*NiBir TS-My Angel's Day* part 2-page 6

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It was a new beautiful dawn...the small sea waves touched my feet...the fresh morning sunrays reflected in the crystal clear water making it shine...gently blowing wind kissed my face while I stood at the sea shore adoring the most beautiful creation of god...not the beautiful sun rise bt an angel who stood besides me drooling over the beautiful scenery of endless sky kissing the endless sea
the morning sunrays were sparkling in her angelic eyes...her pink lips formed the most perfect curve...her soft long hairs were playing with the wind tickling me on my face
"how could someone be so beautiful?" I thought
"kabir isn't it magnificent?" she asked yet looking at the endless horizon
"yes it is" I replied adoring the most magnificent site some more
She then shifted her gaze towards me flashing the brightest smile of her's n threw herself in my arms without a second thought I circled my arms around her tiny waist and held her close to me
Aah!!...how much I love it when she is in my arms...It feels like I m holding my your world in my arms...yes she is my world my life my love my soul my heartbeat my dream my everything she is the girl with whom I m madly deeply and crazily in love
I yet remember the moment I saw her for the first time It was the first time kabira the k was out of words I use to flirt with almost every girl in the college bt this girl she was just driving me crazy where all the other girls drooled over my looks she was the one shouting at me
FLASHBACK
It was the first day of the college and a crazy little girl stood at the entrance of the gate only to be welcomed by a volleyball which hit her on her head
"ouch" she shouted in pain placing her hand over her head when a handsome guy came to her asking for apology
"m so sorry..." he said genuinely
"what sorry...andhe ho dekh nhi sakte...lag gayi na mujhe" she said removing her hand revealing her face
That was the moment when he lost his senses not only senses bt also his voice his words denied to escape his mouth his muscels denied any kind of motion he was not able to take his eyes of her face...such a beauty she was
"ab ghoor kyu rahe ho??" her voice brought him back to reality
"vo...vo" he said trying to find some words that's when he realized that ball really hit her hard "tumhe toh bohot jor se lag gayi h dekho tumhara sir bhi suuj gaya h...ek kaam karte h ma tumhe medical room le chalta hu"
"no thanks ma khud dhund lungi"
"are tum kaha itne bade college ma dhundogi mujhe pata ma le chalta hu" he offered
"ohkk fine"
He took her to the medical room where the nurse did the first aid n left
"thank you"
"sorry" both of them said at the same time and smiled at each other
"it's ok...aise bade bade sehro ma.aisi choti choti baatin hoti rehti hain Mr..."
"kabir" he said completing her
"Nisha" she said forwarding her hand n he happily shaked hands with her
FLASHBACK ENDS
That was the beginning of the most beautiful journey of my life the journey of love
"thank you thank you thank you so so so so so much kabir...mere birthday ki isase acchi shuruwaat nhi ho sakti tujhe pata h I have a gut feeling ki aaj meri life ka best birthday hoga" she said breaking the hug
I was about to say something when her phone rang it was jwala her cousin from jaipur I met her when she once visited Mumbai to meet nisha after some good 20-25 mins of girls convo nisha hanged up the call only to find me staring at her I don't know y bt her cheeks turned pink sometimes I felt that even she liked me bt I never had the courage to ask her
"nisha hume ghar chalna cahiye phir clg bhi pohochna h" I suggested
"ohkk" she replied with a smile n we drove to our places
KABIR'S ROOM
I rushed to my room n started writing my dairy
"Dear dairy,
Ma nhi jaanta aaj ma yeh kaise karuga bt aaj ma use propose karke hi rahuga...I know ma yeh har waqt kehta hu par ma bhi kya karu jab vo mere saamne aati h toh jaise meri aawaj hi gayab ho jaati h...I love you kehna toh dur ki baat h uski aankho ma dekhte hi ma sab bhul jaata hu...sab sach kehte h pyaar na aapko puri tarah badal deta h vo ladka jo kabhi bhi kisi bhi ladki ko propose kar sakta tha aaj apne pyaar ka ijhaar tak nhi kar paa raha h what should I do"

To be continued (don't know when 😆)

K's 🤗
Thank you much kamino for sending me pms aur so sorry mujhe pata h I haven't commented on many updates m a bit busy nowadays isliye comment nhi kar pa rahi hu m so sorrybt wiwill try to comment soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW ! BEAUTIFUL STORY DEAR
LOVELY CONCEPT ...
VERY VERY VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN 👍🏼
LOVED IT ❤️
THANKS FOR THE PM AND PLZ CONTINUE SOON 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome AajiMaushi👍🏼
jaldi update karna😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Love at first sight ka case hai
Thx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome vaishu 👏
Love at first sight
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautiful story
Nd more beautifully portrayed
Thnx for pm nd update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar vaishu abb dusri update bhi kar do nah pls pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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1st scene
Love at 1st sight 😳
Loved it
Waiting fr d nxt 😛 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute...😳

Luv at 1st sight...😉

Continue soon & thanx for the pm...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you so much k's 🤗
will try to update soon

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