everyone gave each other a known look as they knew wat it could be... They all knew very well wat might nisha be thinking and why she rejected the call
"Saurav... Tu b na.. Iss kirti ki baaton me ake Nishu ko call kar diya.."
Sukku hit on kirti's head she pushed him
They started fighting
"Hum sabko pata hai ki nisha kis phase se guraz rahi hai..."
"janta hu Umesh .. Par dolly..."
Saurav interrupted Umesh
"oho.. Tum dono ladna bandh karo... ur ap dono tension Lena!! Dolly di nishu ke sath hi hogi... Aur hamesha Ki tarah wohi baatein kar rai hongi..."
"exactly... Aman bhabi bilkul thik keh rahi hain... Wo nishu bro ko bulane gyi Thi but baato me lag gayi hongi!!" jwalu replied
"Toh ab kya kare??" Saurav asked
Bunty who was sitting silent from a long stood up and said
"agar wo log uper nai aa re to hum niche chalte hain..."
All looked at bunty then eachother and smiled
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In Nisha's room
Dolly hugged Nisha as she again started crying vulnerably...
"bas.. Bas.. Chup ho jaa.." she tried to hush her
Raah me Roshni ne kyu hai hath chhoda...
Iss taraf shaam ne kyu hai apna muh moda...
"Kyu dolly di?? Kyu mere sath aisa Hua??kyuuu??"
Yu ke Har subah ek beraham si raat ban gayi...
Kya Mein pyaar deserve nai karti?Kyu?Kyu mujhe hi pyaar me akelapan Mila??akhir Galati kya hai meri?jisse b pyaar Kiya wo..."
"Wo b apse equally pyaar karte hain..." said a voice
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To be continued...
Next part i.e. Part(b) will b uploaded in 3 days
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BIN TERE
part(b)
Dolly n nisha looked at source of voice to find jwala standing there with a smile on her face...
"aise Kyu dekh rai ho ap dono mujhe??arey me ye keh rai Thi Ki jitna nishu bro humse pyaar karti hain utna hi hum, yani Ki unki cousins , family b unse karti hai.."
She came inside n hugged both of them happily
Dolly also smiled
"i love u nishu bro" jwalu said
All cousins , Saurav and Aman also came in room and seeing jwala and dolly hugging nisha they also joined and they group hugged..
"aur hum sab tujhse bahut pyaar karte hain nishu" all said in unison
Nishu smiled with teary eyes
They broke the hug and was smiling at each other..
"Hum yahan ek dusre ko dekhke simle hi karne aye hain kya?"
Asked bunty innocently
"chalo na kuch game khelte hain sab sath me.." he added
They all sat to play passing the parcel
They all laughed n enjoyed playing the game... Nishu also laughed a Lil.. After so many days..
All were happy but Galati se jwalu said something which changed the happy atmosphere again in sad one...
"yad hai Kabir jiju k bday me b humne kitna enjoy kiya Tha?"
She said smilingly but all other faces become sad listening kabir's name
All looked at nisha to see her reaction she was all quiet
Jawala realised wat blunder she did
But now what?
Sukku tried to change topic by joking
"birthday party to mere friend arman ki sabse best Thi.. yaad hai .. Uski party me Galati se uske face pe pastery dalne Ki jagah Kisi aur pe dal di Thi meine aur chhup gya Tha phir wo bande ne Kisi aur pe fainki and poori party me sab ek dusre pe cake fainkne lage the phir" he laughed saying that but it didn't work on nisha
She was still silent .. Sukku stopped laughing..
They all looked at eachither not knowing wat to do now
She excused her self and went from there
"are nisha ruk kahan ja rai h" dolly di asked n tried stopping her but she didn't listen and went saying "mujhe kuch der akele rehna hai plzz"
As soon as she went out from room
All glared at jwala for taking kabir's name
"how blah Jwala.. Ye kya kiya tune? Tu Kyu liya Kabir ka naam? Tujhe pata hai na nisha.."
"Kriti meine janbhujh k nai kiya pata nai kaise Galati se.."
