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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

nishu kitta bolti h soch nhi sakti bolne se pehle... bechara kabir...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

hehe tumbhi na very nice...

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Ishama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

nice but yeh K apni J ko chod ke kahan chala gaya

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nitika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Part 4

Awesome update sonu

Fight secene was fabulous

Dosa meeting was nice

Nibir nok jok was superb

Oh they found drugs

Ab kya karenge

Nice work sonu

Thanks for pm

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nitika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Fabulous update

Tell kya shravan ne hi pichle janam mein kabir aur nisha ka murder kiya tha

Kabir kaha gayab hi gaya

Yaar itna messup create kar diya hai

Phele goons then drugs then police

Update soon

Curious to know what happen next

Thanks for pm

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

thanks for the beautiful reply cousind

loved ur replies🤗

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Sonu when will u update this story ?
We have been waiting since a long time 😭
Pls update kar do 😳 😉 😃

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

DAASTAAN

Part 6

Scene 1

Nisha-woh jo mere saath theey wo kahaan hai

Conductor-3 stop pehley utar gye

Nisha-nhi...nhi(n she starts crying)

(she came out from the bus n starts shouting his name)

Nisha-kabir kabir u cant do this yaar arey main toh hoon hi pagal kuch bhi bolti hoon...kabir where are u yaar

(then she heard a voice)

Voice-hey cockroach...stop shouting...just because of ur harsh voice my ears r hurting

Nisha-kabirr...yeh toh kabir ki awaaj hai(she starts watching here n there)

Kabir-oye princess Victoria bus ke upar dekh

(she saw at the top...he was sitting there)

Nisha-tum bus ki chhat par kya kar rahe ho

Kabir-chhat

Nisha-i mean roof...yeah roof

Kabir-ohhh bus ki chat(n he starts laughing)

Nisha-bohot hansi a rhi hai

Kabir-nhi yaar but seriously chhat(she glared at him)okk okk sorry...n u said na ki u hate me n don't want to see my face toh socha tumhe apna chehra na dikhaon

Nisha-you hippo(she also goes there)bhaiya chaliye(driver started the bus)

Kabir-u know what u r so weird yaar pehley khud sunati ho phir dhundhti bhi khud hi ho

Nisha-emmm woh actually...i m sorry

Kabir-kya kaha tumne sorry...right

Nisha-did u said that right in a sarcastic way

Kabir-no...n yeah apology accepted

Nisha-thank u sir

Kabir-okkk...waisey chilla kyun rahi thi

Nisha-u idiot i thought u left me

Kabir-itni acchi kismet kahaan hai meri...tum toh mere gale hi pad gyi ho

Nisha-kya kaha tumne

Kabir-u know what m feeling sleepy good ni8

Nisha-11 bje hain woh bhi dopahar ke

Kabir-so what tum toh so chuki na now lemme sleep

Scene 2

(at hotel room...saurav heard a knock on door)

Saurav-come in

Dolly-hii

Saurav-hey

Dolly-aapki baat hui nisha se

Saurav-nhi yaar aur tumhaari

Dolly-i have tried his number but he is not picking up

Saurav-i hope they both r fine

Dolly-humein bohot darr lag rha hai...Vasu aunty se toh humne kuch kaha bhi nhi hai

Saurav-same here yaar Ramesh uncle called me but mainey unhe bola ki she is safe...i just hope nishu thik ho

Dolly-nishu

Saurav-yeah main usey nishu bulata hoon

Dolly-awww thats so cute...u love her so much na

Saurav-love ummm i don't know yaaar...look we r childhood frds n our parents said ki shaadi kar lo n we said yes...thats it...hum dost hain

Dolly-tabhi tumne usey yahaan aney dia...matlab agar usey koi aur mil gya toh

Saurav-toh main sabsey jada khush honga

Dolly-wow i really like ur thoughts

Saurav-thanks waisey do u love kabir

Dolly-god not again yaar meri dadi ye ques pooch pooch kar mujhe roz tang karti hai...i don't love him he is my best frd thats it

Saurav-okk

Dolly-toh ab kya karna hai

Saurav-no idea

Dolly-get idea

(n they both starts laughing)

Dolly-chalo main tumhe delhi ghumati hoon

Saurav-gr8 idea...lets go

Scene 3

(Kabir opened his eyes n felt a light weight on his shoulder n he saw nisha's angelic face...she was looking so innocent n beautiful)

Kabir(monologue)-nhi jaanta kyun par main chahta hoon meri har subah aise hi ho jab mujhe tumhara chehra dikhey(n he starts smiling...nisha shifted a bit n he realised that the sunrays r disturbing her sleep...he moved closer to her n tried to block the sunrays by using his hand...she felt better n again went to sleep)yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kyun main itna possessive ho raha hoon kyun mujhe farak padta hai ki woh khush hai ya nhi

(nisha woke up n saw him...they both were so close n she was lost in his dark brown orbs)

(they both were staring each other suddenly the bus stopped n they came back to reality)

