THE GROTESQUE PHANTOM ||PART (C) - PAGE 10

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I Know some of you wanted romantic OS of NiBir, but the NiBir romance season is already going on! so, to add on some special effects to this season, i came up with this not at all fantastic idea, so, if anyone happens to not like this, don't throw chappals or eggs at me, as i am writing almost after 2-3 months, i know it won't be so mindblowing, but just give it a try"

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PART (A)

He woke up from his sleep, as he felt a little choked, he got up and sat straight, and started coughing, he picked up the glass of water kept on the side table, but he realized that it was empty, he looked at the other side of the bed to see her sleeping peacefully, he took the glass and walked out of their room, to drink some water, he slowly tiptoed into the kitchen making no noise so that her sleep doesn't get disturbed.

He went into the kitchen, kept the empty glass on the kitchen slab and walked towards the refrigerator, he opened the refrigerator and bent down to take out a bottle of water from the lower section, as he took the bottle and drank a little of it, he heard a sort of sound which implied of something breaking, he got startled. He immediately closed the door of the refrigerator, and looked at the source of that voice. He walked further and noticed that, the glass which he kept on the kitchen slab fell down on the floor and broke into pieces; he sighed in relief and bent down on the floor to pick those pieces up.

As he started picking some, he felt something pass by him, he looked up and wandered his eyes here and there all over the place but nothing was there. He picked those pieces up and went to throw them in the dustbin, he pulled out the garbage holder out, and threw those pieces in it, and closed it again.

He walked out of the kitchen in a hurry, when he fell down directly on the floor as he stumbled with something.

Ooouuucchhh..."he winced in pain. He looked here and there to find the thing with which he stumbled. Blood oozed out from his foot as something very sharp pricked near his ankle bone. He stood up and somehow walked towards sink in the kitchen and took out a piece of cloth from the kitchen drawer, he made the cloth a little wet by keeping it under running water of the sink tap. He closed the tap and walked back to the living room and sat there on the couch, and started wiping of the blood with the wet cloth, with just a little of light from his mobile phone, which was enough for lighting his surroundings, a big drop of blood managed its way down to the floor while he was cleaning his wound with that wet cloth , which never went unnoticed by Kabir. He paid no heed to it, and got busy in treating his wound. WHEN He felt some cool air pass by and warmth of someone's presence near him. He was feeling some weird sensations within him, like of someone nearing him, dangerously! His eyes were not at all steady, he was looking to the floor, not able to look anywhere else due to fear, he gulped down his saliva due to the excess pressure exerted by the currents passing within him, and sweat dripped down his face, as he felt that warmth nearing him. This warmth was not usual to his; there was something strange with it, something very strange! His hands started trembling without his consent. He joined his hands together tightly for support, trying to stop the trembling, he felt as if an earthquake occurred not with the surroundings but with him. He closed his eyes, when suddenly, he heard a sound, completely horrifying, and which wasn't at all normal, nor was it a voice of a human.

Yhhhuuur ghoii to daaaiii..." it wasn't a sound in particular but a whisper, a horrifying whisper; he closed his years with those trembling hands , as that whisper was like a gunshot to his ears, though being soft. He opened his eyes, as he felt no voice further, only to witness the blood stain disappearing from the floor, as if someone wiped it. He was dumbstruck due to fear, damn horrifying that scene was for him. His heart skipped several beats, he wanted to run away from the house, but she was there inside sleeping alone, he stood up somehow, with the support of the sofa, and he turned around. When his eyes fell on the big mirror fixed on the wall before him, displaying a dark silhouette beside him , which neither showed it to be a woman nor a man, and had his head tilted on kabir's shoulder. Maybe, this was the most dreadful incident in his life time. He tried to run, but his legs weren't moving, he felt fixed to the spot, but he however dragged himself out of there, though his legs ached profusely , he again looked into the mirror somehow and found that there was nothing, and the next thing he remembered was that someone jumped on him, and he fell on the floor.

He started screaming out of fear, he closed his eyes, and tried to protect himself, but he was being strangled to death, he was not able to breathe, as that weight on him caused to get his wind pipes choked. And he within a few more minutes, he felt his surroundings darkening a little more, and he fell there unconscious.

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{PART B}

{PART C}

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Annie ye cheating hai......vote LOVE ko zaida mila tha na...but koi nahi HORROR ki bhi apna maaza hai...😉

Ye Kabiraa k sath esa kyu hota hai...😆

Awesome update...👍🏼

Please continue soon & thanx for the pm...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Baba this is cheating aise point pe aake update chodne ki addat kab sudhergi aapki😳
Chalo now continue soon😳
And you still have that magic in you☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Baba this is cheating aise point pe aake update chodne ki addat kab sudhergi aapki😳

Chalo now continue soon😳
And you still have that magic in you☺️


thankoo mumma!😳😳😆

@ BOLD kabhi nahi, kamse kam iss life time me to nahii!😆😆 suspense banaake ke bigadne ki meri puraani aadat hain🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aha121

Nice start
Update soon


ty..yeah, will update soon!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tum kabhi nhi sudhrogi behna *rolling my eyes at u*... hmesha kabir ko ese darati ho ki jaan nikal jaati h meri... mjhe us question wale post se pehle hi malum tha ki tum likhogi horror hi... genetic ho gya h horror genere tumhara 🤣 chalo ab fatafat update dena
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Tum kabhi nhi sudhrogi behna *rolling my eyes at u*... hmesha kabir ko ese darati ho ki jaan nikal jaati h meri... mjhe us question wale post se pehle hi malum tha ki tum likhogi horror hi... genetic ho gya h horror genere tumhara 🤣 chalo ab fatafat update dena


horrifying kabir is in my genes behna🤣🤣🤣 i love making him the "ATTRACTCROW" every time🤣🤣🤣 thought of trying it on sukku or saurav but kabir beechme aagaya!🤣 i want mishri in darr sabko lagta hain after yeh hain aashiqui!☺️☺️☺️ no wonder DSLH has been gifted with wonderful writers, and their combination with mishri would be PERFECTO !😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
horrifying + intrusting
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TASYAM

awesome update
horrifying + intrusting
update soon


thankyou tasyam!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeh kya tha yaha pe end kyu kiya 😕
Superb start annie 👏
Update soon

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