NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Nisha read the note of kabir😊
Viraj inspiring nisha to fulfill her dream😊
She thought wat kabir said to her😊 n hit that bull eye😊
Kaira understanding the insecurities of viraj n trying to free him from DAT...
Finally the entry of aadhya😊
Loved d way she said looking at kabir...aadhya mere n kabir ki beti h
Viraj was fully confused...but his confusion was vanishing when he saw nibir n aadhya taking selfies❤️
Update fast

Thanks Nimmi tere 3 comments ne dil khush kar diya😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shats

Awwwiiieee
Niya dt was chooo cute update 😳 😳
Aadhyaa ❤️
Luved dt part yeh humari beti hai 😳 😳
Hotel scene ki yaad dila di 😳 😳
Kabira j lol
Viraj 🤣
I wonder sabke dimaag me kya chal raha hoga when she said humari shaadi nahi hui hai but harmari beti hai 🤣 sorry can't help all thanx to my GM 🤣
Aww dt selfie part 😳
Loved it 😳 😳

Thanks Shats😳
K's will always be K 🤣
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Such an adorable update it was Niya!

A lovely start!
The description you gave of Nisha - Kabir - Aadhya's relation ; how they raised her up, Nisha keeping Kabir updated about everything concerned with their princess was very good!. Aadhya missing Kabir though they spoke everyday brought out the true essence of a father - daughter relationship! No matter how much we talk to our dad on phone / through video call, nothing can replace that affectionate embrace he gives us that can take away all our stress/tensions in a jiffy!
Also, Nisha encouraging Kabir to fullfill his dream showed the beauty of their relation, where the other becomes the source of strength and encouragement when one feels down!
The next scene of Viraj and Kaira asking Nisha to give shooting a try, so that she can rekindle her interest in archery / shooting, and she remembering Kabir's words just before she hit the bull's eye was a very nice moment!
The Nisha-Aadhya-Kabir and Viraj-Kaira scenes that followed was lovely!!
From the point where Nisha hugs a scared Aadhya to the very end where all the doubts Viraj had regarding Kabir got cleared seeing the adorable three infront of him was superb! Everything about the scenes: the emotions, dialogues, expressions were written flawlessly!
One moment which is my favourite here is, when Kaira asks Nisha if Aadhya is her daughter and Nisha a little doubtlful at first whether to confess or no but then proudly declares that Aadhya is Kabir and her daughter! The subtle way in which Kabir assured her through his eyes was so so beautiful! ❤️
Nisha wanting to spend time with her princess and Kabir, she promising Kaira that she'l tell everything to her in detail, Viraj sharing his concerns about KN with Kaira, her explaination and finally Viraj's doubts getting cleared on seeing how happy KN and Aaradhya are together were all very good moments!
Glad that Viraj doesn't harbour any romantic feelings for Nisha 😆
A splendid update on the whole! 👏
Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Thank you so much Vishrutha, I keep waiting for your comments 😳
They always bring a smile on my face.😊
Its true a lovely embrace from a loved ones gives another kind of peace to the soul❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naucfan

Aww so shweet awesome update...

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Such a cute niya

Totally loving
Loved the princess's 😳
And nibir with princess
So cute yaar
Viraj ki insecurity but it happens 😃
But the trio scene was sooo cute loved it 😳😳😳
And update jaldi daina
Tarpana nii 😆

Thank you for the comment😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

I read both part today at school... thanks y didn't comment yesterday and today.. but both r nice... I love it

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Yipee, new update😆

Its a very random one but hope you like it😳

Leave your lovely comments behind, as usual I haven't proof read it😆

So please ignore the mistakes😳

Enjoy reading😳


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Chapter 5


Nisha and Kabir came out of the academy after asking Saurav to drop Nisha's scotty home as the were going in Kabir's car. Kabir like a good gentleman opened the passenger side door for Nisha as she sat in there with Adhyaa in her lap.

He then seated himself in the driver's seat and he started driving the car

"Princess, camp kaisa tha?" Nisha asked as she placed those cute little fringes from her forehead behind her ears.

"Acha" Adhyaa replied excitedly

"Thoda ki bohut acha?" Nisha asked again

"Bohhhuuuttt acha" Adhyaa replied in an animated way by opening her hands and trying to show how much fun she had, Nisha and Kabir both giggled at her excitement and Nisha couldn't stop herself from planting a kiss on her chubby cheek.

