Nibir OS : HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI///////// - Page 3

Originally posted by: naina.majik

jab mai nishi ki vm HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI dekh rhi thi tab ye KHATARNAAK story mere mind me aayi n i penned it down..

sissy i feel nice k mere video ne tumhe aisi mast story likhne k liye inspire kiya..

<font color="#ff33cc">nisha ab samajh gyi thi ki uska kabira usko chhod k ja chuka h but uska dil ye maanne ko taiyaar hi nhi tha...use ehsaas ho ra tha ki uska kabir yhi h uske aas paas ...n she started shouting...

nisha(in sobbing voice)- kabir... i know dat u r here...u can see me...i can...i can feel ur presence kabir plz kabir come back i really love uh...n she again burst into tears...

now d time which dey never wanted to come has came kabir has to go frm here...far away frm his world...his nisha...stars are coming down to take his soul to heaven...on seeing stars he again started begging n shouting...plz dont take me wid uh...i dont...i dont want to go to heaven...i want to leave here wid my love wid...my nishu...i cant leave her all alone...i cant leave her like dis...plz let me be here...plz but d stars were taking him up...den at last time he wid all his strength shouted "NISHA"...den...she dont know wat happens to her...wat makes her to say...she just feels like his kabir is calling her n she immediately responded loudly "KABIR"...

The stars have taken kabir away from dis selfish world...away from his nisha...and nisha...nisha...again broke down into tears hugging his body tightly...</font>

@PINK heart toching

sissy tumne to rula diya...😭😭😭itna accha likha hai tune...

i m speechless...

amazing work sissy...

Kuch kahani adhuri reh ke bhi puri ho jati h...to
Kuch kahani puri ho ke bhi adhuri reh jati h...
Shayad aisi hi h..."HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI"

@Bold too good..

u wrote like a professional writer...

Originally posted by: itznimi003

awww... thanchu so much for yr lovely comment...nishssy😊 n m so sorry for making u cry...@blue thanchu so much for dis compliment it means alot to me😊

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

heart touching❤️
NiBir😭
just loved this lines
now d time which dey never wanted to come has came kabir has to go frm
here...far away frm his world...his nisha...stars are coming down to
take his soul to heaven...
😭

Originally posted by: janvi0513

This was sad and beautiful but extremely beautifully written.

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Nini sissy love u par aaj ek baat bolna hai ki as IF writers I can understand the things ki jab story Katam tho katam ... Bs I really respect to it but di tears rolled down from my eyes ...yeh adhuri khani no pori ho Sakti... Aap me mere dil main aur respect big kar d ...love u sissy bs I always do ...a gala happy happy Likhana

Originally posted by: zaara610

You made me cry..that was so emotional..😭

very well written Nimi..😊