New NiBir FF:||On a Journey with You|| NEW UPDATE CHAP 10 - PAGE 34 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back meri jaan 🤗
Glad to see you in here ❤️

Lovely story update. Read the whole piece again and I am amazed with your writing.
Took me on an adventure 😆

Update sooon!! 👏👏👏
Edited by RTme0w - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome prologue and all the chapters r more than awesome ❤️
read it all in go...
laughing at thought that no Gangwals or rathods r here 😆

totally different kind of story againnn...
I love all ur stories niku ❤️
u r an awesome writer... my inspiration 😳

so kabir n nisha will studying in Australia together😃
waiting for next chaps
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Posted: 9 years ago
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOO MUCH EVERYONE...I love you all...Amazing feelings to get such feedbacks <3 I will update as soon as I can :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikhad003

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOO MUCH EVERYONE...I love you all...Amazing feelings to get such feedbacks <3 I will update as soon as I can :D


Yayyyie!!

Will wait for it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aw cute update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much everyone and here I am back.. You people are too much amazing and I love you all.. I am updating now...Please read my story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Here is my update after a long time. I would like everyone to take a look on the first page and reread the lines which I have written on the starting above my prologue. I have added some lines there, regarding the concept of the story so I would like everyone to read them. Sujay will be giving you inbox texts as usal for my updates. I would like to THANK SUJAY a lot for being so kind and helpful all the time. He is just like a perfect little brother.

CHAPTER 7

Nisha was busy packing. The next day she would be leaving for Melbourne. She was happy, sad, excited, nervous all at a time...When she was busy in taking out her clothes from the cupboard, Lajjo and Rupam came...
Rupam: Nisha puttar!
Nisha: *Turning back* Papaji? Maa? When did you come?
Lajjo: Just now..Let me help you with your packing..
Nisha: No maa, I can do it and don't try to spoil me on the last moment..*Being bit emotional*
Lajjo: Oh, my kid...What will your papaji and I will do in the house now..Aman is already in America and now you are also leaving...*upset and emotional*
Rupam: Oho Lajjo, don't make it more difficult for our daughter..She is going there to achieve great heights and I know she will shine the name of our family...
Nisha: I will miss you maa and papaji *Hugs her parents being emotional*
Rupam and Lajjo hugged their younger doll too and all three of them had some emotional moments...After few moments, Lajjo made Nisha sit on the bed and she sat beside...

Lajjo: Beta, I know I don't need to say these things to you as me and papaji has full trust on you but still as a parent I feel tension always...Listen, you are going to stay in the same building with Kabir, though in two different flats and I know he is a very decent and nice child too but still always be careful that nothing happen which can have a effect on your Aman didi's married life...They are her in laws and we just gave permission for this because Singhjeet praji and Pammi are our old friends and now they are your sister's in laws..We could not let them feel that we don't trust them...
Nisha: Don't worry maa, your daughter won't ever do such thing which can make her parents feel embarassed...*smiles to assure Lajjo*
Lajjo: And this first week when you will have to live with Kabir in the same flat..You...
Rupam: *Interrupts Lajjo* Uffo! Don't stress my daughter too much now..She knows how to handle situations, right puttar?
Nisha: Yes Papaji..Maa don't take so much tension...Your BP will go high...
Nisha hugs her Maa and her Papaji joins them in the hug...