"Mujhe bhi chahiye kissee" Kabir pouted and looked at Nisha cutely, she signalled him to come near and placed a kiss on his cheek too

"Princess, wahan aapne konse konse animals dekhe?" Kabir asked Adhyaa because he could sense her excitement about telling her parents about her very first camp!!

"Deer... lion... klo.. klo.. "

"Crocodile?!" Nisha completed as Adhyaa was finding it difficult to pronounce it and Adhyaa nodded her head positively

"Ol (Aur) Dadda ko dekha.." She exclaimed excitedly and clapped her tiny hands...

"Dadda ko? Kabir tu gaya tha isske camp?" Nisha asked Kabir to which he replied negatively nodding his head

"Kal raat hi toh wapas aaya hun tere saath" Kabir replied

"Phir Princess ne tujhe kaise dekha?" she asked again and both looked at Adhyaa who was just staring at her parents simultaneously

"Princess aapne Dadda ko dekha tha?" Nisha asked again to confirm and Adhyaa nodded her head vigorously

"Kahan pe?" Kabir asked

"Cage main..." Adhyaa replied innocently

"Cage main?" they both asked together

"Aur Dadda cage main kar kya rahe the?" Kabir asked again, he wanted to know what his daughter had imagined about him

"Banana kha rahe the.." Adhyaa answered and giggled

"Huh?!" Kabir was confused

"Adhyaa, sach sach batao, kise dekha tha aapne?" Nisha asked her in a serious tone but she somewhere knew what her daughter was trying to say

"Maine monkey ko dekha tha Mamma" Adhyaa gave them a proper reply this time and Nisha couldn't stop herself from bursting into fits of laugher

"Toh Dadda ko kahan dekha?" Kabir exclaimed he wanted to know why she had said that she saw him

"Mamma aapko Bandar bolti hai ... Ol (aur) Bandar is Monkey..." she took a pause to gulp the saliva and continued "Isse (Issliye) Dadda ko dekha..."

Hearing her explanation Nisha started laughing more loudly and even Adhyaa joined her though the little baby had no idea why her mother was laughing and Kabir was speechless. He stopped the car and parked it in a corner and folded his hands across his chest looking at his cuties laugh. Seeing his expressions Nisha started to laugh more

"Has le, dekh tu kya kya seekha rahi hai humari beti ko, huh" he scowled

Nisha tried controlling her laughter and spoke "Kabir, ussne toh sach hi kaha..."

She again started laughing and Kabir knew that they won't stop so he raised his hands in air signalling that he gave up and continued driving.

After a while of laughing Nisha continued asking Adhyaa about her trip and Adhyaa kept replying excitedly

"Mamma, Alyaan (Aryaan) chocis (chocolates) laya tha... pal (par) maine nahi khai.." Adhyaa said happily as she was proud that she didn't have those chocolates

"Good girl Adhyaa, chocis se teeth kharab hojate hai" Kabir said and patted her cheek and she gave him a bright smile

"Waise yeh Alyaan... Aryaan hai kon?" Kabir asked curiously as he had no idea about who Aryaan was

"Vo tujhe yaad hai Mr. Shah ke yahan naye kirayedaar aane wale the? Aryaan unka hi beta hai, Adhyaa ke saath hi hai usske class main abhi ek week phele hi ussne school join kiya hai" Nisha replied casually but Kabir being a father was not that convinced about a GUY being his daughter's friend.

"Chalo kuch khate hai" he exclaimed as he parked the car right outside their favourite restaurant, they took their seats and gave their regular order of a sandwich and cold coffee along with a simple bread butter jam with hot chocolate for Adhyaa

"Waise yeh Aryaan hai kaisa?" Kabir asked as he wanted to get all the information about Aryaan

"Cutee" Adhyaa replied which made him chock his bite of sandwich

"Kya kaha issne?" he exclaimed in an ultimate shock

"Kabir, vo bacha hai cute hi hoga na" Nisha said casually as she fed Adhyaa

"Mujhe milna padega iss ladke se" he muttered under his breath and Nisha giggled seeing him

"Nisha" came a voice that made Nisha turn around, a lady of somewhat elder came to Nisha

"Hi Priya" Nisha said "Kabir, yeh Priya hai Aryaan ki Mamma" she introduced the two

