NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Say something new😉😳🤣

u r a bad... really really bad 🤣

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tanisha

@tani_0209

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Posted: 9 years ago

#892

n finally dis came to an end.. em glad it was a happy ending

uk wat i joined IF few mnths back only n dis story was, d 1 dat i read vry frst tym..

i can clearly remember hw much emotional i got wen i read d frst part itself..

dn later i thought u abruptly ended it wid kabir deatg bt luckily u continued wich was followed by sum gud tyms btwn nibir n dere family..

bt dn i thnk u r gr8 at making us emotional cz dn also wen nibir died was soo heart wrenching

i mn hardly any part wud hav been dere were i dint cried..

n finally dis part.. d letters were soo soo well written..

needless to mention d xtent to wich i loved dis part as well..

ty so vry much 4 dis.. i guess dis was by far d only story reading wich i hav cried i hav smiled i hav laughed n lyk dis has d potential to arouse ny such emotion in d reader..

i really em short of wrds to praise it..

tysm d story..

ik maine bhut zyada hi phle se baat strt kia bt trust me after reading i really thought to sharing dat wid u..

plzz keep writing.. ill b waiting 4 ur nxt story..

#tanisha

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
Kal hai 🤣

all the best👍🏼

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Angel_alvira

@Angel_alvira

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Posted: 9 years ago

#894

Mansi mansi mansi 👏 👏 👏 what have you done mansi 😳 this story is the best story I've ever read in my whole life and the most precious one this story will always remain close to my heart ❤️i fell in love with this story all over again 😳 I have experienced so many emotions while reading this story lived every moment of this story..this isn't a fictional story for me but a journey.. this story taught me so much, after reading the last part of this I felt something incomplete but I'm glad that you wrote this epilogue 😳 it's beautifully written 👏 loved every bit of it and all my confusions are cleared now ...letters are very nicely written 👏 👏 ok so nisha wasn't suffering from cancer but she choose kabir over Aarav..nibir lived together died together love is eternal❤️ ..Aarav's breakdown and outburst after reading nisha's file is very beautifully written..he pretends to be fine in front of everyone but deep down he is still in pain 😭 he still yearn for his parents love ,no one can fill that emptiness and but I'm happy for Aarav finally he found his solace 😳 mansi loved it 😳
Mansi please keep writing 😳
Tumahri Sachi wali fan 😳
Alvira

Edited by Angel_alvira - 9 years ago

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janvi0513

@janvi0513

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#895

One of the most beautiful updates.
Lovely work
Not a better ending that could be imagined for the story.

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#896

Superb mansi
all emotions r beautifully written ...
hats of mansi ... u brilliantly write nibir feelings for his son in letter
loved it

thnks for pm

keep writting dear

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vaishnavi

@crazyvaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#897

wifey u were right it wasn't sad yet it made me cry
this story is something else yaar
every word of this story makes me cry
the way u wrote it was more than perfect
everything was fine at the end Bt they were missing I know they r happy bt I wish they were there too
needless to say this is and will always be the best story on IF for me
I have already read it many n I know I'm gonna read it again
pyaar ho toh aisa ho warna naa ho

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#898

Hey Mansi ...!!!
I remember , when you updated the last episode of it , i couldn't comment ... i literally was not able to ... was crying so badly that...

After reading this epilogue ... i m crying this time as well ...!!!
But i m still satisfied ...!!!
It was something ... something that touched my soul ...!!!
I m sorry , i m unable to use the correct words ...but it was something Very Beautiful ...!!!
Amazing ...!!!
And as always , the way you write ... it makes everything , More Beautiful ... More Touching ...!!!
Loved It To The Core ...!!!

Love You Mansi For This FF ...!!!