NIBIR FF : DAASTAAN (Part 7 updated on page no 27)(discontinue)

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Hey frds...hi m sonal aka sonu...N today m here to present u all...i mean to my K khandaan... my new story

So here we go...

Death...the only reality of life but still we hate it because according to all of us life is beautiful...life is precious...so value it...kyunki zindagi toh ek baar hi milti hai...like really😲

I mean r u sure ki sirf ek baar milti hai...i don't think so...kai baar do baar bhi milti hai😉

Hey m not kidding...i m serious😈

Remember Om Shanti OM...according to SRK

Hamari life na filmon ki tarah hoti hai end mein sab thik ho hi jata hai...aur...aur agar thik na ho toh iska matlab picture abhi baaki hai mere dost😉

So now m presenting u all a story of love , sacrifice , betrayal , revenge , death n REINCARNATION

Yeah i admit that reincarnation is so unreal kind of concept but if u don't like it then plzzz STAY AWAY...but no negative comments

SO here is my new Nibir FF

DAASTAAN

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Caracter Sketch

Ramesh Gangwal -he is an Indian but lives in UK

Laxmi Gangwal-ramesh's wife

Nisha Gangwal-their only child

Badi Maa-Laxmi's mom

Digvijay Jain(DJ) -Ramesh's frd n his business partner

Ananya Jain(AJ)-DJ's wife

Saurav Jain-their only child...he n Nisha r getting married

Arjun Kumar- a delhi based business man

Vasu Kumar-his wife

Kabir Kumar (KK)-their son

Aman Kumar-their daughter

Dolly Sharma-KK's best frd...lives with her dadi n dadaji

Nemichand Sharma N Saroj Sharma - Dolly's dadaji n dadiji

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DAASTAAN

PROLOGUE

Scene 1

(somewhere in London)

(A beautiful girl is sitting in front of the mirror...someone came there)

Laxmi-Nishu tu kitni pyari lag rhi hai...aur tu kitni badi bhi ho gyi hai mera matlab aaj teri wedding hai

Nishu-Laxmi relax me...aur maa plzz aap mujhe emotional kar rahe ho...n m getting married to saurav yaar...he is my best frd n m sure he will be the best life partner

Badi maa-woh toh hai...chalo Laxmii baraat ane wali hai

(they both left from there)

Nisha-ek ajeeb si bechaini ho rhi ha...pta nhi aaj kya hone wala hai

Scene 2

(Mumbai...an award function)

Host - award for the best young entrepreneur goes to Mr Kabir Kumar

(a guy in his mid 20's goes to the stage n recd the award)

KK-wow...finally...dont worry guys m not here to deliver some long n boring speech(everybody laughs) just one word thanks maa papa Aman n Dolly...have a nice night guys(n he went back to his seat)

Dolly-kuch bol nhi sakte the

KK-bola toh

Dolly(by giving him u r unbelievable look)-suna maine(monologue)iska kuch nhi ho sakta...pta nhi kon si bandi isey pasand karegi

Scene 3

(in London)

Panditji-kanya ko mandap mein laiye

Laxmii-ji panditji

Saurav(in AJ's ear)-maa kaisi lag rhi hai nishu

AJ-chup kar badmash...ley a gyi teri nishu

(saurav was mesmerised by the girl who is soon going to be his wife)

(panditji starts chanting the mantras)

Saurav(in nishaa's ear)-maarne ka plan hai...bohot cute lag rhi ho

(nisha smiles...suddenly she felt something)

Nisha(monologue)-kya yeh sab pehle bhi hua hai...aisa kyun lga jaise this is not the first time(she closed her eyes n saw some flashbacks)

Panditji-ab pheron ke liye khade ho jaiye

(Nisha was still sitting)

Pandit ji-beta khade ho jaiye

Nisha(her eyes were still closed...n she saw a figure)-nhi plzz chod do usey

Saurav-Nishu what r u saying

Nisha-(she was shivering n suddenly she shouted) RAGHU(n she fainted)

So guys tell me shall i continue

N if u want pm then like the prologue n send me a buddy request

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so frds this is my new ff😃hope u all like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nisha Saurav ki shadi 😲
Toh Kabir ke peechle janam ka naam Raghu tha 😆
Reminds me of Raghu - Antra 😆
Chalo next part jaldi se dena .. and yeh mat bol na ki beech main mood off hogaya 😡😆
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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new stry
thanks fr writing n also fr t pm...
n well will u update chup chup ke?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sonu... u r back... that too with a bang... I luved it... do continue soon...
Posted: 9 years ago
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daastaan... title toh dhinchak hai!!
bole toh ek number... 😉
(ps : I still love ABCD wala dishu natz & their tapori style)
yet to read the character sketch & prologue...
but ek question hai!!!
plZZz ans...
u r starting new FF? wat abt CHUP CHUP KE then?? are u abandoning that???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue sonu di
A new concept :)
Continue soon
And thnx for the PM

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