"Alyaan?" Adhyaa inquired cutely about her friend which again made Kabir mad

"Vo raha, aapni Maasi ke saath" Priya pointed out at Aryaan who entered with his Maasi and came running to Adhyaa

"Hi Aryaan" Kabir faked a smile and greeted Aryaan but he got a great response from Aryaan who didn't even bother to look at him, Nisha giggled at his expressions

"Isski to main..." Kabir cursed Aryaan under his breath and continued having his sandwich

After a while of chatting Priya took a leave and Nisha and Kabir too left paying the bill. They were in the car and Kabir was full angry

"Kabir, kya hua?" Nisha asked as she patted Adhyaa to sleep for a while till they reached home and she knew that she must be tired too.

"Mujhe vo Aryaan pasand nahi... dekha nahi kaise behave kar raha tha mere saath" Kabir frowned and replied

"Kabir, vo bacha hai tu bhi kya uski baat ka bura maan raha hai?" Nisha exclaimed at his childishness

"Meri beti uss bacche ko cute bol rahi thi Nisha, Adhyaa is not going to be friends with that guy" he replied in a stern voice

"Kabir tu pagal hogaya hai" Nisha chuckled at him

"Haan hun, main nahi chahta ki meri beti kisi bhi ladke ke saath friendship kare.." he said in an adamant voice

"Agar yeh baat mere Papa ne kahi hoti toh aaj hum yeh baat nahi kar rahe hote Kabir" Nisha replied in a stern voice

Kabir knew that he was doing over but he still acted to be firm on his decision and soon they were at home.

"Adhyaa" Jwala exclaimed as she saw them entre the room and ran to them, hearing her Adhyaa woke up a little scared but Nisha patted her back and calmed her down, Jwala muttered a sorry and then took Adhyaa in her arms

"Maacchhii" Adhyaa exclaimed cutely and hugged Jwala with her small hands

"Nishu bro, main isse khenle ke liye leke ja rahi hun ok!" Jwala said and within minutes she disappeared from there. Nisha also took Kabir to his room and made him sit on the bed

"Kabir, kya hua hai tujhe?" Nisha asked him as she knew that something is wrong with him

"Main nahi chahata ki Princess ko kuch ho.." he replied looking down as he couldn't meet eyes with Nisha

"Usse kya hoga Kabir, hum hai na use har mushkil se bachane ke liye" Nisha replied as she made him look in her eyes

"Par phir bhi.." Kabir was at loss of words to express his feelings

"Tu Aryaan ko leke pareshaan hai?" Nisha asked and he nodded his head slightly

"Tu uski tension mat le, maine sab pata kiya hai usske baad hi Adhyaa ko use friendship karne di hai" Nisha replied and this gave some relief to Kabir but a father can never be completely tension free about his daughter no matter what happens and same was with Kabir, Nisha understood this too and just placed her head on his shoulder!

"I love you Nisha" Kabir said as he knew that it was the right time to confess his feelings, Nisha smiled and replied "Janti hun, aur main bhi iss MONKEY se bohut pyaar karti hun"

Nisha said and giggled as they remembered Adhyaa's comment

"Nisha, meri beti ko mere bare main ulta seedha mat bata samjhi" Kabir warned her but she was in a mischievous mood

"Main toh sirf sach hi kehti hun Kabir, abh tu Bandar hai toh hai hi na" Nisha said and started laughing she got up and started running with Kabir chasing her, the entire room was echoing with their laughter and finally both laid on the bed laughing clutching their stomach.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ADHYAA!!! she is the most adorable child
this update was me was cuteness overloaded
bechara kabir 🤣
aadhyaa ne bandar dekha 🤣 🤣
kabir protectime for adhyaa was such a sweet thing niyu
I loved it a lot
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Update Niya...

Adhyaa is so cute...😆

Kabiraa bandaar...🤣

Kabiraa being protective for Adhyaa shows that how much he loves Adhyaa...😊

Luved the NIBIR convo...😳...n the confession...❤️

Continue soon & thanx for the pm...🤗
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Niyu awesome update
so cute
I love this small family of nibir and aadhya
aadhya telling about trip
kabir monkey
bechara par kuch nhi kar sakta
kabir being protective for aadhya was well described
he does not want to lose her
nisha understanding him and making him understand and then the cute confession was cherry on top

Loving this niyu


Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago

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