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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
nimi... bhy u making me cry... I know maine tm lgo rulaya h... par tu to mjhe ur rula rhi h...

aww... m so sorry mansi for making uh cry...

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

ye kya tha???.?
ispe Rona hai?? 😭
par mijhe hansi aaa rahi hai !! 🤣 🤣
jab ye dono ekdum fimly hero heroin ki tarah el dusre ki taraf bhaag re the i imagined
them in slow motion... 🤣
kabirrr...
nishaaa... 🤣
lol tragede comedy 🤣
hylot kabir ka bhoot??? 😲
I wish YUM HAIN HUM k yum uncle idhar hote toh kabir ki last wish puri karte ya phir usko wapas alive kar dete... 😃

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
ye kya tha???.?
ispe Rona hai?? 😭
par mijhe hansi aaa rahi hai !! 🤣 🤣
jab ye dono ekdum fimly hero heroin ki tarah el dusre ki taraf bhaag re the i imagined
them in slow motion... 🤣
kabirrr...
nishaaa... 🤣
lol tragede comedy 🤣
hylot kabir ka bhoot??? 😲
I wish YUM HAIN HUM k yum uncle idhar hote toh kabir ki last wish puri karte ya phir usko wapas alive kar dete... 😃

neha u know...jab mai ye story likh rhi thi...to likhte likhte bhut royi thi...but tera comment padhne k baad bhut hasi aa rhi...thankyou for making me smile😊

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: itznimi003
neha u know...jab mai ye story likh rhi thi...to likhte likhte bhut royi thi...but tera comment padhne k baad bhut hasi aa rhi...thankyou for making me smile😊

my pleasure sis...
hanste raho ...
muskurate raho...
khush raho...
kya pata zindagi kal ho na ho... 😉

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome..story...

Isse padkar toh Ricky jaise k ki aankhon mai.bhi aasu aa gaye...

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anjali

@angelanju

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

kabir...😲😒😭

btw...nice os...u hv written it beautifully...

so for the story..👏👏👏

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

my pleasure sis...
hanste raho ...
muskurate raho...
khush raho...
kya pata zindagi kal ho na ho... 😉

waah neha kya dialog mari h 👍🏼 🤣

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
Awesome..story...
Isse padkar toh Ricky jaise k ki aankhon mai.bhi aasu aa gaye...

aww thanchu so much dear😊 BTW ricky rota bhi h😲😲????

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Nishtha

@naina.majik

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

jab mai nishi ki vm HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI dekh rhi thi tab ye KHATARNAAK story mere mind me aayi n i penned it down..

sissy i feel nice k mere video ne tumhe aisi mast story likhne k liye inspire kiya..

nisha ab samajh gyi thi ki uska kabira usko chhod k ja chuka h but uska dil ye maanne ko taiyaar hi nhi tha...use ehsaas ho ra tha ki uska kabir yhi h uske aas paas ...n she started shouting...

nisha(in sobbing voice)- kabir... i know dat u r here...u can see me...i can...i can feel ur presence kabir plz kabir come back i really love uh...n she again burst into tears...

now d time which dey never wanted to come has came kabir has to go frm here...far away frm his world...his nisha...stars are coming down to take his soul to heaven...on seeing stars he again started begging n shouting...plz dont take me wid uh...i dont...i dont want to go to heaven...i want to leave here wid my love wid...my nishu...i cant leave her all alone...i cant leave her like dis...plz let me be here...plz but d stars were taking him up...den at last time he wid all his strength shouted "NISHA"...den...she dont know wat happens to her...wat makes her to say...she just feels like his kabir is calling her n she immediately responded loudly "KABIR"...

The stars have taken kabir away from dis selfish world...away from his nisha...and nisha...nisha...again broke down into tears hugging his body tightly...

@PINK heart toching

sissy tumne to rula diya...😭 😭 😭 itna accha likha hai tune...

i m speechless...

amazing work sissy...

Kuch kahani adhuri reh ke bhi puri ho jati h...to
Kuch kahani puri ho ke bhi adhuri reh jati h...
Shayad aisi hi h..."HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI"

@Bold too good..

u wrote like a professional writer...