Conductor-toh bus is dhabe pey 2 ghantey rukegi jise jo khana hai kha le waisey bhi lunch ka time hai

(Nibir too came down but they both were ignoring each other)

Kabir-tum kuch khaogi

Nisha-nhi woh(suddenly she saw something)not again

Kabir-what

Nisha(she pointed towards some goons)-gunday

Kabir-yeh toh wohi hain

(goons already saw them n they were coming towards them)

Kabir-inhey toh main chodunga nhi

Nisha-pagal mat bano...public place hai humarey saath saath bakki logo ko bhi pareshaani hogi

Kabir-so

Nisha-run

Kabirr-what

Nisha-yeah mr hippo bhaago

(they both starts running n those goons were chasing them Nibir ran towards the jungle)

Scene 4

(after some 15 mins)

(somewhere in the forest)

Nisha-hum hain kahaan

Kabir-jungle mein

Nisha-waah i know that but jungle mein kahaan

Kabir(with a r u serious look)-jungle mein bhi directions hoti hain

Nisha-whatever uss taraf chaltey hain

(they again starts running but they stopped at a place)

Kabir-ab yeh kya hai

Nisha-waterfall aur aage raasta bhi nhi hai

Kabir-this is not waterfall this is our dead end

Nisha-dekho kabirr(suddenly someone pulled her)aah

Kabir(he turned n saw the goons)-chodo usey

Goon 1-bohot bhagaya tum dono ne ab bas

(Kabir was about to hit that goon but he put the gun on nisha's forehead)

Goon 1-maarega maar na

Kabir-leave her right now...agar usey kuch bhi hua na toh

Goon-toh kya

(his chamchas came forward n starts beating kabir...they were beating him so ruthlessley n kabir was badly injured)

Nisha-plzz leave him...chodo usey plzzz(she starts crying)

Goon 1-thik hai ji oye madam ji keh rhi hai chod do inhe

(his chamchas left kabir)

Kabir-(he stands up n pointed a finger towards their boss) usey chod ab

Goon 1-arey madam ji ne kaha tujhe chodney ke liye

(goon 1 pushed kabir lightly n because of his injured state kabir lost his balance n nisha shouted but that goon held his hand)

Goon 1-madam ji ab bolo

Goon 2-sir iski wajah se hamara sara maal gya

Nisha-plzz don't do this chod do usey

Goon 1 -accha ji toh lijiye madam ji chod diya (he left kabir's hand n kabir fell in the waterfall)

Nisha(she was shocked...she saw some flashbacks n shouted) RAGHUUU

(Precap - Nibir's Past)

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Sonsi Mindblowing update...👏👏👏👏

After a Longgg Gap I m commenting on this FF

Loved NiBir nok-jhoks...😆 Was Roflng 🤣🤣🤣

DoSa scene was nice😃

Kabira's Monologue...😉 Aree U r in Love baba🤣

NiBir Again in Troublee...🤔

Kabiraaa😲 Pls usse kuch hone math dena😊

Waiting 4 NiBir's Past

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: When Will U update Chupke Chupke?

Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: SONAL30

 DAASTAAN
 Part 6

Scene 1

Nisha-woh jo mere saath theey wo kahaan hai

Conductor-3 stop pehley utar gye

Nisha-nhi...nhi(n she starts crying)

(she came out from the bus n starts shouting his name)

Nisha-kabir kabir u cant do this yaar arey main toh hoon hi
pagal kuch bhi bolti hoon...kabir where are u yaar

(then she heard a voice)

Voice-hey cockroach...stop shouting...just because of ur
harsh voice my ears r hurting

Nisha-kabirr...yeh toh kabir ki awaaj hai(she starts
watching here n there)

Kabir-oye princess Victoria bus ke upar dekh

(she saw at the top...he was sitting there)

Nisha-tum bus ki chhat par kya kar rahe ho

Kabir-chhat

Nisha-i mean roof...yeah roof

Kabir-ohhh bus ki chat(n he starts laughing)

Nisha-bohot hansi a rhi hai

Kabir-nhi yaar but seriously chhat(she glared at him)okk okk
sorry...n u said na ki u hate me n don't want to see my face toh socha tumhe
apna chehra na dikhaon

Nisha-you hippo(she also goes there)bhaiya chaliye(driver
started the bus)

Kabir-u know what u r so weird yaar pehley khud sunati ho
phir dhundhti bhi khud hi ho

Nisha-emmm woh actually...i m sorry

Kabir-kya kaha tumne sorry...right

Nisha-did u said that right in a sarcastic way

Kabir-no...n yeah apology accepted

Nisha-thank u sir

Kabir-okkk...waisey chilla kyun rahi thi

Nisha-u idiot i thought u left me

Kabir-itni acchi kismet kahaan hai meri...tum toh mere gale
hi pad gyi ho

Nisha-kya kaha tumne

Kabir-u know what m feeling sleepy good ni8

Nisha-11 bje hain woh bhi dopahar ke

Kabir-so what tum toh so chuki na now lemme sleep

Scene 2

(at hotel room...saurav heard a knock on door)

