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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow new story and that too mystery
kabir new sensation cant wait to see him solve this case
viraj ahhh can't he ever praise kabir
hope mystery ke sath thoda nibir romance bhi milega
waiting for it
continue soon
PS thanks for telling all the ranking order in cbi coz i had no idea of that
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

wow new story and that too mystery

kabir new sensation cant wait to see him solve this case
viraj ahhh can't he ever praise kabir
hope mystery ke sath thoda nibir romance bhi milega
waiting for it
continue soon
PS thanks for telling all the ranking order in cbi coz i had no idea of that

thoda nahi bahut milega...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
So guys...here is part 1...
Special note- many were confused in ranking order...
2 ranks above means after getting 2 promotions ..u will reach that designation... And all the ranks are correct..I have referred CBI wiki page...


Part-1
At Delicious restaurant...
Aman was busy giving instructions to her assistants...when suddenly someone came and hugged her from behind... She turned back and jumped in joy...

Aman- kabir...tu aa gaya

Kabir- nahi di abhi toh raste mai hi hu...and laughed...

Aman - hugged kabir back...pagal kahinka dara hi diya tha mujhe...par toh yaha kitchen mai kaise aaya yaha par toh keval staff aa sakta hai...

Kabir- kya di...aapko pata hai na Jo kaam allowed nahi voh to h mai jarur karta hu...(makes a cute face)

Aman- accha badmaash par tujhe toh meri yaad hi nahi aayi 2 saal baad Delhi aa raha hai...

Kabir- nahi di chutti hi nahi mili aur agar aapki nahi yaad aayegi toh kiski aayegi...aapne hi toh mera ek maa ki tarah khyaal rakha hai...

Aman- accha accha ab jyada maska lagane ki jarurat nahi hai...tuh bag leke aa gaya ...MATLAB abhi viraj Bhaiya ke pass nahi gaya...

Kabir- socha pehle Jo mujhse pyaar karta hai unse mil aao..

Aman- kisne kaha ki voh tujhse pyaar nahi karte dekh kabir vo hamare bade bhai hai..aur hame sabse jyada pyaar karte hai...bas vo expressive nahi hai..samjha ...

Kabir - okk di and hugged her...
A tear escaped from Aman's eye because only she knew the reason why viraj hates kabir...

Aman- chal fatafat bata kya khayega...

Kabir- accha hua Delhi transfer ho gaya ab kam se kam khana toh accha milega...warna..ab tak toh mai pagal ho chuka tha roj roj staff canteen mai kha kha ke..

Aman- chal bahar chalte...hai...

Kabir- di baad mai abhi ghar par jATA hu...

Aman- chal theek hai par shaam ko ghar par dinner par aa Jana...aur apne viraj bhai ko bhi le aaana

Kabir- okk di milte hai...byee
And he left...

Cousins'house...
All things were going smooth in a modest 4 Bhk apartment... But suddenly someone opened the door with a bang...

Sukku entered and says- guys sab yaha aa jao..hamari jwalu ko Jaipur se lekar mai aa chuka hu...
All come and hugged her...

Jwala- toh ab mai bhi Delhi mai rehkar IIT ke liye prep karongi...

Dolly- ha jwalu ab toh bas Bunty ki kami hai...yaha par...waha sab kaisa chal raha hai...

Jwala- sab badiya...bas kabhi kabhi..dadaji bolte hai ki koi shop par bhi rehta toh accha hota par phir Ramesh chachu aap sabka support Karke baat sambhal lete hai.

Nisha- papa toh hamesha se hi best rahe hai...

Sukku- sahi kaha yaar par mere friend ka msg aaya hai ek solid news mili hai jata hu..yeh dolly di bhi apne bhai se kitna kaam karati hai

Dolly- accha beta kal office mai Teri bands bajati hu..

Sukku- arrey dolly di mai toh majak Kar raha tha..abhi jata hu..
All laugh..at sukku..

Jwala- Saurav aur Aman bhabhi kaha par hai...

Saurav enters - mai bhi aa gaya ...and hugged her...

Kirti- yaar aman bhabhi ka phone aaya hai..unhone aaj Kabir aur Viraj sir ko dinner par bulaya hai...

