NIBIR FF : DAASTAAN (Part 7 updated on page no 27)(discontinue) - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update SMS[sonu my sweety]😊

nisha dar gyi thi ki kabira use chhod k to nhi chala gya😊

kabir k kahin ka bus k roof me baitha h dara dia nishu ko🤣 mujhe nauc ka nibir ka bus k roof wala scene yaad aa gya❤️

loved der fight😉

der closenesa der eyelock❤️ maar dala yr🤣

fir se goons😲

nibir in jungle😊

dead end😔

unhone kabir ko khub mara😔

kabir ko fek dia niche n nisha screamed raghu😔

excited to know abt der past
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww sonu... kitte din baad update dia yaar... ur maine use bhi late comment kia 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting update. Nibir nok-jhoks were as usual zabardaast!! Dosa scene was nice. Ye gunday bhi na...ab NIBIR ka kya hoga?? Waiting for their past. Update nxt part soon. PS=Saru is ryt...when will u update Chupke Chupke??
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb👏
nibir😳
waiting for the next update
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks 4 the beautiful replies frds🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

DAASTAAN

Part 7

Nisha(she was shocked...she saw some flashbacks n shouted) RAGHUUU(n she fainted)

Goon 1-yeh toh behosh ho gyi

(they heard some footsteps)

Goon 2-bhai koi a rha hai

Goon 1-abey toh dekh kya rahe ho bhaago

Someone entered with his driver-santram dekho

Santram(he turned nisha n checked)-maharaj ladki zinda hai

VK(he was none other than maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore...he saw nisha's face)-priya

Driver-ji

VK-inka chehra(he touched nisha's face...he cant believe this)vohi aankhen vohi masumiyat

Driver-yeh behosh hain

VK-inhe uthao aur mehel lekar chalo

(the went to Rathore Mansion n a doctor arrived)

Doctor-maharaj she has fainted i think because of shock...aapko yeh mili kahaan

VK-humne suna tha ki hamare yahaan ke janglon mein jaanwaron ka shikaar ho rha hai wohi pta karne gyye the ki humne kisi ke chillane ki awaaz suni

Doctor-ohh...waisey nothing major inhe rest karne dijiye...she'll be all right...main chalta hoon

VK-ji dhanyawad

Doctor-ji

(doctor went from there...in nisha's room she was resting but in her mind some flashbacks were playing)

Flashback Starts

(in 1989)

(in rathore mansion)

Savitri Singh Rathore(SR)(VK's wife)(she has asked a servant)-Rajkumari Pravamvada kahaan hai

Servant-Rani sa woh toh

SR-kya...where is she

VK(he entered)-Kya hua savitri ji

SR-where is ur darling daughter...she is 23 koi zimmedari haiuski ya nhi...kal jab uski by DNSUnlocker"> shaadi hogi toh kya haga

VK-leave it na she is still a kid

SR-no she isn't

VK-arey par

SR-aap jaane dijiye...kahaan hai wo

Servant-woh jungle ki taraf gayi hain

VK-kyaa...wahaan toh jungle jaanwar hain...hey bhagwaan(in a worried tone)hume jungle jaana hai

Servant-j hum gaadi nikalwatwy hain

(in jungle)

(some girls r shouting)

Girl 1-rajkumari priyamvda

Girl 2 -priya aap kahaan hai

Girl 3-now m feeling very scared...where is she...agar kuch ho gya toh...hum rajmahal jaakar kya kahengey

Girl 2-shut up u all...priya

(somewhere in the jungle...a girl is crying)

Girl-hum kahaan hain...hum kho gayee...hum Maa Baba ko kya bolengey...hey bholenath madad kijiye

(she was the royal pricess...Princess Priyamvada Singh Rathore aka Priya)

Priya-oh god

(suddenly she heard a roar)

Priya-sher...nhi maa baba

(she starts crying n starts running)

(her frds were still shouting her name n she was running like a maniac suddenly she has bumped into someone n faints)

(after some time she has opened her eyes n find herself in her room)

