THE GROTESQUE PHANTOM ||PART (C) - PAGE 10

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Shanz

@Shanaya1526

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Omg it back Annie can't belive hahaha haha yaar suspense main chod diya not fair ...jaldi update do

Quote

Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Awesome 👏

Waiting eagerly...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Horror!! My favourite genre!!

I totally loved it Annie!! U rocked it! 👏

One thing that's very crucial in horror stories is the detailing, because every tiny thing matters!

And you have so beautifully described the scene, every small movement of Kabir, his emotions and those strange vibes he felt!

The creepy whisper, his blood dissapearing from its spot on the floor, the silhouette tilting its head over his shoulder, him feeling rooted to the spot and trying to drag himself despite of it, and that creature/entity pouncing on him were such bone-chillingly awesome moments!

Eee so excited to read this!

Please continue soonish!! 😃

P.S: Loved the title! How do you think of such amazing ones?!

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

Quote

poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

even though u wrote after long time the magic in ur writing will always be there ... 😊 it was an awesome update .. suspense me chor dia update soon 😃

Quote

Aimna khan

@star.angel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Annie this is cheatinggg
This is cheating
Haha
But Annie I must say ur writing skills are jus fabbb
I love ittt

Quote

Shats

@Shats

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Haila Annie yeh kya tha 🥱 🥱
Hayee re bichara mera(sorry sabka) kabira 😆 😆
Whisper 😲 🥱 dt shoulder wala part barah khatanaak tha 😕 😕
Khatarnaakam story 🥱 😲
But aise point pe sake suspense me chor dia 😡 😡 koi nahi iska bhi apna maza hai 😆 😉
Update soonest

Quote

shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

wow.. horror story ..
amazing start..
update it soon..

Quote

@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Yeh kya tha yaha pe end kyu kiya 😕
Superb start annie 👏
Update soon

yeah...thankyou! will update soon sujay!😊

Originally posted by: Crazysoha
Awesome Annie loved it..
Kitna scary tha babaji suspense mein chod dia 🤔
Very well written 👏
Update soon thanks for the pm😳

thankyou soha!😳 will update ASAP!

Originally posted by: Amina...
It was Awesome Annie ...
It was Scary though ... But Very Well Written ...
Loved it ...
Please Continue Soon ...

thankyou amina! will continue soon!😳

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Amazing part Annie! I know you divided the OS into two parts because of the suspense 😆
Continue soon... I don't like being in suspense for long...

P.S. read karke dimaag main cousins hi aa rahe hai 😛

picture abhi baaki hain mere dost! hehe...will update soon! n thankyou!😆

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01
Oh my god ..!! So terrifying
But ...beech mein kyun chod diya babaji...
Curiosity bada di ..

ye meri aadat kabhi nahi jaayegi...audience ko suspense me rakhne me bht mazaa aata hain! hehe...anyways thankyou!😆😆

Quote

@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: nibir143
This s not fair you stopped at very interesting point cont soon

hehe...thankyou! will update soon! 😆

BTW may i know your name?

Originally posted by: Niha0606
abbb jaldhi update kar warna😡😡😡
welcome back pothi 😃missed u🤗🤗🤗🤗
i think maine update...update aisa hi poora page fill kiya par abb thak update nahi mila 😡😡
abb phirse iss story ko aisa math karo
but ur amazing writer yaar we can imagine things very clearly👏

i missed you too daadee!😳

bht jaldi update karungi saare stories, almost issi week me...itne days se exams me phasee thi, now i can update!😆

thanyou so much for the comment!😃

Originally posted by: janvi1018
Full of suspence...''
Waiting for next part

thankyou janvi!😃

Originally posted by: naucfan
Awesome one I m waiting update soon...

thankyou anuska!😃

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Yeh kya tha annie baba
jaan loge kya meri
kitna dara diya
bechara kabir itna cute sa baccha hai aap hamesha uss ke piche bhoot chod dete ho

mishri in dslh
mein dekh toh lungi par phir daar ke maar neend nhi aaegi

mujhee cute se logon ke peeche bhoot chodnee me bht mazaa aata hain...warna readers ko mazaa kaise aayega!😆😆

i sincerely love DSLH, n would love to see em' in it!😳

and thankyou for the comment!😃