Nibir ff - Mystery( part 9 updated on page 58)

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ItsMeAarushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Awesome update... 👏

Story is getting more and more interesting...👏

Am expecting more..😆

Now Continue soon..👍🏼

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Sarthak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi
Awesome update... 👏
Story is getting more and more interesting...👏
Am expecting more..😆
Now Continue soon..👍🏼

expectations hi expectations hai..

Next update kab hogi yeh pata nahi...

Story ka kuch soojha toh sala

Time toh phir bhi mila nahi..🤣

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ItsMeAarushi

@ItsMeAarushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
expectations hi expectations hai..
Next update kab hogi yeh pata nahi...
Story ka kuch soojha toh sala
Time toh phir bhi mila nahi..🤣

Yeh cheating hai..

Tume jaldi update karna hi hai..😆

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

res Bhaiyu 4 Ur Tasaallliii😛🤣🤣

UNRES😆

Dont get Shackeed Bhaiyu😆🤣 Haan Yeh Aapki Choti Sis Saru hi hai... 🤣

Thriller Update...👏👏👏👏👏

Best Update till now on this Story...👍🏼

Ek Ek min Mere Brain was like ASR☺️ har jagah se ASR feelss...😆 aisa laga was watching a crime stry on TV

Thank U Bhaiyu🤗

NiBir Ki Nok-jhoks as usual were entertaining...😆🤣

INVESTIGATION detailing I loved it to the core...😎

ASR ki kasam☺️ When Nishu said abt ice on Fridge + bahut din se band tha yeh cabin.. Suddenly Mere Dimaag par kuch hua I feel Areee yeh Ice fridge yeh sab toh wahan Mr. Shekawath ke office par bhi kahe the...😈🤣 & see Kabira bhi same fact ko mehsoos kia & went to the office & find the weapon...!!!!!😃

For this scene Bhaiyu U desrve Extra clapss...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Kya dimaag lagake yeh scene likha.. Its My MOST FAV scene😳 & I m very happy dat mere dimaag ne bhi kaam kia..😎

Den Coming to DELICIOUS restaurant Why do I feel Murderer ne Mr & Mrs. Shekawath ke khsuh rehna waha se dekha hoga jab they were on dinner & may be this murderer is someone relating their past life.. Q ki I feel Mrs.shekawath ka koi deewana raha hoga jo pagalom ki tarah pyaar kartha tha hoga par usse keh nahi paya & wen he saw her with Mr. shekawath usne aisa kia.. vo 5 sec ka phone call also giving ishara to this gues...😆aur vo jo actress PRIYA jiski muder agale update par hoga vo bhi wahi DELICIOUS restaurant mein aayi thi nah...😛 May be killer tab waha tha may be killer is some random guy jo shakal se bhola bhaal aho aur karnaame aise Khatarnak...😉& Yeh Killer "SUCCESS" se nafrat kartha hai...!!! Dat is proven frm his NOTE😛 PshycoKiller👏👏👏👏 Interesting banthi jaa rahi hai yeh toh.. I m Damm Excitedd😎

By God ki kasam kitne dinom baad apne Detective Dimaag ka istemaal kia for these guesses..🥳 I dnt knw How much my guess wl be right But I m happy dat I guessed so much🤣jab Arjun on air tha I always try to find culprit b4 ETF😎🤣 & Same feels aa rahe hai mujhee iss update se...

Kabira saving Nishu + Tiffn Sharing+ their talks... 😳Light moments..😆🤣

Kirti-Saurav also were nice...😳

Viraj is caring 4 Kabira yet he is stuck b/w some unknown unpleasant reason...😕 Main hoon na feels...🤣

Ab Waiting 4 Next part

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM

Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: SaruSenan
res Bhaiyu 4 Ur Tasaallliii😛🤣🤣

ha ab ho gayi...tasali..🥳

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: SaruSenan
unres ed on pg 30🤣

itni jaldi..saru rockzzz

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: SaruSenan
res Bhaiyu 4 Ur Tasaallliii😛🤣🤣

UNRES😆

Dont get Shackeed Bhaiyu😆🤣 Haan Yeh Aapki Choti Sis Saru hi hai... 🤣

Thriller Update...👏

Best Update till now on this Story...👍🏼

Ek Ek min Mere Brain was like ASR☺️ har jagah se ASR feelss...😆 aisa laga was watching a crime stry on TV

