kabir(Nibir/Rajbir) SS- Burning Silence - Page 2

Janvi🤗🤗

Awesome story..would love to read more

Sissy...im proud of u 😃
Poor kabir, without even listening to him nisha blamed him
Nice start...update soon nd do pm me
I will comment on it after my exams for sure 😉

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Jaannzzz🤗

Yeh Story mujhe ek Malayalam Film ki yaad de raha hai mujhe😛 "UMA PENNINU URIYADA PAYYAN" 😛 Its a love story b/w a MUTE BOY and MUTE & DEAF GIRL😊

Awesome Start👏

Kabira is MUTE🤔 Aww... Felt Bad 4 Him

Nishu Bhi nahhEk baar dekh kar toh react karthe Par Uski bhi galati nahi hai as Halaath hi aise bane ki she misunderstood him...🤔

Waiting 4 NiBir Meeting & I m curious to knw How NiBir wl interact

I knw NiBir always understands eachother SILENTLY❤️

Waiting 4 next Part😳

PS: PM bhejne se pehle I res ed .. & Agali baar DO PM me..😆

Thanks for the comment Saru next part ke liye pakka pm, I never pm this first chapter/prologue of my new story 😳

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

🤗 awesomely written janvi... and m so eager to read more... kabira is mute... the boy with the hazel brown eyes... ❤️ m so looking forward to nibir scene... 😳

Thanks mansi
Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: zaara610

Interesting..loved it jaanu...😛

please continue soon

Glad you liked it Ritu

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

beautifully written janvi 👍🏼
kabir is mute
souds nice plz continue soon
n plz pm me

Thanks Vaishu, will pm you from the next update.

Originally posted by: itznimi003

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superb start janvi👍🏼

nisha saurav sukku n kirti in disc😊

dadaji ne permission dedi😃

loved d way dey care for nishu in disc...😊

finally kabira ki entry...nishu ne kabira ko galat samjha...😡

nisha ne fir kabir ko dekha n galat samjha but lady inspector ne uski galatfehmi dur kr di😊

she was searching kabira...to say sorry

kabir ki story se tumne mujhe rula dia yr😔
it was so emotional n touchy...u portrayed it beautifully😊👍🏼

kabir bol nhi sakta...

plz update fast yr

Thanks nimi, I hope iske baki updates bhi acche lage

Originally posted by: ammu4u

superb start janu👍🏼

Kabir is mutee..phir K& J kaise bolenge😆

jocks apart..loved d concept yaar..its intresting

PM me when u update

Thanks for the comment
Pms from the next part

Originally posted by: -abz-

Jaan ! 😳

You have started with the story ! ...

A very nice start ...

Kabira will talk something tells me 😳

continue soon 😳

Glad you liked it chikoo
Yes I started with this story, infact I was supposed to start this while the show was going on but in its end, but finally I was able to finish and post it.