Priya-hum yahaan kaise aye...maa baba

SR-aap jungle kyun gyi thi

VK-savitri ji

Priya-m sorry maa but hum yahaan kaisey

Mujhe aap jungle mein mili

(for the very first time she noticed a guy in his mid twentey's...n she rememberd his face...he was the same guy who bumped into her)

Priya-aap

VK-priya he is Raghuvendra Agarwal...he is our area's new senior Inspector

Raghuvendra-hello i m raghuvendra

Priya- hello...but thoda lamba nhi hai aapka naam...raghuvendra

SR-priya

Priya-nhi i mean don't u have a nick name

Raghuvendra-u can call me raghu

Priya-that's better hii raghu

Priya dii

Priya-suhani

(a 5 year old gilr entered)

Suhani-aapko chot lagi

Priya-no yaar m fine...inhone bacha liya(pointed towards raghu)

Suhani-thanks for saving my dii

Raghu(with a smile)-ur welcome aisey wo mera kaam hai n i should go now

VK-arey aap thodi der rukiye na

Raghu-nhi actually kal hi join kiya hai toh bas thoda kaam hai

Priya-thanks Mr raghu

Rahu-ur welcome princess

(n he goes from there)

(in priya's room...she rememberd the bumping session n raghu's eyes)

Priya(monologue)-kisi ki aankhon mein itni gehrayi bhi ho sakti hai(n she she starts blushing)ek minute priya aap thik toh hain aap ek ajnabee ke bare mein soch rahi hain...aapko ho kya gya hai

(Suhani entered)

Suhani-di u r still awake

Priya-hmm hume pta tha ki aap zaroor ayengi isliye

Suhani-di woh inspector kitney acche hain na

Priya-woh toh hain(n she again starts smiling)

Suhani-aap hans kyun rahi hain

Priya-kuch nhi...good night

Suhani-good night di

(next morning...a servant entered)

Servant-rajkumari priya woh inspector sahib aye hain unhe raja sahib se milna hai par woh aur rani ji toh 2 din ke liye bahar gyye hain aap unse mil ley

Priya(after hearing raghu's name she again starts smiling)-hum aate hain

(she went downstairs n saw Raghu)

Priya-hllo

Raghu(he was mesmerized by her look...she was wearing a pink colour anarkali n looking so beautiful but he controlled himself)-hii...aapke pita

Priya-maa aur baba do din ke liye bahar gyye hain aap baithey

Raghu-mujhe toh unse hi milna tha

Priya-aap humein bta sakte hain

Raghu-R u sure...its related to ur kingdom

Priya-ohh tab toh u should tell

Raghu-i think actually m sure

Priya-what happend Inspector sahab aap bolengey

Raghu-mujhe lagta hai ki yahaan jo jungle hain jahan kal aap mujhe mili thi wahaan jaanwaron ko maara jaata hai for their body parts u know leather ke liye

Priya-aapko koi galatfehmi hai humarey yahaan aisa nhi hota aur forest department ne kabhi complain nhi ki

Raghu-because they r also involved

Priya-how could u so be sure

Raghu-kyunki mainey suna hai n kal jab aap bhaag rahi thi toh mainey lion ki awaz suni phir ek gun shot hua but aapko sambhalney ke chakkar mein main ja nhi paaya aur aaj jab gaya toh body nhi thi

Priya-haan awaaj sunkar hi hum bhaage the but is sey kuch saabit toh nhi hota na ho sakta hai ki kisi ne apni jaan bachane ke liye yeh sab kiya ho

Raghu-i don't think it possible...i didn't even find a drop of blood seems like kisine wahaan se saarey sabot mitaye h

Priya-aisa nhi ho sakta matlab

Raghu-its ok princess it happens

Priya-aap humse kya chahte hain

Raghu-hume aapki help chahiye

Priya-kaisey

Raghu-i have a plan

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update sonal 👏
loved the flashback scenes
priya n raghu ki kahani seems to bhi interesting
continue soon
sorry for late comment

plz plz plz update chup chup ke I just love that story
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome+Interesting update and please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very very interesting update. Specially the FB. Plzzz update nxt part soon. N if possible plzzz pm me nxt time when u update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
kabira kha h... awesome update after so long...

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