NiBir FF-3rd joker:A mystery [part-6b updated]

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
awesome update
waiting for nibir meet

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Nice chapter 😊

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Sirat711
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Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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another story congratulations 😊 and another nice update 😊

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01
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Update soon !!

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: poornima_15
another story congratulations 😊 and another nice update 😊

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Sarthak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Well nice try...

But one thing I should point out that...write the dialogues according to CBI...I mean Saurav's dialogue were looking like as if he was some local watchman .I think u seriously need to research about the subject before writing on it. Just a suggestion from my side, I hope u will not feel bad about it.

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: nibir143
Awesome chapter dear cont soon

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
Well nice try...
But one thing I should point out that...write the dialogues according to CBI...I mean Saurav's dialogue were looking like as if he was some local watchman .I think u seriously need to research about the subject before writing on it. Just a suggestion from my side, I hope u will not feel bad about it.

Thanks Sarthak😃
Firstly I will never feel bad if someone point out me as it becomes opportunity for me to do some improvement in me about dialogue of saurav as you point out so it's a part of my story 😃

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

PART-2
ARRIVAL TO BOMBAY CIRCUS
AND
A MEETING

AT 6:40pm
Saurav pick up Nisha from her house and both left for circus.They reached there exact at 7:00pm both took their seats and start watching circus Nisha not have so much intrust in circus so she was getting little bored while Saurav was enjoying through the core of it. Now its time for clowns to show their act some mini height clowns enter on stage and start their act Saurav was laughing while Nisha was noticing each and every clown and the case of Aryan Sharma flashed in front of her eyes
Nisha(monologue)-I think ish case mai kuch bohot bada chut rha hai I have to go Aryan's apartment for more evidences
Its time for all clowns join mini heighted clowns. Nisha was totally lost in noticing each and every clown.
After some 5min show overs. Saurav enjoyed it a lot while not even a single smile came on Nisha's face as she was again and again thinking about clowns and case.
Saurav-Nisha chale
Nisha(teranse broken)-hmm
They left circus area
In way
Saurav-kya yaar Nisha itna acha show tha clowns ka act kitna funny tha phir bhi tere face par ek smile tak nhi ayi
Nisha-kuch nhi Saurav ajj bas mood nhi tha
Saurav-I think tu sachi mai pagal hogai hai aur ek baat toh mujeh definitely pata hai ki tu abhi bhi Mr.Aryan Sharma ke bare main soch rhi hai
Nisha(lost somewhere)-hmm
Saurav-nhi sudhregi
After some 5min they reached Nisha's house Saurav bid her bye and took leave from their.

Nisha's house
Nisha ring the bell but was totally lost in clowns and case
Lakshmi open door and took a look on Nisha
Lakshmi-Nishu are you ok
Nisha(teranse brocken)-ha ma mujeh kya hoga
Lakshmi-toh phir baar baar yeh bell kyu bja rhi hain
Nisha notice that her finger which was pressed on switch of bell
Nisha-oops sorry ma
Nisha stepped in to avoid Lakshmi to tell her about case. Bunty and Jwala came towards her
Bunty-Nishu di show kaisa tha
Nisha-acha tha
Jwala-aur clowns ka act kaisa tha
on word clown Nisha again lost in those things clowns and case. She don't know why but word clown make her notice on case and clowns
Jwala (shacking Nisha)-Nishu di bolona
Nisha(again teranse brocken)-acha tha
Umesh notice these all things but thought to ask her later and leave from there

AT MORNING 5:00am
Nisha get up and came out of house in her cycling dress she took her cycle and took leave those things were again and again flashing in front of her eyes suddenly two cute puppies came in front of her cycle and she applied break with all her might as cycle was in speed she put her legs down from paddle and cycle stops. Cycle was just inch apart from those puppies. A boy of 24year came in front of her cycle and pick up those puppies
Boy-miss dhyan kha tha apka
Nisha-I am really sorry I was lost somewhere
Boy-Its ok this happens but next time be carefull
Nisha-sure
Boy was about to leave from their but Nisha stopped him
Nisha-hey you are one of the clown of Bombay circus na
Boy was little bit shocked as its difficult for anyone to find out real face of a clown because of its makeup
Boy-ya but how you know that I am one of the clown of Bombay circus
Nisha-beth kar baat kre
Boy nobbed Nisha smile and got down from her cycle and both started walking togather.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago

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