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Hey guyzzz dis is nimi again...wid a new os...meri story ka title padh k aap sab ko samajh me to aa hi gya hoga dat it is a sad story...so plz read it on your own risk...actually...jab mai nishi ki vm HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI dekh rhi thi tab ye KHATARNAAK story mere mind me aayi n i penned it down...agar pasand na aaye to u can freely bash me ...mai bilkul bhi bura nhi manungi...kyuki nimi jinse pyar krti h unki baato ka kabhi bura nhi maanti...ab mai apni bakbak band krti hu...so here u goes...
HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI
Maine apni story me wo wala plot lia h jab vasu ne nibir ko divorce papers send kiya...
After seeing divorce papers...der reactns were same as show...and den dey both unknowingly decided to go to velvet launge to cherish der beautiful memories yes velvet launge the place where dey first met... her pain...his antics to make her feel better...der first fight...der first hug...remembring all dis beautiful memories ...a lone tear dropped frm der eyes...
On d way of velvet launge...
kabir(monologue)- Nisha...i love uh...so much...mai tujhse bhut...bhut pyar krta hu nisha...nhi janta ki tere bina mai jee bhi paaunga ya nhi...par...par dil me ek sukun rhega ki tujhe tera pyar mil gya...tu khush h...mere liye teri khushi se badh kar aur kuch nhi h nisha...
nisha(monologue)- kabir tu kyu krra aisa mere sath...kabir mai viraj sir se nhi sirf aur sirf tujhse pyar krti hu...plz wapis aaja kabir plzzz waapis aaja...wrna teri nisha tere bina mar jayegi...i love uh kabir...i love uh...
jaise jaise woh velvet launge ki ore badhte ja rhe the waise waise unke sath bitaye huye sare pal unhe...unki aankho k samne nazar aa rhe the unka jhagadna unka ruthna fir ek dusre ko manana unka ek dusre k liye care karna...bread butter jam...kabir ki bday wali night jab wo chhajje me band ho gye the...unka wo incomplete hug... wo sari memories yaad krte krte unhe pta hi nhi chala k wo kab velvet launge k paas pahuch gye...
now dey are standing some distance away frm velvet launge...still...lost in der old beautiful memories...
den d horn of car broke der trance...
Outside velvet launge
Nisha saw a person wid familiar face standing opp. to her in some distance...
she recognised d person and the person was none other den kabir...
After seeing her kabir der her happiness has no bounds she was happy no...no...she was more den happy dat her kabir is here right infront of her...he had not goan london...he had not left her...she just wanted to hug him n tell him how much she loves him...happy tears started falling frm her eyes to welcome her beloved kabira...and...den...widout thinking twice she shouted KABIR...wid all d strength she had in her voice...
on hearing his name so loudly...he look infront n wat he saw was like a dream for him his eyes cant believe wat he saw...he saw nisha yes he saw his nisha who was standing at a distance calling his name...loudly he thought his name had never sounded so melodious like dis before...he ...was so happy seeing her infront of him...dat he just felt like dancing...den in verry next moment his happiness turns into sadness he thought she ...she doesnt love me...she loves viraj... den wat...wat she is doing here...she loves viraj na...den y she is calling my name...but his inner conscience told him dat she loves u dammit...she really loves uh...he was busy in fighting wid his inner conscience...den again her voice comes...KABIR K KAHIN KA...
on hearing dis he forgot all d fight running between his brain n heart ...and he shouted loudly NISHA...and ran towards her...thinking...nisha b4 going away frm u i will tell u all my feelings...i will tell u dat how much i love uh...how much u mean to me nisha...nisha u r my life...i cant live widout you...den d decision is yours only yours...
on d other hand nisha also ran towards him thinking...kabir ab mai tujhe kabhi kahin nhi jane dungi hmari sari misunderstanding clear kr dungi mai...aaj...aaj tujhe bta dungi ki tujhse aur sirf tujhse pyaar krti hu mai... tu hi meri zindagi h kabir...
both den forgot the world n started running towards each other happily...
den suddenly nisha saw a car coming behind kabir wid full speed nisha shouted kabir move...but before kabir could react he found himself on d road wid blood flowing all over his body...seeing nisha running towards him he stood up n again ran towards her...calling her name nisha...wen he came close to her she ran inside him...seems dat he is not invisible to her...on seeing nisha running inside him he became shockedd...den he look behind and he saw himself...yes he saw himself...and nisha was crying badly holding him in his lap den a realization dawn upon him dat...he was his own soul who was standing der n his body ...his body was lying on d road bleeding heavily...
seeing his body he shouted...
kabir soul- how is it possible...m i de...dead...no it cant be happen ...no it cant be...i cant be dead...
on d other hand nisha was crying badly...holding him...in her lap...
nisha- kabir uth...kabir plz uth...tujhe kuch nhi hoga..kabir..mai...mai tujhe kuch nhi hone dungi...plz kabir uth ja...dekh...kabir...aisa...mazaak nhi krte uth ja na kabir...plz uth ja...tears were continuosly falling frm her eyes...seeing his nisha like dis...his soul shouted...