NEW YORK, AMERICA...
Kabir was busy in his last moment packings too..Umesh joined him..
Kabir: Bhattu? Ah let it be..
Umesh: What hmm? Can't I help? You have grown up too much?
Kabir: No no Bhattu! I was just thinking I should get used to do everything by my own..Who will help me there..Oh well, I forgot about Nisha I guess, then help me help me..Haha..
Umesh: Nisha's bestfriend, do you realise that she will be alone there too? Help her instead of giving burden on her *Pulling Kabir's ear*
Kabir: Ahhh Bhattu! It is hurting...
Umesh: Ah Bhattu it is hurting *mimicking Kabir*..Kabir, I know my younger brother is much responsible from inside and I trust you fully..See, I have convinced everyone for Nisha to stay in the same building, it is a very big responsibility and I am handling that to you...
Kabir: Don't you worry Bhattu. Nisha will be my responsibility and I won't do anything that will be against the honour of our family...Besides Motu, just gave me a threat this evening that Nisha is his daughter and I better behave..Haha!
Kabir used to call his little bit fat father Motu lovingly and used to tease him by calling him that. Singhjeet used to get very annoyed by that name but he loved his naughty son a lot too. This was the bonding of their relationship.
Umesh: Haha bauji will surely cut you into pieces beta if you won't behave!
Aman: Brothers seem to be in a very jolly mood, hmm? *smiles*
Kabir: Arey, Aman bhabi is also here...
Aman: Packing done? I just talked to Nisha, she is almost done too..Her flight will reach Melbourne after two hours than your one..
Umesh: Yeah Kabir..I guess you already know that...
Kabir: Yes Bhattu..I called Nisha last night so I know...And Aman bhabi, I just wanted to let you know that, Nisha will be all fine n safe in Australia..The responsibility is mine...
Aman: I know Kabir, I have no tension for Nisha as you will be there with her and moreover Dolly di, Saurav jeeju will also be there na...You just take care of yourself too...*Patted Kabir's cheeck*
Kabir: Hmm, that I will but when I will be back I want some dozens of niece-nephews running around me too, okay Bhattu and bhabi?
Aman blushed heavily on Kabir's words and Umesh started chasing Kabir..Aman smiled and admired the bond of the two brothers...

The Next Day, MELBOURNE, AUSTRALIA
Kabir just realised that he had fallen asleep while waiting for Nisha sitiing on the couch in Airport..He yawned and looked over here and there..He then checked the time, it was time for Nisha's flight landing..He started walking towards the coffee shop so that his sleepy eyes would get some energy and he could recieve Nisha in a joyous mood...
Finally Nisha arrived...Nisha was so happy to see Kabir..They both were very tired that they started for their apartment building as soon as possible...It was almost 7 PM and the plan was to get home, take shower, have some dinner and then a long awaited nap...In all these the two youngsters did not forget to let their parents know that they both had reached safely and was on their way to the apartment building...

Nisha enjoyed the view of the roads too much..For Kabir it was nothing new as he had been to many places in the world and in Melbourne it was his 4th time...But for Nisha it was the first time that she had come out of Alandgarh and it was not Delhi, not even India...All the way Nisha was looking over everything with amazement in her eyes and Kabir was describing about the places to her...They reached their apartment building and took the lift to the 15th floor, it was where Kabir's flat was..
Nisha: Kabir, my flat is also on the 15th floor?
Kabir: Oh no, your one is on the 16th..For this week, you just have to adjust with this idiot sadly..
Nisha: Hahaha no it will be just alright...Hey, I guess we are on the 15th floor..
Kabir: *coming out of the elevator* Yeah, lets go inside...

Stepping inside, Nisha started looking all over the flat...It was so beautiful and the night view from all the windows in the flat were more than amazing..Nisha was lost in the view from the drawing room window when Kabir's voice took her back to the reality..
Kabir: Nisha, I am going to take my shower now...I have kept your luggages into the another bedroom...We have two bedrooms in each flat as you can see in my one, same goes for your one too..
Nisha: Hmm, I was so lost in the view..This is so mesmerising Kabir...I think I am going to love staying here...
Kabir: Sounds better! I think you should unpack and take shower too..
Nisha: Ah, yeah I will unpack but a very little, you know I have to shift after one week as well...
Kabir: Hmm that is right though..Okay so go and take a shower..Meanwhile I will take the shower and order some pizza ...
Nisha: Why pizza? Let me make you some home made food..I bet you are missing it after the food of the flight..
Kabir: Haha, not that much..We just arrived here Nisha..You should take some rest today..From tomorrow we will see what we can do..But for now pizza is totally fine..Oh wait, you are okay with pizza na?
Nisha: Yeah, Kirti always used to take me to a pizza corner near her house in Delhi whenever I visited them...
Kabir: That is nice..Well, lets meet after the shower then...I have to unpack too...
Nisha: Yeah but for now just take out the emergency stuffs, I will help you tomorrow in unpacking and settling down everything, don't worry...
Kabir: Oh Nisha, do you know you are a gem? *Pulling Nisha's cheecks*
Nisha: Kabir, you drama king! *laughs*

