THE GROTESQUE PHANTOM ||PART (C) - PAGE 10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Horror!! My favourite genre!!

I totally loved it Annie!! U rocked it! 👏

One thing that's very crucial in horror stories is the detailing, because every tiny thing matters!

And you have so beautifully described the scene, every small movement of Kabir, his emotions and those strange vibes he felt!

The creepy whisper, his blood dissapearing from its spot on the floor, the silhouette tilting its head over his shoulder, him feeling rooted to the spot and trying to drag himself despite of it, and that creature/entity pouncing on him were such bone-chillingly awesome moments!

Eee so excited to read this!

Please continue soonish!! 😃

P.S: Loved the title! How do you think of such amazing ones?!

Originally posted by: poornima_15

even though u wrote after long time the magic in ur writing will always be there ... 😊 it was an awesome update .. suspense me chor dia update soon 😃

Originally posted by: star.angel

Annie this is cheatinggg
This is cheating
Haha
But Annie I must say ur writing skills are jus fabbb
I love ittt

Originally posted by: Shats

Haila Annie yeh kya tha 🥱 🥱
Hayee re bichara mera(sorry sabka) kabira 😆 😆
Whisper 😲 🥱 dt shoulder wala part barah khatanaak tha 😕 😕
Khatarnaakam story 🥱 😲
But aise point pe sake suspense me chor dia 😡 😡 koi nahi iska bhi apna maza hai 😆 😉
Update soonest

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

wow.. horror story ..
amazing start..
update it soon..

Originally posted by: sam_premc

hehe...i don't know what cheating is! i never ever cheated in my life " (*pun*)🤣🤣

glad that you loved it!😃

thankyou so much, and will be updating this soon!😊

Originally posted by: star.angel

Annie update kab milay ga????????
Jaaan hathailii pa atkii Hui ha 😕 😕
Me thinking : kiya ye bhoot ha ??? Ya nisha??
Ni ni nisha to soi Hui ha ???
Phir ye kon ha??
Annie KO to love ka kaha that??? Yahan par love ho sakta ha !!!
Ni ni ye horror he ha 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

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Annie ye cheating hai......vote LOVE ko zaida mila tha na...but koi nahi HORROR ki bhi apna maaza hai...😉

Ye Kabiraa k sath esa kyu hota hai...😆

Awesome update...👍🏼

Please continue soon & thanx for the pm...🤗

Originally posted by: sam_premc

🤣🤣ye horror hi hain...par kya pata bhoot ko kabir se pyaar hogaya to!?😉kuch bhi ho sakta hain yahaan...ye duniya bohot badii jhol hain!😛🤣🤣