kabir's soul(in pain)- nisha plz mat ro nisha...mai yhi hu...tere paas...tu janti h na mai...mai tujhe kabhi pareshan nhi dekh sakta...plz nisha mat ro...tere ek ek aansu...mere seene me khanjar ki tarah chub re h...chup ho ja nisha...plz chup ho ja...
nisha(hugging his body and crying)- kabir tu mujhe chhod k nhi ja sakta suna tune...nhi ja sakta...tu mujhe chhod k...mai tujhse bhut bhut pyaar krti hu...kabir...mai tujhe kahin nhi jane dungi...nhi jee sakti mai tere bina...nhi jee sakti...
on hearing dis his happiness has no bounds...he just wanted to tell her dat he also loves her...more den his life...but he cant he wanted to hug her...tightly in his arms but he cant he wanted to wipe all her tears...all her pains...and make her smile wid his cute antics but he cant...becoz now he was a soul...a helpless soul...whose voice cant be heared by anyone... n he...he was crying badly in his helplessness...
nisha(while shaking his body n crying hardly)- kabir plz wapis aaja...kabir teri nisha nhi jee payegi tere bina...plz kabir mat ja mujhe chhod k plz mat ja...
kabir's soul(crying hard) - God plz mujhe ek baar meri nisha k paas jane dijiye...plz God...i want to confess my love...i want to tell her how much i love her...plz God let me go once...i want to wipe her tears i cant see her in pain...i beg u God plz let me go...i want to make her smile...like b4...once she will smile...i will...i will...surely return back to uh...pakka promise...Plz God...n he burst into tears
nisha ab samajh gyi thi ki uska kabira usko chhod k ja chuka h but uska dil ye maanne ko taiyaar hi nhi tha...use ehsaas ho ra tha ki uska kabir yhi h uske aas paas ...n she started shouting...
nisha(in sobbing voice)- kabir... i know dat u r here...u can see me...i can...i can feel ur presence kabir plz kabir come back i really love uh...n she again burst into tears...
now d time which dey never wanted to come has came kabir has to go frm here...far away frm his world...his nisha...stars are coming down to take his soul to heaven...on seeing stars he again started begging n shouting...plz dont take me wid uh...i dont...i dont want to go to heaven...i want to leave here wid my love wid...my nishu...i cant leave her all alone...i cant leave her like dis...plz let me be here...plz but d stars were taking him up...den at last time he wid all his strength shouted "NISHA"...den...she dont know wat happens to her...wat makes her to say...she just feels like his kabir is calling her n she immediately responded loudly "KABIR"...
The stars have taken kabir away from dis selfish world...away from his nisha...and nisha...nisha...again broke down into tears hugging his body tightly...
Kuch kahani adhuri reh ke bhi puri ho jati h...to
Kuch kahani puri ho ke bhi adhuri reh jati h...
Shayad aisi hi h..."HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI"
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HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI
Maine apni story me wo wala plot lia h jab vasu ne nibir ko divorce papers send kiya...
After seeing divorce papers...der reactns were same as show...and den dey both unknowingly decided to go to velvet launge to cherish der beautiful memories yes velvet launge the place where dey first met... her pain...his antics to make her feel better...der first fight...der first hug...remembring all dis beautiful memories ...a lone tear dropped frm der eyes...
On d way of velvet launge...
kabir(monologue)- Nisha...i love uh...so much...mai tujhse bhut...bhut pyar krta hu nisha...nhi janta ki tere bina mai jee bhi paaunga ya nhi...par...par dil me ek sukun rhega ki tujhe tera pyar mil gya...tu khush h...mere liye teri khushi se badh kar aur kuch nhi h nisha...
nisha(monologue)- kabir tu kyu krra aisa mere sath...kabir mai viraj sir se nhi sirf aur sirf tujhse pyar krti hu...plz wapis aaja kabir plzzz waapis aaja...wrna teri nisha tere bina mar jayegi...i love uh kabir...i love uh...
jaise jaise woh velvet launge ki ore badhte ja rhe the waise waise unke sath bitaye huye sare pal unhe...unki aankho k samne nazar aa rhe the unka jhagadna unka ruthna fir ek dusre ko manana unka ek dusre k liye care karna...bread butter jam...kabir ki bday wali night jab wo chhajje me band ho gye the...unka wo incomplete hug... wo sari memories yaad krte krte unhe pta hi nhi chala k wo kab velvet launge k paas pahuch gye...
now dey are standing some distance away frm velvet launge...still...lost in der old beautiful memories...
den d horn of car broke der trance...
Outside velvet launge
Nisha saw a person wid familiar face standing opp. to her in some distance...
she recognised d person and the person was none other den kabir...