Nisha and Kabir were having a good time eating pizza, suddenly Kabir stopped eating and was only looking at his pizza slice without taking any bite..Nisha noticed it...
Nisha: What happened Kabir? Is everything fine?
Kabir: Umm yeah Nisha, it is actually like..Umm, I miss Bhattu, maa and everyone at home..At this time in New York, we generally take dinner together on the dining table and Maa feeds me sometimes...I just realised for the next 4 years, I won't be able to have all those moments daily..*sad, innocent face*
Nisha: *Holding Kabir's shoulder* Kabir, I know saying this is like nothing enough but I will try my best to be your little family here..
Kabir: *putting his hand on Nisha's which was on his shoulder* Thank you Nisha..
Nisha: Did you just thank me Mr. Kabir Vij? I thought I was your family..You yourself said that once in Alandgarh while making the sleepover video remember?
Kabir: Oh haha, sorry! Oh wait I think as we are also friends I can't say sorry too then?
They both laughed out..
Nisha: Emm Kabir, can I feed you? Like if you don't mind...I mean you were missing Pammi chachi feeding you and as no one is here rather than me so I thought..
Kabir: Nisha, Nisha, Nisha chill..Come on, why are you giving explanations? Is this even a question to ask? Why would I mind? It feels actually sl great to have a friend like you...Now, aaa *opening his mouth* give me one bite...

Nisha fed Kabir very happily...What made Kabir feel so touched was how Nisha was trying to cheer him up and at the same time how innocent she was...Kabir could not help but to smile for no reason looking at Nisha when she was feeding him..After they finished their dinner..Nisha brought a glass of water for Kabir as he forgot to drink after dinner...She noticed Kabir was watching some wedding videos on his laptop sitting on the sofa of the drawring room...
Nisha: Kabir your glass of water, you forgot to drink it...By the way what are you watching?
Kabir: *Taking the glass from Nisha* Damn, I forgot..And oh Nisha, I was about to call you..These are Bhattu and Aman Bhabi's wedding videos..I brought these for you...We will watch these tomorrow okay?
Nisha: Whaaat?! *Screams in happiness* Kabir, not tomorrow..Please today na? Lets watch now...
Kabir: Nisha, aren't you tired?
Nisha: Umm no, after knowing about the videos not at all..Hey wait, I forgot you must be tired, we will watch it tomorrow..
Kabir: Nisha, you are missing home and family, aren't you?
Nisha: Umm, no..Umm yeah..Actually Kabir I have never been this far away from them...*looks down being bit emotional*
Kabir: Hey hey hey, no no I can't let you be sad when you are with Kabir Vij..
Kabir lifted her chin and was about to hug her when he stopped just like he stopped at the first time in Alandgarh..But this time he looked more awkward..Nisha closed her eyes to hold her tears and laughed a bit..Then she herself hugged Kabir..Kabir at first did not understand how to react on it and then he hugged her back too...
Nisha: You are the best Kabir...
Kabir: Nope you are Miss Singh..Now lets watch the videos...
Nisha: No, Kabir..Tomorrow we will..Both need rest now...
Kabir: Sure?
Nisha: Yes..
Kabir: 100%?
Nisha: 500%..

Before Kabir could reply his cell phone rang..He broke the hug and went to his bedroom to take the call as his phone was there..On the other hand Nisha realised that they were hugging each other all the while and she did not know why but she blushed thinking about it..Nisha was trying to find out the reason why she was blushing when Kabir almost came running to Nisha and hugged her again being too much happy...
Nisha: What happened Kabir? You seem to be very excited and happy..*Being happy too*
Kabir: Yes, my besties are coming over tomorrow night for the weekend..
Nisha: Besties?
Kabir: Remember I told you about my two friends with whom I have grown up all these years? The both duffers are studying medical science, that too in Sydney...Their classes have started last week..We all wanted to study in Australia but however the medical college in Sydney was better and for me Marquis university here..So you know...I am so glad you will be meeting them too now..
Nisha: Oh yeah you told me about them in Alandgarh..I am excited to meet them too...
Kabir: Yaay! Nisha I think we should go to sleep now...Good night...See you in the morning!

Kabir took his laptop and went towards his room almost in a dancing way...'Kaira and Viraj must be a very important and beautiful part of Kabir's life', Nisha thought to herself and smiled...

TBC...

Edited by Nikhad003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res dida
No need to say thank you dida 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update nikhad... long time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Nikhu...👍🏼
great to have you back here🤗
update ASAP😉

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