"bas ... Apas me ladne se kuch nai hoga.. promise karo agli bar koi Kabir ka names nai lega!!"
Said dolly di
All nodded
Viren tauji who was going from there heard kabir's name and came in room
"Kabir?? Tum log us dhoke baz ka naam b Kyu le rai ho??"
All got scared seeing viren tauji
"ab butth ban ke Kyu khate ho? Itna sabkuch kar Diya us Kabir ne hamari nishu k sath!! Aur tumlog aj b usey yaad karte ho??"
"papa wo hum.."
He showed his hand to dolly n stopped
"dolly mujhe kuch nai sunna!! Mujhe iss ghar me uss na layak ka naam b nai sunna!!"
"are tauji .. Baat to suno.. Humlog mere friend Kabir Ki baat kar re hain.. Mera new frnd h.. Usko hamari thodi help chiye"
Sukku winked at others n dolly continued
"haa papa, me b yahi bolrai Thi apko.. apne bekar me apna bp bada liya!!"
Tauji calm down a Lil bit hearing that
"kya karu beta Jab ye naam sunta hu na khoon kholta hai mera.. Wo din yaad Ata hai uska wo letter yaad Ata hai.."
Flashback
Nisha called them all to her house immediately..
She was crying on phone , so everyone got scared and rush to her place..
Laxmi went running to nisha who was sitting on sofa with a letter in her hand and tears in her eyes
"nishu .. Nishu kya Hua? Tu Ro Kyu rai hai??"
Laxmi asked holding her shoulders
"nisha tune achanak hame yahan Kyu bulaya? Aur Kabir .. Kabir kahan hai?" asked ramesha nisha cried even more hearing Kabir's name
"Nisha .. Rona bandh karo aur batao akhir Hua kya hai?" asked dadaji
She looked at dadu n looked down
Laxmi saw the letter in her hand and snatched it
She read the letter and dropped it in shock..
Ramesh picked the letter and read
( my sis told me that agar curser font me likhti to zyada real lagta but belive me ye letter padh ne layak nai hota phir 🤣
And waise b me IT engineering student hu to samaj lo likha nai tere hi kiya h coz I belive in typing n taking prinouts instead of writing 😆)
Everyone was shocked listening that..
They never ever have an idea that something like this can happen...
Nisha cried even more listen this letter
"wo chala gya maa .. Wo chala gya papa mujhe chhodke.. Hamesha ke liye..."
Dolly went to nisha and hugged her
She patted her back n tried to console her..
They took nisha home and Laxmi and dolly usko uske room le gye thoda khana khilaya zabardasti and made her sleep
All the elders were in courtyard
In deep thinking ...
Viren tauji said" me to hameha kehta Tha mat karo iss ladke pe bharosa !! Dhoka de jayega ye!! Par koi meri sunta hi kahan tha?" he said last line sarcastically
Ramesh was abt to reply him just then rukma came and said
"ye koi letter de gya hai gangwal family ke naam.."
"Lao rukma mujhe dikhao.." dadu said and rukmagave him the letter ..
He read silently and aftr him viren took the letter n read a loud
Flashback end
"Dikh gya na wo Kisi din to jaan le lunga me uski !!" said tauji
"papa , papa shant ho jaiye.." said uman holding him from both sides
Tauji took deep breath
And said
"Jo bhi ho dubara ye naam iss ghar me Mein nahi sunna chahta" he said looking at sukku
All nodded and he left from there...
All sighed...
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To be continued...
Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
he he 😆
ha wahi wala adi 🤣
but hero apna kabir hi hai 😉
but Shahid b mera fav h so don't imagine shahid here as aditya 😆
koi aur ko karle 🤣
or do i update with character sketch(photos)!?? 😉
Originally posted by: mishrialways
Ok shahid ko imagine nhi karungi
Photos for character bhi aacha h
Adi naam se jab we met ke baad pyaar ka dard wale adi ki yaad aati h
Usse karlu 😆
Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
aweee ty tani 😳
I m glad that u liked it so much...
ur wait will b over soon 😉