After seeing her kabir der her happiness has no bounds she was happy no...no...she was more den happy dat her kabir is here right infront of her...he had not goan london...he had not left her...she just wanted to hug him n tell him how much she loves him...happy tears started falling frm her eyes to welcome her beloved kabira...and...den...widout thinking twice she shouted KABIR...wid all d strength she had in her voice...
on hearing his name so loudly...he look infront n wat he saw was like a dream for him his eyes cant believe wat he saw...he saw nisha yes he saw his nisha who was standing at a distance calling his name...loudly he thought his name had never sounded so melodious like dis before...he ...was so happy seeing her infront of him...dat he just felt like dancing...den in verry next moment his happiness turns into sadness he thought she ...she doesnt love me...she loves viraj... den wat...wat she is doing here...she loves viraj na...den y she is calling my name...but his inner conscience told him dat she loves u dammit...she really loves uh...he was busy in fighting wid his inner conscience...den again her voice comes...KABIR K KAHIN KA...
on hearing dis he forgot all d fight running between his brain n heart ...and he shouted loudly NISHA...and ran towards her...thinking...nisha b4 going away frm u i will tell u all my feelings...i will tell u dat how much i love uh...how much u mean to me nisha...nisha u r my life...i cant live widout you...den d decision is yours only yours...
on d other hand nisha also ran towards him thinking...kabir ab mai tujhe kabhi kahin nhi jane dungi hmari sari misunderstanding clear kr dungi mai...aaj...aaj tujhe bta dungi ki tujhse aur sirf tujhse pyaar krti hu mai... tu hi meri zindagi h kabir...
both den forgot the world n started running towards each other happily...
den suddenly nisha saw a car coming behind kabir wid full speed nisha shouted kabir move...but before kabir could react he found himself on d road wid blood flowing all over his body...seeing nisha running towards him he stood up n again ran towards her...calling her name nisha...wen he came close to her she ran inside him...seems dat he is not invisible to her...on seeing nisha running inside him he became shockedd...den he look behind and he saw himself...yes he saw himself...and nisha was crying badly holding him in his lap den a realization dawn upon him dat...he was his own soul who was standing der n his body ...his body was lying on d road bleeding heavily...
seeing his body he shouted...
kabir soul- how is it possible...m i de...dead...no it cant be happen ...no it cant be...i cant be dead...
on d other hand nisha was crying badly...holding him...in her lap...
nisha- kabir uth...kabir plz uth...tujhe kuch nhi hoga..kabir..mai...mai tujhe kuch nhi hone dungi...plz kabir uth ja...dekh...kabir...aisa...mazaak nhi krte uth ja na kabir...plz uth ja...tears were continuosly falling frm her eyes...seeing his nisha like dis...his soul shouted...
kabir's soul(in pain)- nisha plz mat ro nisha...mai yhi hu...tere paas...tu janti h na mai...mai tujhe kabhi pareshan nhi dekh sakta...plz nisha mat ro...tere ek ek aansu...mere seene me khanjar ki tarah chub re h...chup ho ja nisha...plz chup ho ja...
nisha(hugging his body and crying)- kabir tu mujhe chhod k nhi ja sakta suna tune...nhi ja sakta...tu mujhe chhod k...mai tujhse bhut bhut pyaar krti hu...kabir...mai tujhe kahin nhi jane dungi...nhi jee sakti mai tere bina...nhi jee sakti...
on hearing dis his happiness has no bounds...he just wanted to tell her dat he also loves her...more den his life...but he cant he wanted to hug her...tightly in his arms but he cant he wanted to wipe all her tears...all her pains...and make her smile wid his cute antics but he cant...becoz now he was a soul...a helpless soul...whose voice cant be heared by anyone... n he...he was crying badly in his helplessness...
nisha(while shaking his body n crying hardly)- kabir plz wapis aaja...kabir teri nisha nhi jee payegi tere bina...plz kabir mat ja mujhe chhod k plz mat ja...
kabir's soul(crying hard) - God plz mujhe ek baar meri nisha k paas jane dijiye...plz God...i want to confess my love...i want to tell her how much i love her...plz God let me go once...i want to wipe her tears i cant see her in pain...i beg u God plz let me go...i want to make her smile...like b4...once she will smile...i will...i will...surely return back to uh...pakka promise...Plz God...n he burst into tears
nisha ab samajh gyi thi ki uska kabira usko chhod k ja chuka h but uska dil ye maanne ko taiyaar hi nhi tha...use ehsaas ho ra tha ki uska kabir yhi h uske aas paas ...n she started shouting...
nisha(in sobbing voice)- kabir... i know dat u r here...u can see me...i can...i can feel ur presence kabir plz kabir come back i really love uh...n she again burst into tears...
now d time which dey never wanted to come has came kabir has to go frm here...far away frm his world...his nisha...stars are coming down to take his soul to heaven...on seeing stars he again started begging n shouting...plz dont take me wid uh...i dont...i dont want to go to heaven...i want to leave here wid my love wid...my nishu...i cant leave her all alone...i cant leave her like dis...plz let me be here...plz but d stars were taking him up...den at last time he wid all his strength shouted "NISHA"...den...she dont know wat happens to her...wat makes her to say...she just feels like his kabir is calling her n she immediately responded loudly "KABIR"...
The stars have taken kabir away from dis selfish world...away from his nisha...and nisha...nisha...again broke down into tears hugging his body tightly...
Kuch kahani adhuri reh ke bhi puri ho jati h...to
Kuch kahani puri ho ke bhi adhuri reh jati h...
Shayad aisi hi h..."HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI"
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