Thank U Bhaiyu🤗

NiBir Ki Nok-jhoks as usual were entertaining...😆🤣

INVESTIGATION detailing I loved it to the core...😎

ASR ki kasam☺️ When Nishu said abt ice on Fridge + bahut din se band tha yeh cabin.. Suddenly Mere Dimaag par kuch hua I feel Areee yeh Ice fridge yeh sab toh wahan Mr. Shekawath ke office par bhi kahe the...😈🤣 & see Kabira bhi same fact ko mehsoos kia & went to the office & find the weapon...!!!!!😃

For this scene Bhaiyu U desrve Extra clapss...👏

Kya dimaag lagake yeh scene likha.. Its My MOST FAV scene😳 & I m very happy dat mere dimaag ne bhi kaam kia..😎

Den Coming to DELICIOUS restaurant Why do I feel Murderer ne Mr & Mrs. Shekawath ke khsuh rehna waha se dekha hoga jab they were on dinner & may be this murderer is someone relating their past life.. Q ki I feel Mrs.shekawath ka koi deewana raha hoga jo pagalom ki tarah pyaar kartha tha hoga par usse keh nahi paya & wen he saw her with Mr. shekawath usne aisa kia.. vo 5 sec ka phone call also giving ishara to this gues...😆aur vo jo actress PRIYA jiski muder agale update par hoga vo bhi wahi DELICIOUS restaurant mein aayi thi nah...😛 May be killer tab waha tha may be killer is some random guy jo shakal se bhola bhaal aho aur karnaame aise Khatarnak...😉& Yeh Killer "SUCCESS" se nafrat kartha hai...!!! Dat is proven frm his NOTE😛 PshycoKiller👏 Interesting banthi jaa rahi hai yeh toh.. I m Damm Excitedd😎

By God ki kasam kitne dinom baad apne Detective Dimaag ka istemaal kia for these guesses..🥳 I dnt knw How much my guess wl be right But I m happy dat I guessed so much🤣jab Arjun on air tha I always try to find culprit b4 ETF😎🤣 & Same feels aa rahe hai mujhee iss update se...

Kabira saving Nishu + Tiffn Sharing+ their talks... 😳Light moments..😆🤣

Kirti-Saurav also were nice...😳

Viraj is caring 4 Kabira yet he is stuck b/w some unknown unpleasant reason...😕 Main hoon na feels...🤣

Ab Waiting 4 Next part

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM

thanks..saru and don't worry had ques ka jawab milega...waise thrilling and suspense quotient aur increase hone wala hai..😆😉

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

like nahi kia mera comment?😡🥺🤣

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: SaruSenan
like nahi kia mera comment?😡🥺🤣

like button not working..(I use if from my mobile)

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

I am back guys...😎

Sorry for late update... Here is part 4..

Part- 4

After hanging out with group kabir reached home late.To his surprise viraj was still awake .

Kabir- bade Bhaiya aap jag rahe hai..

Viraj- ha kabir hame bahut jaruri kaam karna hai case se related ham aapki tarah yuh bahar ghomne phirne mai koi interest nahi hai..

Kabir knew viraj was angry but he also knew if he speaks anything he would make the situation worse , so he quietly went to his room and tried to sleep.

He could not sleep coz as soon as he used to close his eyes only thing he could see was smiley face of nisha.He was frustrated now.

Kabir(to himself)- paagal ho gaya hai kya kabire...kyon sirf usike baare mai soch raha hai..tujhe toh case ke baare mai sochna chahiye..yaa phir yeh ki bade Bhaiya ko aaj waali baat ke liye Kaise sorry bolega..but..idiot ki tarah uske baare mai soch raha hai...

On the other hand..nisha's state was not different..she was again and again thinking about the way kabir smiled at her how they shared the tiffin...

Nisha's state was disturbed by jwala's voice. .

Jwala- nishu bro nishu..bro..

Nisha- haa jwalu kya hua..

Jwala- kaha dhyan hai 10 minute se awaz laga rahi hu..sun hi nahi rahi..kahi mere future jiju ke baare mai toh nahi soch rahi..ho...

Nisha- future husband kaun...

Jwala- mujhe kya pata aap kiske baare mai soch rahi ho yeh toh aapko pata hoga na...

