NiBir FF-3rd joker:A mystery [part-6b updated]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Anshu yeh kaisa prologue tha

kuch bataya hi nhi

Cont soon

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Very nice start !!!

Thanks dear😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
nyc prologue
update d first part soon.

Thanks dear😃

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Nice start.. Thoda intro to de dete 😔

Thanks dear😃
sorry wo I know prologue is not so good 😔

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: alisha17
Interesting prologue
Can't wait for update
Thnku for the pm

Thanks dear😃

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
Quite weird prologue
My story title is bigger than that..🤣
And one more thing please check out for grammatical errors...
Update soon..

Thanks dear😃
well I know prologue is not so good...😔
and a big Thanks to tell me my mistakes as I want to know what mistakes I am doing😃

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Anshu yeh kaisa prologue tha
kuch bataya hi nhi
Cont soon

sorry I know prologue is not so good..😔.
will continue soon...

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: naucfan
Nice prologue dear...

Thanks princes😃

Quote

ANUSKA

@anuska1203

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: TASYAM

Thanks princes😃

Ur welcs...

Quote

Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

PART-1
A HOLIDAY

CBI Branch
At 12:00 pm

Adheer- ok guyz ajkeliye itna kafi hai tomorrow is your holiday you people can enjoy because we need your mind fresh by which you all can work more hours so we will meet day after tomorrow at morning 7:00 am tab tak keliye good bye
everybody(in unison)-good bye sir
Saurav(to Nisha)-bas kar Nishu hogya ajj ke liye itna kafi hai
Nisha-Saurav 15min baad
Saurav-bas kar Nishu tubhi kis Aryan Sharma ki death ya murder ke evidences dhoond rhi hai mushkil seh ek din ki chuti mili hai ab jaldi se chal nhi toh agar ish khadoosh ka mood badlana toh phir kal ki bhi chuti cancel kardega
Nisha-Saurav yeh koi aisa vaisa case nhi hai yeh Aryan ek new comer actor hai aur achanak se isne 15jan ki night ko fasi lga li kuch log bol rhethe ki Aryan ki chilane aur rone ki awaj ai thi in bato se lagta hai ki yeh murder hai par agar hum evidences dekhe toh hume lgega ki yeh ek suside hai mujeh kuch samajh nhi arha isliye mai chahti hu ki uske apartment mai ek baar evidences ke liye checking phir se ho
Saurav-simple usne fasi lga li hai kyunki ushe koi badi film ya aur kuch mai acting karne ka chance nhi mila hoga aur rone aur chilane ki awajj kuch aise ai hogi ki usne fasi lgane se pehla roya hoga aur fasi lgate wakt chilaya hoga
Nisha-Saurav ishliye tujhse bolti hu ki evidences ki file aur kuch case se related files padh liya kar Aryan ne do badi film par sign kiya tha jiski shooting chal rhi thi aur toh aur vo kisi bade purane actor ka beta bhi hai
Saurav- yeh lo actor ka beta actor
Nisha- shut up Saurav dimag khrab karna band kar
Saurav-mai tab tak tera dk karunga jab tak tu mere sath nhi chalti
Nisha-oh my god chal
Nisha closed her computer system keep all the files under dex lock her cabin and left with Saurav

AT PARKING

Saurav-kya re Nisha itni achi post par hai CBI branch mai hai ghar toh bohot acha hai par tu hai ki in cheezo ki kadar hi nhi karti
Nisha rolled her eyes and sit on her vespa
Nisha-ab kya hogya
Saurav sit at her back and Nisha start her scooty
Saurav-tujeh pta hai tujeh parking mai entry kaise marni chahie
Nisha-kaise
Saurav-aise ki tu office aygi apni brand new frari mai car se utregi aur apne sun glaces utaregi par teri entry kuch aisi hoti hai tu office ati hai apni old khatara vespa pe vespa seh utarti hai ushe stand par khada karti hai aur phir apna helmet utarti hai behen kuch toh rahisi dikha diya kar
Nisha-kya re Saurav tujeh pta haina ki mujeh show off karna acha nhi lgta
Saurav-toh yeh bhi na dikhao ki tum gareeb ho ameer bap ki ameer beti jise show off krna acha nhi lgta balki inhe apni garibi dikhane mai intrust hai jo ki yeh hai nhi
Nisha stopped her scooty
Saurav-sorry bcha samajh kar maf kar do
Nisha-aju baju dekh tera ghar agya
Saurav-oh thank you
Nisha-my pleasure and bye
Nisha was about to start her scooty but Saurav stopped her
Nisha-ab kya hai
Saurav-vo mai kal Bombay circus ja rha hu tu chalegi
Nisha-acha vahi na jo Auranzeb road par joh new theater khula hai wha se left turn lekar seedhe-seedhe jate hai aur phir left turn lekar jo bada sa tent aur something tent like structure hai vhi na
Saurav-description nhi manga tha ki voh kha hai maine bas yhi poocha tha ki chalegi ya nhi case solve karkar kar tera dimag kharab hogya hai itni si baat ke liye koi itna bda desciption thodi na deta hai tubhi na Nisha
Nisha-bas bas mai a rhi hu
Saurav-mai tujeh 6:40 par lena avunga aur tickets pehle hi book kar lunga
Nisha-ok chal bye
Saurav-bye
Nisha start scooty and left

TO BE CONTINUED...

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 ... 15

NiBir FF-3rd joker:A mystery [part-6b updated] - Page 3

Related Topics

Explore Topics