NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 92

Originally posted by: mishri0209

n finally dis came to an end.. em glad it was a happy ending

uk wat i joined IF few mnths back only n dis story was, d 1 dat i read vry frst tym..

i can clearly remember hw much emotional i got wen i read d frst part itself..

dn later i thought u abruptly ended it wid kabir deatg bt luckily u continued wich was followed by sum gud tyms btwn nibir n dere family..

bt dn i thnk u r gr8 at making us emotional cz dn also wen nibir died was soo heart wrenching

i mn hardly any part wud hav been dere were i dint cried..

n finally dis part.. d letters were soo soo well written..

needless to mention d xtent to wich i loved dis part as well..

ty so vry much 4 dis.. i guess dis was by far d only story reading wich i hav cried i hav smiled i hav laughed n lyk dis has d potential to arouse ny such emotion in d reader..

i really em short of wrds to praise it..

tysm d story..

ik maine bhut zyada hi phle se baat strt kia bt trust me after reading i really thought to sharing dat wid u..

plzz keep writing.. ill b waiting 4 ur nxt story..

#tanisha

Originally posted by: Angel_alvira

Mansi mansi mansi 👏 👏 👏 what have you done mansi 😳 this story is the best story I've ever read in my whole life and the most precious one this story will always remain close to my heart ❤️i fell in love with this story all over again 😳 I have experienced so many emotions while reading this story lived every moment of this story..this isn't a fictional story for me but a journey.. this story taught me so much, after reading the last part of this I felt something incomplete but I'm glad that you wrote this epilogue 😳 it's beautifully written 👏 loved every bit of it and all my confusions are cleared now ...letters are very nicely written 👏 👏 ok so nisha wasn't suffering from cancer but she choose kabir over Aarav..nibir lived together died together love is eternal❤️ ..Aarav's breakdown and outburst after reading nisha's file is very beautifully written..he pretends to be fine in front of everyone but deep down he is still in pain 😭 he still yearn for his parents love ,no one can fill that emptiness and but I'm happy for Aarav finally he found his solace 😳 mansi loved it 😳
Mansi please keep writing 😳
Tumahri Sachi wali fan 😳
Alvira

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

oh ritzy... 😳 i surely will try

Originally posted by: janvi0513

One of the most beautiful updates.
Lovely work
Not a better ending that could be imagined for the story.

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb mansi
all emotions r beautifully written ...
hats of mansi ... u brilliantly write nibir feelings for his son in letter
loved it

thnks for pm

keep writting dear

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

wifey u were right it wasn't sad yet it made me cry
this story is something else yaar
every word of this story makes me cry
the way u wrote it was more than perfect
everything was fine at the end Bt they were missing I know they r happy bt I wish they were there too
needless to say this is and will always be the best story on IF for me
I have already read it many n I know I'm gonna read it again
pyaar ho toh aisa ho warna naa ho

Originally posted by: Amina...

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Hey Mansi ...!!!
I remember , when you updated the last episode of it , i couldn't comment ... i literally was not able to ... was crying so badly that...

After reading this epilogue ... i m crying this time as well ...!!!
But i m still satisfied ...!!!
It was something ... something that touched my soul ...!!!
I m sorry , i m unable to use the correct words ...but it was something Very Beautiful ...!!!
Amazing ...!!!
And as always , the way you write ... it makes everything , More Beautiful ... More Touching ...!!!
Loved It To The Core ...!!!

Love You Mansi For This FF ...!!!</font>

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Beautiful epilogue 👏
Loved it
Seriously this is a true love story both are incomplete without each other
Finally champ also get his life partner 👏
Beautifully written 👏
This was my favourite story of your writings
Do write more

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

it was so beautifully written...
u made me cry...
but really it was a wonderful piece..
just loved it to d core...

Originally posted by: luvmishri

heyy mansi 🤗 thnks fr updating it, was waiting fr this since long😳
bt u literally made me cry
i m nt a prsn who cries easily by reading a story bt this story is smthng else , u r making me cry frm the frst chappy
i always cnnct to their feelings , emotions bcz of the u potray it
now coming to this one , it answers all the questions , fr me the bst part was their letters , i just soo loved them
loved aarav nd amvi's bonding
nd finally a happy ending with a happy family😊
nd i really like the last line "A void was still there in their hearts but that was understandable because they knew that the two best of people has this effect on them for a lifetime."
this story wll always b special to me mansi nd my fav too😳
thank u sooo much fr giving us this story😳