Nisha- kaun kabir

Umesh - Nishu Aman Ka chota bhai...bas ek baar hi ham sabse mila hai..hamari shaadi mai..tab uski training start hi hui thi...toh keval 8 ghante keliya aa paya tha...anyways.. Aaj mil Lena...aur vaise bhi vo toh...ab Delhi hi transfer hoke aa chuka hai...vo bhi ASP hai

Saurav- arrey yaar vo toh mera batchmate tha...aur bestie bhi..saath mai...11 mahine ki training ki hai...

Kirti- Maine suna hai usne..6 complicated cases back to back solve kiye hai...

Nisha- okk yaar kabir ka gungaan khatam ho gaya ho toh..jwalu ke samaan set Karne mai help Kare...

All- okk...

At Rathod house..
Kabir entered and...hugged Viraj...
Viraj - aap aa gaye..chaliye jaa Kar fresh ho jaiye...

Kabir - kya bade Bhaiya itne time baad aaya hu...thodi der baate karte hai...

Viraj- sorry kabir par hame bahut kaam hai...

Kabir - kya Bhaiya kabhi break bhi le liya karo vaise bhi mai aapke..under kaam karonga..

Viraj- kabir ek baat dhyaan rakhega..ham saare rishte office ke bahar chodkar jaate hai...

Kabir- okk okk..vo sab chodiye...aman di se Milne gaya tha...unhone hame dinner par invite kiya hai...

Viraj- sorry par mai nahi aa Sakta...mujhe kal subah ke case par kuch study karni...hai...

Kabir - plzz Bhaiya..
Viraj- nahi aaj possible nahi hai...and he goes to his room...

Kabir calls and tells aman that they will not come...after sometime viraj comes to drawing room and notices that kabir is watching TV

Viraj - aap kyun nahi gaye kabir...

Kabir-bade Bhaiya phir aap akele reh jaate...isliye...

Viraj- hame akele rehne ki aadat hai...aur ham akele hi acche lagte hai..

Kabir didn't u what to say...but he considered Viraj as his inspiration... After all he had not seen his mom..and his dad also left him and this world when he was 6 years..old...so his world started and ended with viraj and aman

Cousins house...
Aman- sorry guys..aaj vo log nahi aa paenge...

Umesh- koi nahi ham log kalse saath mai hi kaam karenege yeh dekho Sinha sir ka mail aaya hai...
Ham sab ek hi team mai hai...

Saurav- vaha yaar kabir ke saath toh bahut maza ayega...

Dolly- ek baar hamare channel uska interviews kiya tha...bande mai dam to hai...

Nisha- common yaar vo koi President nahi hai Jo tum sab uske piche pade ho..

Aman- arrey nishu tu ek baar milke toh dekh mera bhai hai hi aisa ki sabko apna fan banale...

Kirti- vo sab chodo..kal toh mera first case...hai vo bhi aap sabke saath..Its so exciting...

Next morning 8:55 am CBI office...
Nisha was rushing towards...Viraj's cabin then suddenly she collided with a man coming in casual clothes listening to music...

Nisha- dekhkar nahi chal sakte...andhe ho kya...
The guy removed his headphones ..he was none other than kabir
Kabir- sorry aapne kuch kaha..
Nisha- dekhkar nahi chal sakte..
Kabir- sorry par bhagti hui tum aa rahi thi mai nahi...so its ur fault...
Nisha- its ur fault my foot...tumhe toh mai baad mai dekhti..hu..abhi jaldi mai hu...and BTW yeh CBI headquarters hai..tumhare ghar Ka lawn nahi Jo..in kapdo mai ghoom rahe..ho...

Kabir - Ohh really...mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha...thanks apne mujhe bata diya...ki yeh CBI office hai...