Nisha - accha ji. Apne so called unknown future jiju ki bajaye padai par dhyan do..

Jwala- accha matlab nishu bro aap sach mai kisi ladke ke peeche ho..great..

Nisha- jwalu Teri toh..

And a pillow fight began.

Next morning

Kabir woke up late and found that viraj had already left for the office..he cursed himself for waking up so late..and immediately rushed to office after getting ready.

At office.

Saurabh and kirti had gone to keep an eye on Mrs.Shekhawat as instructed by viraj. Rest all were sitting and thinking about how to find clues. Kabir was stealing glances of nisha and she too was again and again trying to see kabir.

Umesh- mujhe ek clue mil gaya..

Viraj- kya

Umesh- ham mai se kisine yeh notice nahi kiya ki simple se note ko killer ne alag tarah se likha hai...

Kabir- jiju I mean sir Kaise..

Umesh showed them the pic and explained.

"Sorry but you

cannot

be successful"

Umesh- aisa nahi lag raha no.3 banaya gaya ho..

Nisha - exactly

Viraj- but woh aisa kyon karega..

Kabir- maybe koi clue de raha ho..but kyon..

At night 9:15 clock

Saurabh and kirti returned and nibir informed them about the info umesh cracked about killer's note.

Saurabh- viraj sir hamne acche se crosscheck Kar liya hai..usse follow Karke dekhliya sabjagah interrogate Kar liya neighbors maid se market mai..but koi gadbad nazar nahi aa rahi hai..

Viraj- agar Mrs. Shekhawat nahi toh phir kaun ho sakta hai

Nisha gets a message from sukku

Nisha- sir abhi abhi info mili hai.. Famous actress priya kumar ka murder ho gaya hai..

Kabir- what

They rushed to the site.

At GR studios

Policeman first denied them entry.

Kabir showed his ID card

Kabir- ACP kabir CBI crime branch

Constable- sir jai hind. Aaiye..

They were told that priya was rehearsing alone when somebody

Called her brother to inform that priya is dead.

And they noticed that the body was lying in a position with face facing them right hand horizontal on the floor while left lying vertical.

Nisha- ohhh...killer iski ek eye nikal Kar le gaya hai..

Saurabh- body ko dekhkar lagta hai..she was killed by suffocating her..neck par nishaan bhi hai...kisi cloth ka.

Umesh- bilkul waisa ka waisa note choda hai jaisa Shekhawat waale case mai tha...

Kabir - par in dono ka aapas mai kya connection ho sakta hai..

Viraj- but kuch bhi ho yeh kaam ek hi insaan ka hai..

Nibir( together)- maybe psycho killer..

Saurabh- sir possibility toh hai..kyonki yuh same note ka milna body ki ajeeb si position and upar se kisi body part ko saath mai me Jana...

Viraj- mujhe iss actress ke baare mai saari info chahiye abhi..

At office ( 1 am in the night)

Kirti - sir priya Kumar was the new sensation in the film industry.. JP drama centre se plays mai roles se start kiya..and got her break in Telugu cinema and iski debut movie ke liye she got the national award. Tabhi se 3 months ho gaye hai..she gave a superhit documentary and a mindboggling debut movie in Bollywood... Which earned her many acclodes and was currently signed for a 3 film contract by One of the biggest production houses of the Bollywood. Currently movie ke shoot ke liye Delhi mai thi...

Viraj- interesting aur kuch.

Kirti- sabse badi baat her one eye was practically non functional.

Everyone else - what..

Kirti - yeh baat sirf uske manager aur kuch friends and family ko pata thi...

Kabir- matlab itni badi physical hindrance ke baad bhi she was rocking .in her career.

Nisha - sir family ke naam par bas ek chota bhai Jo ki currently Mumbai ke ek college mai padta hai..

Viraj- toh yeh baat toh clear hai ki yeh dono murders ek hi insaan ne kiye hai..but kyon...

Precap-

Nisha- mujhe body ke awkward positions ke baare mai clue mil gaya hai..

And nisha explains the reason.

Kabir- toh yeh ek psycho serial killer ka kaam hai Jo hame clue dekar challenge Kar raha hai but kyon.

Viraj- hamare liye ek case hai but psycho serial killers ke liye ek khel hota hai..