Saurav-come in

Dolly-hii

Saurav-hey

Dolly-aapki baat hui nisha se

Saurav-nhi yaar aur tumhaari

Dolly-i have tried his number but he is not picking up

Saurav-i hope they both r fine

Dolly-humein bohot darr lag rha hai...Vasu aunty se toh
humne kuch kaha bhi nhi hai

Saurav-same here yaar Ramesh uncle called me but mainey unhe
bola ki she is safe...i just hope nishu thik ho

Dolly-nishu

Saurav-yeah main usey nishu bulata hoon

Dolly-awww thats so cute...u love her so much na

Saurav-love ummm i don't know yaaar...look we r childhood
frds n our parents said ki shaadi kar lo n we said yes...thats it...hum dost
hain

Dolly-tabhi tumne usey yahaan aney dia...matlab agar usey
koi aur mil gya toh

Saurav-toh main sabsey jada khush honga

Dolly-wow i really like ur thoughts

Saurav-thanks waisey do u love kabir

Dolly-god not again yaar meri dadi ye ques pooch pooch kar
mujhe roz tang karti hai...i don't love him he is my best frd thats it

Saurav-okk

Dolly-toh ab kya karna hai

Saurav-no idea

Dolly-get idea

(n they both starts laughing)

Dolly-chalo main tumhe delhi ghumati hoon

Saurav-gr8 idea...lets go

Scene 3

(Kabir opened his eyes n felt a light weight on his shoulder
n he saw nisha's angelic face...she was looking so innocent n beautiful)

Kabir(monologue)-nhi jaanta kyun par main chahta hoon meri
har subah aise hi ho jab mujhe tumhara chehra dikhey(n he starts
smiling...nisha shifted a bit n he realised that the sunrays r disturbing her
sleep...he moved closer to her n tried to block the sunrays by using his
hand...she felt better n again went to sleep)yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kyun
main itna possessive ho raha hoon kyun mujhe farak padta hai ki woh khush hai
ya nhi

(nisha woke up n saw him...they both were so close n she
was lost in his dark brown orbs)

(they both were staring each other suddenly the bus stopped
n they came back to reality)

Conductor-toh bus is dhabe pey 2 ghantey rukegi jise jo
khana hai kha le waisey bhi lunch ka time hai

(Nibir too came down but they both were ignoring each other)

Kabir-tum kuch khaogi

Nisha-nhi woh(suddenly she saw something)not again

Kabir-what

Nisha(she pointed towards some goons)-gunday

Kabir-yeh toh wohi hain

(goons already saw them n they were coming towards them)

Kabir-inhey toh main chodunga nhi

Nisha-pagal mat bano...public place hai humarey saath saath
bakki logo ko bhi pareshaani hogi

Kabir-so

Nisha-run

Kabirr-what 

Nisha-yeah mr hippo bhaago

(they both starts running n those goons were chasing them
Nibir ran towards the jungle)

Scene 4

(after some 15 mins)

(somewhere in the forest)

Nisha-hum hain kahaan

Kabir-jungle mein

Nisha-waah i know that but jungle mein kahaan

Kabir(with a r u serious look)-jungle mein bhi directions
hoti hain

Nisha-whatever uss taraf chaltey hain

(they again starts running but they stopped at a place)

Kabir-ab yeh kya hai

Nisha-waterfall aur aage raasta bhi nhi hai

Kabir-this is not waterfall this is our dead end

Nisha-dekho kabirr(suddenly someone pulled her)aah

Kabir(he turned n saw the goons)-chodo usey

Goon 1-bohot bhagaya tum dono ne ab bas

(Kabir was about to hit that goon but he put the gun on
nisha's forehead)

Goon 1-maarega maar na

Kabir-leave her right now...agar usey kuch bhi hua na toh

Goon-toh kya

(his chamchas came forward n starts beating kabir...they
were beating him so ruthlessley n kabir was badly injured)

Nisha-plzz leave him...chodo usey plzzz(she starts crying)

Goon 1-thik hai ji oye madam ji keh rhi hai chod do inhe 

(his chamchas left kabir)

Kabir-(he stands up n pointed a finger towards their boss)
usey chod ab

Goon 1-arey madam ji ne kaha tujhe chodney ke liye

(goon 1 pushed kabir lightly n because of his injured state
kabir lost his balance n nisha shouted but that
goon held his hand)

Goon 1-madam ji ab bolo

Goon 2-sir iski wajah se hamara sara maal gya 

Nisha-plzz don't do this chod do usey

Goon 1 -accha ji toh lijiye madam ji chod diya (he left
kabir's hand n kabir fell in the waterfall)

Nisha(she was shocked...she saw some flashbacks n shouted) RAGHUUU

(Precap - Nibir's Past)

awesome update continue soon and please update chupke chupke

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