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Nikhad003

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

THANKKKS AAA TOOON! Awww I am tooo haaapppyyy! I will update soon just be with my story..Hope you are having fun!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Read all the parts together...superb updates...sorry for late comment...Continue soon...😊

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paru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

superb update dear
loved it soo much

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alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Lovely update

Thnku for the pm

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Amina

@Nibirlove_amu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Awesome update😊
Update soon😊

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Nikhad🤗

Lovely prologue👏😃

Short and sweet 😳

There is nobody who can write such amazingly sweet and adorable Nibir stories with so many characters that u begin to love every character equally😳😳

Love Nisha and Aman's bond and the way Nishu was teasing them😃

Nisha and Kabir's families were family friends and Nibir were besties in childhhood😃

This fact reminds me of Growing up with You😃

Umesh and Aman had dreamt of each other as soulmates. Nice😃

Vij and Singhs lost contact but left no stoe unturned to locate each other. Aww😳 True friendship indeed😉

Really excited for the next part🤗

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Chapter 1: Amazing chapter Nikhad😳👍🏼

Loved the way Kabir came running to hug her but then stopped midway 😆 He is too cute😳

Loved the interaction of Nibir😳

So both Nibir do not remember their childhoot but have stories about from their siblings and parents hence are excited to meet each other😃

Umesh's pet name is Bhattu😆 Cute😆

I love the part where after a point both of them dont know what to talk about😊 So relatable😉

Loved the way Ritesh was teasing Kabir😆

Absolutely loved the cousins interaction with Nibir😃 It was so adorable😳

Love Kabir's bond with Dolly and the way Dolly exclaims that Kabir and others will always remain kids for them😳 Reminds me of my cousin who is almost 10 yrs elder to me and exclaims how we are like kiddos to her😊 Kabir teasing Dolly😆

So Kabir and company are having a stayover at Nishu's house. Love the way the Vij kids are so down to earth and have no airs about themselves😊

That last part where Umesh says bye and Aman blushes and Nibir noticing this was super cute and adorable😳🤗

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Chapter 2- A delightful read😳

Loved the Singh sisters bond. Kirti and Aman teasing Nisha was adorable😳

Ritesh staring at Kirti and Kabir leaving no opportunity to tease him was super cute😳

That eye doctor reference was funny 😆

Ritesh admiring Kirti so much that he went blank in the middle of charades was so adorable😳 Kabir noticing this and then teasing them was hilarious😆

Nisha hitting Kabir with cushions during charades because he was cheating and Kabir trying to act innocent was adorableness overload😳🤗

When he made that baby face, I could imagine NAUC wala Kabir with his puppy face😆 That moment was just cuteness overload😳

Nibir romance in Aman's room was☺️

Kabir's reaction while eating the Palak Paneer was definitely quite interesting😆

Btw Palak Paneer is my fav dish 😎

Kabir: Really, Truly, Madly, Crazily, Deeply..Now please give me some more Palak Paneer Nisha...*Smiling* - This was adorable

Love how Kabir is capturing all the moments in his video camera😃

Also love the fact that Nibir are getting to know each other more and are developing a stronger bond😳

And I agree with him, that most events are captured well when the people in the frame are unaware about being captured😉

Loved every bit of this chapter❤️

Also I may not have said this in my past two comments but each chapter of yours brings a long and wide smile on the faces of ur readers😃 We get so much positive energy while reading ur stories that it is unbelievable👏😉

Keep writing amazing chapters like this🤗😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Chapter 3- Fabulous chapter Nikhad👏👏👏

Love how as soon as Kabir enters the function, the Vij ladies at once know he is up for some mischief😆

Love how Pammi, Dolly and Jwala pull his leg😆

Also love Kabir is trying to butter everyone and act cute to complete his dare😆😆😆

Waise I love the dare the boys gave Kabir😃 Cute and interesting😉

Also love how no one is ready to give his hand to Kabir for the dare😆 Bechara Kabir😆

Love how Nisha acts as his saviour and gives her hand to Kabir to help him😳 She is too sweet😳😃

Kabir: Nisha?! See, I knew only my sweet cute childhood bestie would understand...

Nisha: Haha Mr. Drama King, you need not to butter me so much...Now complete your dare..Though I am the daring one here to let you do heena designing of my hand...

Everyone laughed on Nisha's words...- This part was super cute and adorable😳

Pammi: Nisha, you are a gem my child...*Looking at Kabir* You better be careful while doing the design, just see how nice your friend is...

Kabir: *Being to happy* Yes yes yes, ma - Love how everyone adores Nisha especially Pammi😳

Now that part where Kabir writes his intial on Nisha's hand and Nisha's reaction to it was hilarious and so sweet😆

And I love the explanation he gives😃 When i read that part about the initial, I was shocked beyond wits😆 But when I read his explanation, I just couldnt stop laughing🤣

Kabir: Enough! *Almost screaming* I wrote 'K' on your hand so what is the big deal? I saw, all the other ladies wrote letters too on the hand of the person they are applying heena...Now what is wrong, if I gave my artist sign too? I know I am bad at making designs with heena but I did do designing on Nisha's hand...- Love how he is so cool about it😆

Everyone looked at Kabir with a quizzical look...