Nisha- u donkey duffer idiot...pehle toh takrate..hu phir sorry bolne ki bajaye..mujhse argue Kar rahe ho..
Ho ...kaun tum

Kabir- mera naam kabir hai...
To be continued...
I know is part mai thoda intro vagerah mai time chala gaya...but next part onwards...murder mystery will start
Please comment ur views..
Edited by Sarthak0302 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsm n fantastic update sarthak👍🏼

loved aman n kabir's bro sis love😊

kabir ka raste me hu wala dialog reminded me nibir's convo of nauc😳

viraj kabir se kyu ukhda rehta h aman janti h...😔

loved cousins convo😊

dolly sukku nokjhok🤣

jwalu aa gyi delhi but bechara bunty avi b jaipur me h😊

nishu kabir k naam se kitna irritate ho ri duffer ye nhi jaanti na ki wo hi uska mr. perfect h😎 🤣

kabir viraj ko apna inspiration maanta h n viraj usse hate krta h...dont know y😔

bechara kabir dinner pe nhi gya😔 all becoz of dat rude viraj😡

loved kabir's first meeting❤️...full of nibrilicious nokjhok...😊

par tune suspense create kr dia last me pta nhi nisha uska naam sunke kaise react kregi😲

sarthak mujhe aisa kyu lag ra ki kabir viraj ka saga bhai nhi h...aur may be unke bachpan me koi tragedy hui h shayad unke parents ko le kar tabhi vo kabir se nafrat krta h😊...dont mind mujhe story padh k aisa lga🤣...

update soon dear😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
res
unres
nice start sarthak
aman and kabir scene was nice
nisha ko kabir ki tarif pasand nhi 🤣
nibir first meeting ma hi lad pade 🤣
loved it sarthak 👍🏼
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Bhaiyu Congo Shongo👏👏👏 (for sec time)U r GOLDIE now...!!!!🥳 Ur sis is proud of U😎

Coming to update😉

Awesome Update👏👏👏👏

One line Gave me ASR feels...🤪🤣🤣🤣 & its @PINK😳

Kabir- kya di...aapko pata hai na Jo kaam allowed nahi voh to h mai jarur karta hu...

Aman-Kabir bonding Soo sweet...😳

What is the reason beind Viraj's hateness towards Kabira???😕 & Y Only Aman Knws abt it??😕

(Mujhe aisa q lag raha hai ki Kabira is not Their real bro.. 😛 Mujhe na Main hoon na ki yaad aa rahi hai...🤪
🤣 ab dnt ask me Y😆 Mujhe nahi patha 🤣)

Cousins scene superbly written...👏👏👏

All were Praising Kabira😉 & Our Nishu was feeling J😉🤣🤣🤣Loved it😆🤣

RajBir meeting...😃 Felt Bad 4 Kabira 🤔 Viraj aise q behave kar raha hai...😡🤔

Kabir didn't u what to say...but he considered Viraj as his inspiration... After all he had not seen his mom..and his dad also left him and this world when he was 6 years..old...so his world started and ended with viraj and aman

@Blue Poor Kabira...🤔

NiBir first meeting was as usual Filled with Nok-Jhoks...🤣🤣🤣

Waiting 4 Nishu's Reaction when she knew abt who she was fighting with 😆😉🤣as Kabir said his name nahhh😉🤣 Ab dekhte hai Nishu ke reactions...🤣🤣🤣(It just reminded me ARIYA's first meeting)

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣



Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
its cute...☺️
story k sath sath intro kar diya -- cool...jaisa film ya serial m karte hai ..i like it. 😉
nibir finally mil gye ...but ye nisha ki kya problem hai yar har waqt kabir se ladti rehti hai..🤔
smtimes i feel agar nisha thoda kam ladti to shayad nibir story thoda jaldi start ho jati..
amazing start 😉
waiting for nxt update 😃
thanx for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hao rabba kabir's entry... drooling session started... 😳 viraj... why so lonely... 😲 nisha ko kabir ki taarif pasand nhi 🤣... superb update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina.majik

its cute...☺️

story k sath sath intro kar diya -- cool...jaisa film ya serial m karte hai ..i like it. 😉
nibir finally mil gye ...but ye nisha ki kya problem hai yar har waqt kabir se ladti rehti hai..🤔
smtimes i feel agar nisha thoda kam ladti to shayad nibir story thoda jaldi start ho jati..
amazing start 😉
waiting for nxt update 😃
thanx for PM

thanks...nishi...aage aage dekho...kabir kaisi kaisi harkate..karta hai🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

hao rabba kabir's entry... drooling session started... 😳 viraj... why so lonely... 😲 nisha ko kabir ki taarif pasand nhi 🤣... superb update...

thanks...mansi...

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