Pammi: What you did Kabir?! *Surprised too*

Dolly: And what you mean by artist sign Kabir? *Confused look*

Kabir: Oh Dolly di, come on...We all know every painter write their names on the painting, just like that these ladies are also writing the first letter of their names on the hands of the person they are making designs right? What is the problem if I did so too? - Kabir ki jai 😆🤣

Everyone just looked at Kabir for sometime hearing his explanation and then bursted out into laughter... Adorable😳

Love Kabir's reaction when he comes to know the real meaning of putting someone's initial on their hand😳 He is too cute😃

Love how Kabir teases Kirti😳 He sure is an adorable devar😉

Also like the fact that even the parents are supportive of Kirti-Ritesh relationship😃

Kabir: Maa, but your would be lawyer son has not won the case yet...He has not propose her till now..

Pammi: What?!

Jwala: Yes, maa Yes...

Pammi: Ouf, what should I do with my sons..-

Dolly: Don't worry maa...We will be taking care of it...Ritesh will be on track- This part was adorableness overload🤗

Loved the dance session😃

Kabir noticed a guy was trying to go too much near Nisha while dancing which was actually disturbing Nisha...Kabir immedietly went to Nisha and started dancing with her, in order to protect her...Nisha understood it and smiled at Kabir- Hayee😳 Kabir is a true gentleman😳 Love his caring nature

Love how all the peaceful and empty places in the house have been occupied by the two couples😳 Well all I can say is "Love is in the air"😎

Loved the last part too

.I think both the other Singh girls will be married soon too..

-Yes, that too with two Vijs...

Kabir and Nisha understood what they were talking about. They both looked at each other for some seconds and then broke out in a loud laughter...Although I wonder why they are laughing when they heard about their marriage too. cz I think they meant both kirti and Nisha😊

All in all, a perfect chapter Nikhad❤️

I love how all the characters in your stories are so sweet and adorable.

The bond which every character shares with each other be it siblings, partners or parents, is sooo adorable and admirable👏

Love the fun and laughter among them❤️

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Chapter 4- Another beautiful chapter Nikhad😳

I m happy Ritesh finally proposed to Kirti😃 Loved how Nibir were standing there to ensure Ritesh does not do any gadbad😆 It was cute😆

Ritesh: Nice, just a little cute bhootni in heavy makeup...*laughing* - Ritesh to pitega🤣 😆😆

Nisha: Oh no Kabir, Ritesh will be in trouble now..He shouldn't have been so rude to Kirti..

Kabir: What rude? He was just telling the truth, afterall you are also looking the same, only differnce is you are looking just a very skinny bhootni...*Laughing like Ritesh* - Yeh Vij brothers na biklul buddhu hain🤣

Kabir ran away and Nisha started running behind him...On the way, Nisha found a plate full of colours, the colours with which they played a kind of pre-wedding holi game that morning...Nisha took the plate in her hands, threw all the colour on Kabir's face and started laughing...For some seconds, Kabir could not believe what just happened and then he took Nisha's dupatta and started wiping his face with it...Nisha was trying to take back her dupatta- This part was so romantic and lovable😳 Loved their masti😳

Maanlekha: Ah, just few moments back...*she looked at Nisha* Seems like, you have become very close to our handsome, talented youngest Vij hmm? Nice going...- Yeh manprret buaji tv ki vamps ki yaad dilaati hai😆

Nisha: Excuse me?! *Surprised and feeling weird*

Kabir: Oh nothing Nisha...It is just my Buaji's usual stuffs...Buaji lets go, let me show you the wedding preparations...- Love how Kabir handled the situation and prevented Maanlekha from passing any more taunts to Nisha😊

Loved how our doolhe raja umesh is impatient😆 love how he coulnt take his eyes off aman and Kabir was teasing umesh😳

Loved the name Kabir has given Maanlekha 😆 hurricane🤣 suits her🤣

Loved that entire Nibir conversation at the terrace😃😃Love how Kabir tells Nishu that she cant hide her tears from him😳 Love how Kabir comforts Nishu and assures her that she will always be connected to her Aman di😃 Love how they both understand each other so well😳

Love how he assures her that she will get the scholarship and instills confidence in her😃 Also love how Nisha cares so much about her family😳

Waise nice revelation Nikhad😆 Uss din woh palak-paneer accha nahin bana tha afterall aur Kabir ka reaction ulta nahin tha😆 Waise I like the fact that Kabir lied to her so as to not get her upset😳

Nisha: It is fine Kabir...In every family or other, there are some different people..We just need to cope up with them and handle them with love...

Kabir: With love and that too Maanlekha buaji? *Not so sure face* Nisha, you can come up with such ideas because you are too nice...- Nisha indeed is too sweet and good natured😳

Love how Kabir tackled Maanlekha buaji at the mandap too😃😉 Love the way he throws petals on her and then in a way reverses her taunt😆 Hamara hero kaafi smart hai waise😎

Nisha: *Smiles* Thank you for everything you said to me in last some minutes Kabir...It really feels nice now...

Kabir: Anytime Nisha and you don't need to thank me, afterall we are besties of childhood haha...*Wanting to hug Nisha from side* Umm may I?

Nisha laughed a bit and nodded her head in an affirmative way...Kabir smiled and hugged her from side...- Cuteness and adorableness overload😳

A delightful chapter indeed😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago