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SCENE -1
AN ABANDONED PLACE


Samridh reached the place on time given by saurav but was dumbfounded realising it was an abandoned work site.

Sam - ye saurav ne mjhe esi jagah kyu bulaya h... vo esi darawni jagah kya karne wala h vo...

He came out of his car and stopped in side of the deserted road waiting for saurav to come. He was leaning against his car with his eyes closed when he sensed people around him. He opened his eyes and gasped in surprise seeing a bunch of angry looking people surrounding him. He looked at saurav with questioning eyes while he shrugged nonchalantly while others advanced towards him with predatory looks.

Umesh - hmmm... gang members utha lo ise... yehi h hmara suspect...

Everyone hummed in response and kabir saurav and sukku picked sam through his arm and took him inside the work site. They made him sit on a chair and started circling him with thoughtful faces. Samridh gulped hard as sukku bend on him with his hands resting on the arms of chair.

Sukku - to ye h vo jiski vajah se hmari kirti ek dum murjha gyi h...

Everyone (except sam) - correct...

Kabir - (in same stance as sukku) to yhi h vo jisne hmari kirti ko rulaya...

Everyone - (yet again) correct...

Saurav - (mimicking both the morons) to yehi h vo jiski wajah se usne us gadhe se shadi k lie ha kar di thi...

Everyone - (in unison) correct...

Nisha - (preparing a punch to throw at sam) ur yehi h vo jisse kirti pyaar karti h...

Everyone - correct..

Jwalu - par yehi h vo jiski wajah se vo itna roti h ur bilkul bhi bak bak nhi karti...

Dolly - to ab iski saja kya honi chahie...

Everybody hummed again at dolly question while samridh was looking at them with guilt and fear.

Sam - mai kuch bolu...

Alisha - chhoda hi kya h tumne kuch bolne k lie...

Aman - oe hoe... jara uski bhi sun lo...

Sam thanked aman and then looked at everyone with hopeful eyes. Nisha then communicated with others through eyes and then nodded at samridh signalling him to continue talking.

Sam - see m really really sorry meri wajah se kirti itni sad h ur itni pareshan bhi h par mai bus use thoda jalana chahta tha... i just wanted her to taste her own medicine but i didnt knew when it get out of hand... that ada purposefully did some horrendous things and kirti never listened to me... i knew her feelings for me and i do reciprocate it but before i could tell her anything she... she just left and now she isnt even ready to give me a glance... forget to talk to me in a civil manner...just help me pls... m too miserable without her...

When he finally stopped he looked up to see all of them watching with a curious expression.

Sam - what???

Nisha - what's adaa to u?

Sam - nothing... she was just there to make kirti jealous...

Sukku - do u think kirti will believe u or for that matter we??

Sam - i can try...

Kabir - u love her?

Sam - u still have that doubt... of course i love her... its been too long...

Umesh - so guys what say... bande ko chance dena chahie ki nhi...

Saurav - de dete h yaar... kam se kam hme hmari ms. Blah to waapas mil jaegi...

Alisha - ha nhi to pta chala fir se kisi aire gaire ladke se shadi k lie ha karde...

Sukku - ur agar kabhi meri behen dubara dukhi hui ya roi... to agli baar interrogation nhi hogi seedha punishment milegi samjhe...

Sam grinned wide and bobbed his head up and down nodding over enthusiastically.

Dolly - so guys lets make a plans... mission samridh kirti love stories...

Jwalu - plans nhi plan ur stories nhi story dolly di...

Dolly - tu samjh gyi na bus thik h...

Everybody rolled their eyes at her and started planning.


SCENE - 2
SAME PLACE


Sam - ye plan kaam to karega na...

Kabir - ha bhai karega... are 100 percent guarantee h...

Sam - ulta pad gya to...

Sukku - pyaar karta h na to ghabra kyu raha h... jyada se jyada kya hoga maar pad jaegi bus...

Sam - kyaaa...

Saurav - oo melodrama ab itna risk to lena hi padega na...

dolly - are u ready for proposals??

Sam - (nervous) yeah, I am


Alisha - to wait kis liye kar rahe ho, let jaao

Sam - yahaan? (pointing towards the barren ground)

Sukku - are tumhaara accident hua hai yaar


Sam - mera?

he asks and before he could react all the cousins pushed him down to the ground.


Aman - aur khoon?


Umesh - car me restaurant ka samaan rakha hai, usme se tomato ketchup leke aao


Sam - are you sure I am going to bath in tomato ketchup?


Jwalu - are tomatoes skin ke liye ache hain, don't worry...

Kabir came grinning wide with ketchup bottles in his hands, he looked at sam who was lying on the ground and then in one swift motion dumped all the ketchup on him. Everyone made some disgusting sounds as sam looked at himself horrified.

Nisha - kabir... itna khoon???

Kabir - are accident car se hua h... cycle se nhi...

Nisha made an oh face...

Saurav - are ab koi ms. Blah ko phone to karo...

Umesh - oh ha... ruko mai karta hu...

Aman - are laddu tum rehne do... plan ka second phase to sukku ko karna h na to vhi call karega...

Sukku - (making puppy face) kya bhabhi... aap bhi mjhe hi phasa rhe ho... lagta h aaj is samridh k sath sath mjhe bhi kirti ki maar khani hi padegi...

Everybody glared at him so he silently took his phone out and dialled kirti no. As the bell started ringing another side, he looked at others nervous.

Alisha - sukku ghabra kyu rhe ho.. tum to actor ho na to phir chalo shuru ho jao...

She grinned looking at him while he smiled too. Just then kirti picked up her phone and sukku immediately transferred in his character.

Kirti - (on phone) ha sukku bol kya hua?

Sukku - (nervous) k.. kirti... thodi si gadbad ho gyi yaar...

Kirti - kya kia tune...

Sukku - vo... vo na rashi ka call aaya tha to usne mjhe btaya ki tune job kyu chhodi...

Kirti - (attentive) to?? Tune kya kia...

Sukku - to vo teri prblm ko bulaya tha maine yha, sam ko, bus baat karne k lie... par...

Kirti - (anxious) par??

Sukku - par uska accident ho gya...

Kirti - whatt???

Sukku - tu jaldi se aaja.. mjhe nhi lagta ye ab bachega... mai tjhe address msg karta hu bye...

N with that he hastily cut the call and looked at others who were giving him a "what was that look.

Sukku - kyaa...

Saurav - kuch nhi...

Sukku then just shrugged and they started waiting for kirti. After 15 min. they saw a cab coming towards them with full speed.

Kabir -lagta h sali sahiba aa gyi... chalo sab chhup jao... sam dhang se acting karna bhai tera future aaj k drama p depend karta h... ur sukku no blunder samjha...

Sukku and samridh nodded while others scurried away hiding in nearby ruins. Kirti was hell worried thinking what she would be witnessing now. She cant loss her only love like this despite all the mishaps between them, she love him unconditionally. When finally kirti reached to the site, she found sukku standing by the scooter and samridh lying on the ground covered in blood. Her eyes bulged out and tears started pooling as a sharp stabbing pain arises in her chest. She ran to where samridh was lying and checked his breathing which was seized. Tears started pouring down as a thought of losing him and never being able to see him again flashed in her mind.

Kirti - (in sobbed whisper) sukku... ye sab???

Sukku - (nervous seeing her crying like this) vo mai... matlab mere.. nhi nisha ha nisha k scooter se iska accident ho gya...

Kirti - (looking at him with anger) scooter apne aap nhi chalti sukku... tune kia ye?

She pointed a finger at sam body and turned to look at sukku. Samridh opened his eye to take a look at her and then took some deep breaths before she turned to him again.

Sukku - ha vo nhi... nhi maine nhi... ye nisha k scooter ne... ye bhi nisha k jaisi hi gusse wali h to ise dekhke use gussa aa gya ur scooter ne ise thok dia.. Ha yehi hua tha...

Everyone looked at each other where they were hiding and snickered at sukku's horrible lying.

Kabir - nisha tera bhai kaunse angle se actor h... isse achhi acting to mai kar lu...

Saurav - seriously yaar... scooter ne thok dia... koi ise ye btao us jara si scooter se kisi ko itni nhi lagti ki vo marne ki haalat m aa jae... ur scooter apne aap kaise kisi ko maar sakti h...

Nisha glared at both of them and whacked their heads. They mewld in pain but then concentrated on the happenings in front of them.

Kirti stood up and slapped sukku across the face seething in anger and pain.

Kirti - (shaking him) are u mad???? Ye kya kia tune... agar use kuch ho gya to... ur ur ambulance... ambulance kha h..

Sukku started panicking but still managed.

Sukku - vo.. Vo aa rhi hogi rasta bhool gye honge... mai mai lke aata hu tu yha baith...

With this he ran away leaving behind a remorseful kirti and a smirking samridh. Kirti turned towards samridh and knelt down beside him. Seeing him like this lying lifeless in front of her broke her down completely. The tears of hurt and betrayal turned into pain, devastation and desperation as she bend down on him.


Kirti - sam... sam wake up... i m sorry... i m sorry... just wake up.. See i will talk to u... u wanted to talk to me hai na... see m here.. So talk to me pls... just talk to me...

She put her forehead on his and cried harder when an arm snaked itself around her.

Samridh - promise????

Kirti jerked up but couldnt get out of his hold. She looked at him with wide eyes which soon narrowed with anger burning in them.

Kirti - tum... tum thik ho to fir ye sab... oh god... u pranked me.. U.. u impeccable man... i hate u... UR TUM SAB BAHAR AAO ABHI... (she screamed when the understanding of all of it dawned upon her)

Everyone came out and stood in front of her with head hanging low. She gave all of them a deadly glare.

Kirti - unbelievable... tum log mere cousins ho ki iske... idiots...

She gave him a stink eye pushing him down, standing up and turned to strode away.

Samridh - (sitting up) but I LOVE U KIRTI... i luv u so damn much...

These 4 words made her stop abruptly and she turned to him. A gasp escaped her lips when she found him kneeling in front of her. Others stood behind them making a semi-circle to stop kirti from running again.

Samridh - (taking her hands in his) u remember i asked u for a dance in our farewell at school... do u know why? I asked u because i liked u from the day i laid my eyes on u on the first day of mine and that day after struggling with my broken confidence, i asked u for that dance and when u rejected me, everyone mocked me including my inner self... i was too shattered and then picking up that pieces i build myself again to this who i m now. The day i saw u again those feelings came back, which i so skillfully buried down in my heart, with double force. But this time i fought against them until they became so big that i couldnt ignore them anymore. Then u came to me, apologised and told me about your feelings and that was enough for me to win over that lost battle. I decided to bring ada and make u feel devastated and shattered just like how i felt that day but in this revenge i forgot about my feelings for u, ur feelings for me and hurt u so bad... but m sorry kirti, m so sorry... i never meant to hurt u like this i was a fool, a stupid, idiot, duffer who couldn't see that it doesnt matter when we realise, only matter is that we DO realize... and i know i love u so much and m sorry that i...

He looked down gulping the lump of regret and guilt when a pair of soft hand cupped his face. Kirti made him look up with tears shining in her eyes. She bend down and connect his forehead with her's.

Kirti - I love u too sam... i love u too...

Samridh broke into widest grin. He scooped her up in his arms and twirled her around while she laughed. He then placed her on the ground and hugged her tight.

kirti - m sorry sam... for watever i did in the past... pls forgive me?

Sam - i forgave u long back... u forgive me?

Kirti - i did...

Sam beamed at her and pecked her forehead out of love. Just then they heard few throat clearings and that's when they remembered that they aren't alone. They turned still in each other's embrace when the gang raised their eyebrows at them. Kirti scowled while samridh saluted. All of them bursted out laughing when a red faced sukku threw daggers at sam and kirti.

Sukku - ha ha haso haso... maar to maine khai h na...

Dolly - chup kar sukku... ab mission accomplish karne k lie sacrifices to karne padte h na... waise bhi all well when ends well...

Everybody agreed and started of to home leaving a sulking sukku behind. He saw dolly and saurav who were walking hand in hand, aman and umesh where aman was busy in admiring her laddu, kabir and nisha who as usual were bickering but one can see the love brimming in their eyes while kirti and samridh were still very much in each other's embrace. He took a deep sigh and closed his eyes.

Sukku - everyone has someone special... where is mine someone special god... i need her...

He opened his eyes and saw alisha walking towards him with a smile playing her lips and just like always he found himself drowning in her again.

Alisha - (snapping her fingers in front of him) kya hua sukku?

Sukku - kuch nhi... bus yunhi...

Alisha - tum thik ho na... jor se to nhi lga na tmhe...

She touched his cheek softly and grazed it with her thumb. She felt a surge of electricity passing through while numerous butterflies erupted inside her. Sukku involuntarily leaned into her touch while they stared deep into each other's eyes. Just then jwalu shouted sukku's name and their spell broke leaving them flustered.

Alisha - i..i m sorry vo... (she backed away and turned blushing beetroot red)

Sukku - ah... its... fine... lets go... (he scratched the back of his neck a little embarrassed)

They walked with holding hands which now has became their habit and suddenly sukku realised something, something he should have realised long back. He took a look at alisha who had a secret smile playing on her lips like she too just had her realisation.

SCENE -3
KNH


Nisha and kabir entered their home bickering about the whole fiasco they just made and were busy in pulling each other's leg.

Kabir - par sach nishu... sukku ne kya wahiyat excuse use kia i mean... (and he bursted out laughing)

Nisha - oe bus bhot ho gya... tb se dekh rhi hu mere bhai ka majak bnaye jaa rha h... apni shakal dekhi h aaine m... apni baari p to bola nhi ja rha tha i luv u... fattu khi ka...

Kabir - oe chipkali... tune kaunsa mjhe i luv u bol dia tha jo mjhe suna rhi h... bus sapno m hi khoi rehti thi... pehle hi bol dia hota to kam se kam itna kuch na hota... huh aae badi england ki queen...

Nisha - rehne de... tu bandar tha or bandar hi rhega... mai pehle bol bhi deti to teri samaj m thodi na aane wala tha... tu to h hi duffer...

Kabir - oe... ab tu jyada bol rhi h ha...

Nisha - ha to... tu kya karega...

Kabir - dekh mjhe gussa mat dila ha nhi to..

Nisha - nhi to kya ha... nhi to kya...

Kabir - nhi to mai tjhe kiss karunga...

Nisha - (still in the flow) ha to isme kaunsi badi baat h... mai bhi tjhe... (she understood what he said and blushed) kitta k h yaar tu kabir...

She hit him on his chest as he laughed and hold her against him.

Kabir - par nisha... sach agar hm dno ye baat jaldi realise kar lete to kitna achha hota... nhi?

Nisha - realise to kar lia tha par bus keh hi nhi paye...

Kabir - kaash keh dia hota to mjhe tjhse door nhi jna padta ur na hi tjhe itna rulaya hota maine...

Nisha - chhod na... jo hua achha hua... vo nhi hota to kya pata hm sath na hote...

Kabir - are ese kaise sath nhi hote... nisha kabir ki h ur kabir nisha ka... isilie rasta koi bhi ho milna to tjhse hi tha mjhe... ur vaise bhi mere siwa kaun h tjhe jhelne wala meri jhansi ki rani..

Nisha - kabirr.. yaar koi achha romantic moment kharab karna na tjhse sikhe...

Kabir - achha ji mai romantic nhi hu... ruk abhi batata hu tjhe...

With that he picked her up in his arms as she squealed loudly. He laughed and then took her to their room to show how romantic he is.


SCENE - 4
VIRAJ HOUSE


Viraj was in his study writing his diary when someone came, knocking at his door.

Viraj - come in...

Servant - viraj sir, khana ready h... maaji ne kha h aap niche aa jaye...

Viraj - aap chalie hm aate h...

Viraj dismissed him and finished his writing. Completing it, he stood up and started for dining table. As soon as he reached the stairs, he heard a melodic laughter booming in the hall. He furrowed his forehead thinking who might it be. But that confusion soon vanished when reached on the last step to greet a breathtaking site of kaira laughing her heart out at something vasu was saying. Suddenly she threw her head back laughing, her hair flowed with the wind, her hands were on that rosy cheek of hers while her eyes crinkled as tears of joy slipped through them. He stood there transfixed at the spot admiring her with a goofy smile when vasu located him and observed his reactions. A triumphant smile made its way on her face when kaira followed her gaze and blushed seeing viraj giving her an appreciating look.

Vasu - are viraj... vha kya khade h aap idhar aaeye.. dekhie aaj hmne kaira ko dinner p invite kia h...

Viraj - (sitting beside vasu) kab?? Ur aapne hme to nhi btaya maa...

Vasu - ab hm sab kuch aapko bta kar thodi karte h.. vaise bhi hm bhot time se kaira ko dinner par invite karna chahte the... islie kar lia... aapko koi prblm h...

Viraj - nhi maa... hm to bus ese hi puch rhe the... aap bhi na..

Vasu - hm kya viraj... aap to hmse baat karte nhi h ab hme koi to chahie na jisk sath hm apna dil lga sake..

All of them started eating food as one of the servant served them and kept on the conversation.

Kaira - kyu aunty viraj aapke sath time spend nhi karte?

Vasu - jaise aapko kuch pta hi nhi kaiea... inhe aapne bina file ya phone k dekha h kya? Jab dekho kabhi yha bhagte rehte h kabhi vha...

Kaira - ye to galat baat h viraj... aapko aunty ko bhi time dena chahie.

Viraj tried to butt in the convo bit vasu didnt let him.

Vasu - vo hi to hm inse kehte h... isilie ab hmne socha h ki inki shadi karwa denge hm... ab ur intzaar nhi karenge...

The words didnt left her mouth fully when the other two choked on their food.

Kairaj (unison & coughing) - shaadiii...

Vasu - (nonchalantly) ha ur kya.. kam se kam hmari bahu k saath to hm apna dil lga sakenge ur fir aapki shadi ho jaegi to aap bhi ghar par thoda dhyaan denge... waise hi umar ho gyi h aapki ab viraj ur hmari bhi ab hm ur wait nhi kar sakte...

She silently observed the two flabbergasted and turmoiled faces. The discomfort on their faces were clear as day. Where kaira was trying to hide her sadness by putting a sad smile, viraj was scowling at his food like it was culprit of his problems. Vasu had to refrain herself from shaking her head at the two stubborn people and twist their ears so that they can do the obvious. But now was the step - 2 of her plan.

Vasu - khair chhodie... is mamle ko hm nipta lenge... waise bhi hmne aapke lie ladkia dekhna shuru kar dia h...

Viraj looked at his mother horrified while kaira tried to blink back the pooling tears. For once vasu thought to drop the idea but then she had to do it for her son.

Vasu - (looking at her phone) oh... ye kya hmare phone par to paani gir gya... nisha ka call aa rha tha... kaira beta do min hme apna phone dengi? Hme nisha ki bhot fikr ho rhi h waise hi vo aajkal itni pareshan h...

Viraj - maa hm apna phone laa dete h.. upar hi h...

Vasu - nhi hme nisha se abhi baat karni h... ur jab kaira ko koi prblm nhi h to aapko kya problm h.. hai na kaira...

Kaira - ji aunty lijie na... mai nisha ko call mila deti hu...

Vasu - are aap khana khaeye beta... hme nisha ka no. Pta h hm lga lenge... (she stood up to went out) hm abhi aaye...

Saying that vasu scurried away from the hall and took out kaira parent no. from it.

Vasu - sorry kaira... hme aapki permission k bina ye karna pada but kya kare aap dno ko raste p laane ka yhi ek tarika bacha h hmare paas... ur ab nisha ko call bhi kar hi lete h...

Here viraj and kaira were sitting gloomily lost in thoughts.

Kaira - kaira... ab kya karengi aap... do baar aap already viraj ko kho chuki h... agar is baar esa kuch hua to is dil k itne tukde honge ki chah k bhi aap bator nhi paengi...

Viraj - viraj... ab matter haath se nikalta jaa rha h... agar maa ne aapki shadi khi fix kar di..fir aap kya karenge... pehle hi bhot mauke kho chuke h aap... ab aur nhi kho sakte... sochie kuch to sochie...

Viraj - (clearing his throat) ahmm... kaira hme kuch kehna h...

Kaira - ji viraj... kahie...

Viraj - vo hm... hm kehna chahte the ki hm... hm bhot pyaar karte h...

Kaira - ji???

Just then viraj saw vasu coming back.

Viraj - maa se... hm maa se bhot pyaar karte h...

Kaira - (a fake smile) ji.. viraj hm jante h aap maa se i mean aunty se bhot pyaar karte h...

Viraj too smiled at her and just then vasu joined them back. She handed kaira phone to her and smiled slyly at herself.

Viraj - (monologue) u r pathetic viraj singh rathore... aapka kuch nhi ho sakta...
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A/N- THAT WAS SOME GOOD COMEBACK I THINK... M BACK IN TSC PEOPLE... MISSED U SOOO MUCH
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Scene 1&4 by Mansi and Scene 2& 3 by Shibani

~~Scene 1~~
*Gangwal House, UmAn's room*

Aman was pacing in her room with a concerned expression etched on her face. It had been two days since umesh had talked to her civilly. He is becoming more n more distance with passing time always busy with shanaya. He even forgot about their restaurant. She remember how he ditched her when they were about to meet an important client for their business and went away because his choco pie needs him. He didnt even accompany her to home now. Her head started pounding with all of this thinking and she had to sit to regain composure. She is feeling weak from quite a few weeks now. Headaches, nausea, dizziness is becoming prominent day by day. She is feeling weak and she remember how earlier today she was about to faint in the kitchen but laxmi chachi steadied her. She knew where all these signs are indicating to. She isnt quite sharp but she knows what her body is telling her.

Aman took a look at her handbag and take out the packet with dread feeling her. She was about to go to doctor but as umesh didnt bother to accompany her and he didnt even know that something's wrong with her, she decided to do it. With a shaky breath, she eyed the kit in her hand and with a resolve in her heart went to took the test.

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It has been two hours since she did the test but still she couldn't gather her courage to take a look at it. Oh how much she wished that umesh will be here with her in this moment but alas he is too busy then to pay attention to his own wife. Sighing painfully, she folds her hands and prayed.

Aman - babaji, pls sab kuch pehle jaisa kar do... mjhe mera pehle wala pyaara laddu lauta do...

With this she took the white strip and saw the result. The two pink lines almost made her faint again as a soft gasp escape against her palm which rested on her mouth while a tear mixed of joy and sadness trickled down her face following by some more. She couldnt believe that she was PREGNANT. THAT SHE AND HER LADDO IS GOING TO BE PARENTS...

Aman - mai... mai pregnant... hae rabba... matlab mere andar chhota sa laddu h... (she caressed her belly lovingly) sab kitne khush honge sun k ur laddu... laddu to khushi se... (Just then a nagging thought came to her mind) laddu... laddu to aaj kal mjhse thik se baat tk nhi karta... kya pta ye jaan kar khush hoga bhi ki nhi... khi vo ise ek burden samjhega to... hmare beech itni duria kaise aa gyi ki ab mai ye tk nhi janti ki vo kya sochega is baar m... hm ek dusre se pyaar karte h to fir ye sab kaise ho gya... laddu aajkal na meri baat sunta h na mjhpar dhyaan hi deta h... aajkal to ese door bhagta h mjhse jaise mai koi bimari hu... upar se vo uski chocopie jab dekho beech m aati rehti h... waapas kyu nhi chali jati vo jha se aae h... uski wajah se... (she started sobbing) nhi uski kya galti h... ye duriya shayad hm dno ki wajah se hi aae h... par ab... ab kya hoga... hm dno is rishte ko to sambhal nhi paa rhe h... is bachhe ko kaise sambhalenge... i cant give my child a broken family... broken parents... a child deserves love and affection not quarles every now and then and that's what i and laddu used to do now...

She started distressing herself over the matter thinking about it and soon her throbbing headache came back with a blot of dizziness again. She then reached for her phone and booked an appointment later in the day for a test to be done so that she can get sure that she is pregnant while there were numerous thoughts haunting her conscience at the very moment.

~~Scene 2~~

*Viraj's Bedroom*

Viraj was in his room, thinking about his conversation with Kaira on the phone, when he felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned to look at Vasundhara, who smiled at him cheekily.

Viraj- Kya hua Maa? Aap aise ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe ho?

Vasundhara-(sitting near him) Hum kahaan ajeeb behave kar rahe hai? Ajeeb toh aap hain...

Viraj- Humne kya kiya?

Vasundhara- Book ulta pakad ke padh rahe hai aap Viraj...

Viraj looked at the book in his hand and realizing that he was holding it upside down, sighed and closed it.

Vasundhara-(excited) Pata hai Viraj, humne kal ek sapna dekha...

Viraj- (nonchalantly) Toh usmein badi kya baat hai? SOta hua aadmi sapne dekhta hai, this isn't a big discovery Maa..

Vasundhara- Puchoge nahi, sapne mein humne kise dekha?

Viraj- Kise dekha aapne?

Vasundhara- Aapke bete ko...

Viraj-(shocked) Kya?

Vasundahra0 (happily) Haan Viraj...humne dekha, ki aap Papa ban gaye hai, aur aapka beta bilkul aapki tarah dikhta hai...

Viraj-(awkwardly) Maa, aaj-kal aap kuch zyaada hi ajeeb sapne nahi dekhti ho?

Vasundhara-(explaining) Sapne toh sapne hite hai Viraj...ab sapno pe humara koi control hota hai kya?

Viraj- Maa, u need to rest...seriously...Nisha pregnant nahi hai, yeh aapke liye bahut abda sadma tha I guess...

Vasundhara- Koi sadma-wadma nahi tha... Viraj, beta kar lo naa shaadi...

Viraj-(whining) Maa! This isn't my age to get married?

Vasundhara- Toh kya 50 hoke shaadi karege aap?

Viraj-(annoyed) Haan!

Vasundhara- Tab tak Kabir-Nisha ke bacche 12th ki exam answer karenge Viraj!

Viraj- Humari beewi unhe uss exam ke liye tutor karegi...

Vasundhara- Kitne weird bacche hai humare! Ek hai, jinhone jald-baaji mein shaadi ki, aur doosre hai, jinhe shaadi hi nahi karni...(dramatically) Lagta hai hum apne grandchildren dekh hi nahi paayenge...

Viraj-Maa...that was too dramatic!

Vasundhara- Aapko shaadi nahi karni?

Viraj- (firmly) Nahi!

Vasundahra0 Toh thikh hai...You have to get married to the girl I choose! And my decision is final!

Viraj looked at her in shock. He threw his hands in the air in dismay and walked out of the room. Vasundhara looked at his retreating figure and face palmed.

Vasundhara- hey Bhagwaan! Ab aap hi madat kar do humari...

~~Scene 3~~

*Gangwal House*

Sukku logged in his Facebook account, and saw that Alisha had changed her DP. She was wearing a pink anarkali, eyes downcast and blushing in the picture. He smiled as his fingers traced her smile. He kept staring at the picture for a few seconds. Sukku realized what he was doing and shut the laptop.

Sukku- Hey Sukku! Kya ho gaya hai tujhe? Alisha ko dekh kar itna lost-lost kyun ho jaata hai tu?

He recalled the moments he spent with her, not realizing that he was smiling. He stood infront of the mirror, and was surprised to see Alisha's reflection. He turned to find no one.

Sukku face palmed. Their beautiful moments flashed infront of his eyes, and he recalled that Nisha too tried thinking of her soul mate with her eyes closed and had told him, that whenever she closed her eyes, the first person she would think was of Kabir.

Sukku-(opeing his eyes) So that means, Alisha is my soul mate?

He looked at his reflection and imagined Alisha again, who this time was smiling at him. He squealed in glee.

Sukku- Finally! I solved this confusing puzzle! I love you Alisha... I love you very much! I need to tell you this! But kya main tumse keh paaungi?

He looked at the family photo that hung on the wall and smiled.

Sukku- (to the picture)Kabir jiju...Apne saale sahab ki help karna...

Here Alisha was in her room, with a pen in her hand, jotting down what had happened with Samridh- Kirti...

Alisha-(to herself) I know it is love... I saw the love in their eyes... Sab ko kisi-na-kisi se pyaar hai... and I know ki I love Sukku...par main usse yeh baat kiase batau...(thinking for some time) Idea! bhabhi ki help leti hoon...

~~Scene 4~~
*KNH*

Nisha was in their bedroom surfing through net and looking for different pranks to play on her dearest hubby so she can get back on him for throwing ice cold water on her in the morning. Soon she found what she was looking for and grinned evilly.

Nisha - bhot shauk h na tjhe mjhse panga lene ka ab dekh mai tera kya haal karti hu mere pyaare patidev

She was about to get up and prepare for her prank when a highly delighted and squealing like a schoolgirl, kabir came barging and picked her up in his arms. She gasped loudly as he twirled her around so fast that her head started spinning and she had to clutch kabir torso tightly. Finally when his rush subsided, he put her on the bed only to be get swatted by a pillow.

Kabir - (whining) whattt...

Nisha - are u mad or what... Chakkar aa gya mjhe... kis khushi m itna paagal hua h tu jo mjhe pankha samjh k ghuma rha tha...

Kabir pouted and then grinned wide.

Kabir - u know what happened today???

Nisha - (rolling her eyes) i ' m not an astrologer remember...

Kabir - (pouting) don't be mad about the mng... u know u love me...

Nisha - yeah... i dont know why...

Kabir - nishaaa... sorry na... dekh ab jo btane wala hu na use sun k tere face p na 1000 watt wali smile aa jaegi...

Nisha - (nonchalantly) kyu... lsd se call aa gya kya?

Kabir - ha nisha... lsd se call aaya h mjhe... internship karne k lie... can u imagine they actually considered me after i cancelled my admission just in the last sem... oh my god nisha... can u believe it...

He squealed again but this time nisha was with him in it. They both started jumping in excitement and nisha threw her arms around him and squeezed the life out of him.

Nisha - sachhiii????

Kabir - sachhi muchhi kuchhi nisha ki bachhi... i got the internshippp...

Nisha kissed his cheeks and hugged him again when two three stubborn tears leaked away. She quickly wiped them so that he won't notice but kabira is kabira who always notices every single thing about her. So he shook his head and kissed her eyes instead.
Nisha - m so happy kabir... finally tera dream poora hoga ab... ur is baar tjhe koi nhi rokega... mai bhi nhi...

Kabir smiled and ruffled her hair. But she saw that that smile didn't reach his eyes and she knew there is more to this news.

Nisha - kabir... kuch ur bhi btana h kya... kuch ur bhi hua kya...

Kabir - (sighing) maine internship k lie mana kar dia nisha...

Nisha - (shocked) kyu kabir... tune fir se esa kyu kia... paagal ho gya h kya... dekh agar tere faisle ki wajah mai hu na to...

Kabir - (putting his palm over her mouth) ohho chup meri jhansi ki rani... har baat na tjhse related nhi hoti to khud ko thodi kam imp dia kar...( he chuckled as she hit his arm) maine islie mna kia kyuki maine ek national dance reality show m hissa lene ka faisla kiya h... ur isse pehle ki tu mjhe daante mai tjhe bta du ki ye maine kyu kia...

He removed his hand from her mouth and she crossed her arms over her chest in a dominating stance, ready to lecture him. But he made her sit on the bed and knelt down in front of her.

Kabir - ye sab maine khud k lie nhi apne students k lie kia nisha... tjhe pta h subah jab unhe pta chala ki jaipur m "Dance Dil Se" ke audition hai ur ye kitna bda show h to unke chehre p itni khushi thi. na ki unka dil todke mai apne sapne k lie ha nhi kh paya... ur vo sab itna khush the ur jaane kya kya plan kar lia un bachho ne... kaunsa style kaise costumes kaise grp sab kuch... It's a dance reality show, which is being judged by the best choreographers of Bollywood. Ur mai unka khwab nhi tod paya nisha... mera kya h mere career ko to is show se bhi bda break mil jaega par agar sath m mere students ka bhi future bn jae to ye to double khushi hui na... ur fir isi bahane se meri academy bhi ur famous ho jaegi... i want to make them win this competition nisha... i know they deserve it... and mostly i want to make u proud of me...

Nisha - (with tears in her eyes) m already proud of u kabir... i already m... and m with u in ur decision... i know u will win and will accomplish ur goal...

She hugged him as he rested his head in her lap feeling happier than ever. She is with him and that's enough of motivation and trust he needed. She kissed his hair and proceeded to hug him again when her phone rang loudly. Seeing viraj no.on the screen she picked up the call.

Viraj - (happily) nisha... aapke lie ek good news h...

Nisha - (confused) kya sir...

Viraj - aapko yaad h kuch din pehle ek scout aaye the hmari academy m inspection k lie... unhone aapko khelte hue dekha ur vo bhot impress hue isilie unhone aapko select kia h national shooting competition k lie as a privileged player... ur aapko sunday ko delhi jana h as monday is the commencement of game...

Nisha - (jumped up in happiness almost knocking kabir on the floor) sach viraj sir???? Mai...

Viraj - ha nisha sach... ab aap jaldi se packing shuru kijie ur kabir ko bhi bta dijie... hme kuch formalities poori karni h hm baad m baat karenege...

He hanged up and nisha let out a squeal of joy almost deafening kabir.

Kabir - (rubbing his head) ohho kya hua... kyu cheekh rhi h ab...

Nisha - kabir kabir kabir... mai nationals k lie select ho gyi... mjhe delhi jana hoga sunday ko... oh my god... i cant believe it...

She couldn't complete her sentence as kabir pulled her and kissed her squarely on her mouth shutting her brain and words simultaneously. After a while he pulled away leaving them breathless.

Nisha - what was that for...

Kabir - (shrugging his shoulder) i m happy for both us and i wanted to...

He winked as she blushed scarlet and hid her face in his embrace enjoying the news of happiness they both just received. She new its a good sign... a sign of fresh start and happiness in their lives together.

A/N- I DONT KNOW EVEN A THING ABOUT GAMES SO THIS ALL IS MADE UP... IF ITS NOT TRUE THEN PLS BEAR IT... ITS FICTIONAL.

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~~Scene 1~~

Sukku entered the academy to see the students and Kabir rehearsing.

Sukku- Hey Kabir!

Kabir-(surprised) Arrey, saale sahab aap yaahan? Kuch kaam tha kya?

Sukku- (cheekily) Kaam ho toh hi main apne jiju se milne aa sakta hoon kya? Warna nahi aa sakta kya?

Kabir- Accha, toh tu pakka kisi kaam se aaya hai.. Excuse me guys...Tab tak tum log yeh steps rehearse karna... (to a student) Vijesh and Simran, I want you to be prefect with the lift, ok?

The students nodded. He turned to leave, but a student called him

Deepti-Sir, aaj Alisha mam nahi aayengi kya?

Sukku blushed and Kabir didn't fail to notice this.

Kabir- Haan bas aati hi hogi... Nisha se milne gayi hai

Kabir and Sukku went out of the room.

Kabir- Bolo beta, kya kar tumhare liye hai?

Sukku- Tumhe yaad hai, we helped you propose Nisha?

Kabir-(grateful) Ofcourse! Agar tum log nahi hote, toh main Nsiha ko kabhi propose nahi kar paata...par tu mujhe flashback mein kyun le jaa raha hai?

Sukku-(blushing) Mujhe bhi help chahiye...

Kabir- Woh main samajh gaya...lekin karu kya?

Sukku-(without thinking) Propose..

Kabir-(shocked) Kya? Main tujhe kyun propose karu?

Sukku-(realizing what he said) I mean, help me to propose... (blushing)Alisha...

Kabir- (teasing) Haaye re mere Siddharth Kapoor... Hum toh heroin ko movie ke end mein propose karte hai, aur aap interval mein karoge?

Sukku blushed.

Kabir- Dekh, agar Alisha Nisha jaisi jhalli hoti naa, toh tujhe bahut papad belne padte...par tera kaam aasaan hai...

He suggested him an idea which Sukku liked. He left from the academy, not before being teased by Kabir.

Here Alisha came to NKH, to find Nisha watching TV.

Nisha- Alisha, tu academy nahi gayi?

Alisha-(sitting) Nahi Bhabhi, woh meri friend ko uski wedding preparations mein help karne uske ghar gayi thi...

Nisha- Oh accha... Waise sab e shaadi yaa pyaar ka season chal raha hai kya? Samridh-Kirti ka confession ho gaya, tumhari friend ki shaadi hai...(teasing)ab uske friend ka shaadi ke baare mein kya khayaal hai?

Alisha blushed.

Nisha- Woh Sukku naa, ek number ka gadha hai...He won't realize his feelings soon... so I suggest you to drop hints...

Alisha blushed more.

Nisha-(laughing) Dekho kaise sharma rahi hai...

Alisha-(blushing) Bas kijiye Bhabhi... ab aur mat tease kijiye...

Nisha-Ok Suklisha...

Alisha-(confused) Suklisha?

Nisha- Suketu- Alisha...

Alisha blushed and ran in her room, while Nisha continued laughing.

~~Scene 2~~

*La Morte School*

The students were busy answering their Biology test, some tensed and scared.

Jwala looked at the test paper, with sweat beads on her face. She wiped her face and picked the pen from the table, but to her dismay, she couldn't remember a single answer.

Jwala- (In mind, tensed) Squirrel ka scientific name kya hai yaar? Homo Sapiens? Idiot, woh human hai...

The teacher passed her, and she felt someone nudge her from behind. She touched her back to the head rest of the bench, and heard Rishi whispering, "Aate hai answers?

Jwala controlled the tears in her eyes and nodded in a no. She felt him tap her from the behind again. This time, she was totally pissed off and turned a little. He signed her to look down. She saw a paper in his hand. She looked at him in shock and he winked.

She took the paper from him, and quickly jotted down the first answer, "Sciuridae with relief on her face. The test was nothing but a ten marks one, which asked the scientific names of animals.

Jwlaa-(in mind) Thank you Rishi, with these names, I can atleast score the internals.

She answered a few more questions and then threw the paper on the floor unknowingly. The teacher went around, collecting the answer papers. He neared Jwala and looked at the floor. Jwala and Rishi flowed hues eyes and their eyes went wide with shock and fear. The teacher picked up the paper and the whole class burst into whispers and gasps of shock.

Teacher-(shouting) Yeh kya hai Jwala? Copy? You were planning to cheat for the test? Huh? Answer me...

Jwala-(stammering) Woh paper...mera..sir...actually...

Suddenly, their attention was diverted to the occupant of adjecent's row's third seat, Vikrant, who was standing and had spoken out loud, "Sir, woh paper mera hai...

The teacher eyed him angrily and went to his bench. Jwala had tears in her eyes, while Rishi had nothing, but confusion on his face.

Teacher- Is it, Mr. Vikrant Shrivastav?

Vikrant-Actually sir, maine yeh paper study ke reference ke liye banaya tha, and test ke pehle teacher's desk pe rakha tha, par pata nahi kaise, woh wahaan, first bench pe pahucha...

He masked his face with honesty and ignorance at the same time.

Teacher- And why should I believe you? Kya bharosa ki yeh paper tumhara hai?

Vikrant- Sir, there is a star drawn behind the answers.

Rishi gasped in shcok as the teacher confirmed whatever Rishi said.

Teacher- Since I had seen you finish the test without copying, I believe you... lekin, that deosn't mean that this issue ends here...

The beel rang and he collected the papers of the rest of the students and elft. Rishi and Jwala looked at Vikrant in shock, who behaved as if nothing had happened and started eating his tiffin.

Jwala went to him.

Jwala- Thanks Vikrant.

Vikrant- Thanks mat bol yaar...kabhi-kabhi jhoot bolne se doosron ka bhala ho jaata hai...

Rishi joined them.

Vikrant- Shukra manan, ki I had seen you preparing the paper...agar woh star mujhe nahi dikhta, toh hum teeno ki band baaja baarat ho jaati hai...

He laughed and Jwala shook her head, with tears in her eyes.

Vikrant- Hey Senortia, mujhe roti hui ladkiyan, bilkul pasand nahi hai...

Jwala laughed. Rishi forwarded his hand for a handshake. Vikrant handshaked with him, with a smile on his face.

Rishi- Friends...

Vikrant- Correction, Friends forever...

~~Scene 3~~

*Hospital*

Aman impatiently waited for the doctor, who checked the results of her blood test.

Aman-(impatiently) Kya results positive hai doctor?

Doctor-(happily) Haan Amanpreet, the results are positive and you are completely healthy enough to have a baby now...Congratulations!

Aman-(excited) Thanks a lot doctor for confirming the news...I'll take your leave now...

The doctor nodded and she exited the cabin. The nurse told her to wait for a few minutes outside the cabin. She sat on the chair, and unintentionally heard the woman sitting next to her talk on the mobile.

Woman-(on the call) Look Dev, I am not ready... Tumhe kya lagta hai, ki mere koi ambitions nahi hai? We aren't financially or emotionally ready for a child... aur doctor bhi keh rahe the ki I am very weak right now... Please Dev, try to understand...

Her husband spoke from the other end for a few seconds, while the lady rubbed her forehead in frustration. Aman felt a tap on her shoulder, so looked up at the nurse, who had the report file in her hand. She took the file and stood up to leave, her eyes focused on the lady, who had disconnected the call in anger.

The auto ran smoothly on the road, but Aman had a havoc of thoughts in her mind.

*Flashback*

Umesh entered the room and called Shanaya, with whom he spoke for 15 minutes. Each passing minute, his anger was increasing. Aman was observing this and was confused whether to tell him or not, when he hanged the call and walked towards the door of the room.

Aman- Laddoo...

Umesh- (annoyed) Not now Aman... mujhe kahin jaana hai...

Aman- Shanaya ke paas naa?

Umesh nodded in a yes.

Aman- Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai...

Umesh- Hum baad mein baat kare, please... Shanaya needs me now...

Aman-(impatiently) So do I Laddoo...

Umesh-(annoyed) Look Aman, Shanaya is in a big problem right now... Her boyfriend has broken up wither, and as her friend, I have to be with her... Toh tumhe jo bhi kehna, baad mein kao..

Aman-(trying to calm herself) I won't take much time...

Umesh-(shouting) Kaha naa baad mein?

He walked out of the room, without seeing the tear drops, that had collected in Aman's eyes. Aman sat on the bed and wiped her tears. Her mobile rang, and it was message from the doctor that her appointment was confirmed.

*Flashback ends*

She removed the mobile from her bag and dialed the number. After three rings, she heard the receptionist voice.

Receptionist- City Hospital...How may I help you?

Aman- I need an appointment to meet Dr. Samiksha...

Receptionist- Ji, kya main jaan sakti hoon kyun?

Aman- I want to abort my child...

Receptionist told her the date and time. She hanged the call.

Aman-(in mind) Babaji, iss galti ke liye mujhe maaf karna... lekin Laddoo aur mere rishte ko dekh kar, mujhe nahi lagata ki hume iss bacche ko nahi sambhal paayenge... kaash laddoo mere saath iss waqt hota...mujhe yeh decision nahi lena, lekin hum sabke liye yahin decision sahi hai...

The auto driver looked at the girl, who wiped her tears, through the rear-view-mirror.

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Scene 1&2 by Sarthak and 3&4 by Shibani

~~Scene 1~~

**Kabir's Dance Academy**
Kabir - 5 4 3 2 1 ...and then this...iss hand ko peeche se bahut hi cleanly nikalna hai else judeges won't be able to notice the minute detailing of our steps. Sab logo ko meri baat samjh aa gayi.

All his students (in unison)- Yes sir.
Kabir - very good ab ek baar sab try karo.
His students start performing the steps.
Kabir - very good guys...but thoda sa energy aur daalo.. We have to nail this , right ???
Everyone - Right.
Kabir - Guys ab 45 minutes ka lunch break lete hai , we will resume after exactly 45 minutes so please koi late mat hona.
His students nod in yes and leave for their homes.
Kabir (to himself) - common kabire sab sahi chal raha hai.. steps mai thodi si energy aur then we will be near perfection. But yaar sab sahi ho toh jayega na ??
Ho jayega'.
Kabir turned behind upon hearing the familiar voice and yes he was right it was Nisha.
Kabir went to the gate and hugged her.
Kabir - Nishu tu yaha achanak , kaise I mean sab theek toh hai na?? Aaj toh mai tiffin bhi ghar par nahi bhula..phir bhi tu lunch time par yaha aa gayi, dekh kuch gadbad ho gayi ho toh mujhe bata de hum dono milkar handle kar lenge.

Nisha - kabir..kabir relax yaar kuch nahi hua..and lunch par surprise visit dene ka license sirf tere pass hai kya?? Aaj hume 30 minutes pehle lunch break mil gaya toh maine socha kyon na apne pyaare se husband ko lunch par company dedu. Issi bahane hum saath mai kuch time spend kar lenge .

Kabir - arrey waah ek baat toh hai wifey.
Nisha - kya??
Kabir - mere jaise smart insaan ke saath rehte rehte tu bhi badi smart hoti jaa rahi hai.
Nisha - Oh hello mai pehle se bahut smart thi. Aur ab yeh bakwaas band kar aur yeh bata ki practice kaisi chal rahi hai ??

Kabir - practice wagerah toh sab first class but tu kaha in sab baato ko lekar baith gayi hamari lunch date ka time nikla jaa raha hai.

Nisha - ok tu fatafat hath muh dhole mai hum dono ka khana lagati hu.
Kabir nodded in yes and later they both had lunch together , spending some quality time with each other.

After 45 minutes.
Nisha - chal kabir ab bahut baate ho gayi tere students bhi aane lag gaye , isliye mai chalti hu mujhe bhi lakshya Academy vaapis time par pahuchna hai.

Kabir - ok nishu phir shaam ko ghar par milte hai , bye take care.

Nisha turned to leave but was stopped by kabir.
Nisha - ab kya hua.
Kabir - thanks
Nisha - kis liye??
Kabir - yaha time nikalkar aane ke liye , mujhe bahut accha laga.
Nisha ( with a smile) - tujhe accha lage isliye hi toh mai yaha aayi thi.
They hug each other.
Nisha - ok ab mai chalu ??Bye..
Kabir - bye.

~~Scene 2~~

*UmAn's room at Gangwal house.*
Umesh - yaar aaj phir mai restaurant ke liye late ho gaya. Aur pata nahi mera phone kaha rakh diya maine. Chalo voh raha table par.
While picking up his phone Umesh noticed something lying on the table.

Umesh - arrey yeh hospital ki file kiski hai ?? (Reading the name) Aman ki file par kyon
He opens the file and sees A man's reports.
Umesh -(shocked) kya ?? Aman pregnant hai..(happy)iska MATLAB mai papa ban ne wala hu...Itni badi khush khabri ...Par Aman ne mujhe bataya kyon nahi..Ho sakta hai batane hi vaali ho.
He called out to Aman on the top of his voice
Umesh - Aman Aman kaha ho tum.
Umesh spots Rukma
Umesh - Rukma tumne Aman ko dekha??
Rukma - hai Bhaiya bhabhi toh thodi der pehle hi ghar se nikli hai , par hua kya hai??
Umesh - abhi batata hu but pehle mujhe Aman se baat karni hai.
He dials Aman's number on his phone.
Umesh- hello
Aman (in a low voice) - ha ladoo bolo..
Umesh ( in a happy voice) - Aman mai papa ban ne wala hu...tum ne yeh baat batayi kyon nahi kitni khushi ki baat hai..yeh meri life ki sabse badi khush khabri hai. Aman ??
Tum kuch bol kyon nahi rahi ho??

Aman- woh ..woh ..darsasal mai abhi city hospital mai hu..
Umesh - hospital ?? Par kyon sab theek toh hai na..
Aman - ladoo mujhe nahi lagta ki hum abhi bachhe ke liye ready hai . Isliye maine faisla kiya hai ki mai yeh baccha abort kara dungi. Mera abhi Dr. Samiksha ke saath appointment hai.

Umesh - kya ?? Tum pagal toh nahi ho gayi ho ?? Tumhara faisla yeh baccha sirf tumhara nahi hai yeh hum dono Ka hai. Tum ne yeh soch bhi kaise liya...

Aman - woh mai..she breaks down and starts crying
Umesh -Sab thikh hai Aman? tum vahi ruko aur kisi doctor ke pass Jane ki jarurat nahi hai mai abhi city hospital pahuch raha hu .

Aman cuts the phone . Umesh gets worried and rushes towards city hospital.
After 10 minutes at city hospital.
Umesh reaches and inquires about Dr. Samiksha's cabin and finds that.
Umesh - Dr. Samiksha ka cabin toh yeh raha par Aman kaha hai??
He turns back and sees Aman sitting on a bench with her head down.
He immediately goes near her.
Umesh - Aman Aman ?? Kya hua ?? Tumne abortion toh nahi karaya na?? Tum kuch bol kyon nahi rahi..??
Aman sat there like a statue
Umesh (in a crying voice)- Aman kuch toh bolo??
Aman looks at him and then hugs him tightly and starts crying loudly.
Aman - mujhe maaf kardo ladoo mai bahut galat thi.. Aaj mere haatho bahut bada paap ho jata ...par...
Umesh breaks the hug .

Aman- Mujhe laga, you aren't ready for a baby...Agar humare beech aise hi jahgade hote rehte, toh hum huamre bacche ko ek ahppy family akise de dete, isiliye socha ki abort kar dungi...But I now realize, how much you too want a child...our symbol of love...
Umesh - tumne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ki mai baccha nahi chahta aur hum uske liye ready nahi hai...yeh toh hamare pyaar ki nishaani hai...mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu Aman...apni jaan se bhi jyada..
Aman - I am sorry ladoo maine tumhe itna misunderstand kiya. Please mujhe maaf kardo.

Umesh realized that Aman had misunderstood his and Shanaya's relation.

Umesh- Aman, If its about Shanaya, toh woh sirf meri best friend hai, who ahd problems with her boyfriend, and I was just helping her out...par tumahri tarah her boyfriend too misunderstood us and broke up...maine kal usse sab kuch samjah diya, and now they are together...


Aman wiped her tears and hugged him. Umesh broke the hug and then kissed on her forehead.
Umesh - bas bahut ho gaya..yeh rona dhona.meri Punjabi queen par aansu bilkul acche nahi lagte . Tum aur baby theek ho mere liye yahi bahut hai.Ab fatafat aansu pocho abhi ghar par sabko yeh khush khabri bhi toh deni hai.

After sometime they reach Gangwal house.
Umesh - dadi , ma, rupan chachi ,Ramesh chachu,laxmi chachi aap sab kaha ho...jaldi idhar aao...
Everyone comes down.
Dadi - arrey ke hua re chora kyon saara ghar sar par utha rakha hai??

Umesh - woh.. darasal baat yeh hai..ki aap pardadi ban ne wali ho... aur mai papa...
Dadi hugs Umesh.
Vimla looks at Aman in amazement and she nods yes.
Vimla goes and hugs her.
Ramesh - arrey beta itni badi khush khabri sunayi hai mai abhi bauji aur bhaisahab ko phone karke batata hu.
Laxmi - aur mai abhi sabke liye mithai laati hu.

Rupan- Kitna accha hua naa! Humare ghar mein bhi nanha baby aayega...

Jwala-(happily) Main bua banungi...

Bunty-(excited) Aur main chachu!

Dolly- Huamre ahaan ko chotu playmates milega... Congrats Bhaiya...
Everyone congratulate Uman

~~Scene 3~~

*Abandoned location*

Sukku looked at the decoration with pride in his eyes. He had got the place decorated as per Kabir's instructions. The table decorated with Red roses and white lilies added beauty to the calm lakeside. The moon just shone bright enough to make the view look magnificent and wola! It was a dream date set up.

He looked at his watch anxiously. 10 minutes and she would be here. He heard thundering and looked at the sky. The lightening gave off its bright light, and a few seconds later, tiny drops fell on the ground and on the flowers on the table. He looked at the table, who lost its beauty, with the rain drops destroying the flowers. It was raining heavily now, leaving Sukku in despair. Tears collected in his eyes, and he closed his eyes, thinking that this will disallow the tears to fall, but they did fall. He felt soft fingers wipe his tears, leaving a warm touch on his cheeks. He opened his eyes to look at Alisha, who held an umbrella for him, who confused looks on her face.

Alisha-(confused) Tum ro kyun rahe ho? And what is all this?

Her question added to his frustration and he turned to leave. She held his hand.

Alisha-(making him face her) Sab thikh hai naa? Kya hua?

Sukku- (annoyed) Kya kya hua? Can't you see, the rain destroyed everything...

Alisha smiled inwards seeing the efforts he had put in. The decorations were completely destroyed, no doubt, and his eyes had failure in them.

Alisha- What is destroyed Sukku?

Sukku-(frustrated) please Alisha, don't act as if you don't know... Meri puri mehnat kharab hui thi... I did so much for you, and the rains destroyed it...

Alisha held his hand. He looked at her. Dressed in a purple dress, she looked cute, and with that innocent smile of hers, she looked no less than a doll.

Alisha- Kuch kehna hai Sukku?

Sukku was lost in her beauty and nodded in no.

Alisha- Sure?

Sukku nodded in a yes, his eyes still admiring her beauty. But the rain and the spoilt surprise had frustrated Alsiha, and Sukku annoying behaviour added to her frustration.

Alisha- (angrily) Go to hell then...

She turned to leave. Sukku came out of the trance and called out to her. She turned to look at him.

Sukku- (nervously)I want to say...ki baarish...nahi, ki tum...nah... wait! What! Baarish? Main kya bol raha hoon?

Alisha- You are speaking rubbish!

Sukku-(chuckling) I know right?

Alisha looked at him sternly.

Sukku- Ok, I want to say that...(he sighed and looked at her) Mujhse nahi ho raha...

Alisha- Bolo naa Sukku... jabaan nahi hai kya?

Sukku- Main..tum...hum...friends...

Alisha- (impatient) Sukku! Speak up!

Sukku-(giving up) No yaar! I won't be able to say I love You...

Alisha eyes went wide with happiness, while Sukku face palmed. She clapped her hands in glee and hugged him, much to his confusion.

Sukku- (still hugging him)Tumhe bhi Nishu ki tarah daure padne lage kya?

Alisha broke the hug and face palmed.

Alisha- Idiot! You said it!

Sukku-(not realizing) I said what?

Alisha- You said ki...(she blushed and kept mum)

Sukku- Maine kya bola ki tu pagala gayi...

Alisha looked at him in shock.

Alisha- bhabhi sahi kehti hai...tumhare paas dimaag nahi hai...get lost!

She turned to leave and then turned back, went to table, picked a few rose petals, gave them to him and said angrily, "You said ki you love me... Idiot!"

She walked away as Sukku stood there, pondering over her words, getting wet in this rain. In a few seconds he realized that he had done it!

He called out to Alisha. She sighed and turned. He ran and hugged her with so much force, that she fell down, with him on top of her.

Sukku- I love you...

Alisha- I love you too...

They both wwre lost in each other's eyes for a few minutes. Alisha came out of the trance and said, "but I love my dress too...so get up!"

Sukku nodded and stood up, but due to the wet ground, fell again on her, his head banging into her head. Both winced in pain and looked at each other. Recalling their weird confession and present state of position, both burst out laughing. Sukku finally stopped laughing and stood up. He held Alisha's hand and she too stood up. She side-hugged him, and both left from there.

~~Scene 4~~

*NKH*

Nisha looked at Kabir, who was watching the video of dance routine for the nth time now.

Nisha- Kabir, so jaao, its 11...(giggling) warna tum yahin ssapne mein auditin doge, aur bacche wahaan...

Kabir-(tensed, ignoring her) Arrey yaaar, yeh Swayam complete hand movement kyun nahi karta?

Nisha- kept her hand on Kabir's shoulder. He looked up from the laptop screen.

Nisha-(sitting next to him) All will be fine Kabir...

Kabir- (without thinking)Nisha, its their dream... I don't want to spoil it...Cheroegaphy toh thikh hai? Are the steps good... and lifts?

Nisha- Everything is perfect Kabir... itni acchi cheorography hai ki agar main judge hoti, toh unhe pakka select karti... And Kabir, agar tum hi aise ghabra rahe ho, toh unka kya haal hoga?

Kabir- Sharon has been calling me and woh bahut nervous hai...

Nisha- (laughing) So are you...

Kabir- Tumhe mazak sujh raha hai?

Nisha-(seriously) Kabir, you were shortlisted for LSD...itna accha dancer hoke tum darr rahe ho... Listen one thing, my hubby is the best! Yu get it? Tumhe bas khud pe, aur apne students pe trust karna hai... They are too good dancers, isiliye tumhara aadah kaam ho gaya... Bas be their support system... you'll rock it Kabir!

Kabir hugged Nisha and stayed in her amrs as she smiled at his cuteness.

Kabir-(breaking the hug) Tumhare bina mera kya hota yaar... I love you...

Nisha- Love you too... Ab so jaao...

Kabir nodded and switched off the laptop. Nisha switched off the lights.

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Scene 1by Shibani and Scene 2& 3 by Mansi

~~Scene 1 ~~

**J.K Memorial College**

Kabir looked at the busy basketball court of the college and then at the banner of the competition hanged there. Nisha held his hand. He looked at her and she smiled at him. Kabir sighed and called his student, who informed him that they were in tha auditorium. They went to the auditorium to see the students nervous and at the same time, excited.

Kabir-(cheerfully) Chill guys! We'll rock it!

Swayam- (nervous) Sir, I am scared...agar maine koi gadbad ki toh?

Nisha- Gadbad ki toh ki...par try your level best, not to make any mistakes, ok?

Swayam nodded.

Kabir- Simran stop biting your nails yaar...(trying to lighten up the mood) When I used to tell you to trim that, you never did so, ab kyun khaa rahi hai?

Simran- Sir, agar main gir gayi toh?

Kabir- Tumhe khudpe bharosa nahi hai, yaa Vijesh pe?

Simran kept quiet.

Nisha- Guys, trust each other and yourselves, and you will do wonders. Aise dar-dar ke rahogi, toh sirf thenga milega...

Kabir- We'll do a last practice, ok?

All nodded and they went to the classes that were modified into Rehearsal Halls.

Kabir- And 5,6,7,8, Go!

The team performed, while Kabir and Nisha watched. Kabir went to a student to explain him, while Nisha kept admiring him. Suddenly, she heard a whistle. Thinking it's her imagination, she ignored it, but when she heard someone whistle again, she looked at her left, to see two boys staring at her. She threw a disgusted look at them and moved a little away. Kabir was too busy to notice this, but Amar noticed this.

The guys came closer to Nisha. Nisha fisted her palm, t control her anger. One of the guys started singing.

"Tu aaja mere close
Milta na mauka roz
I want you my baby
Mujhe de de love dose"

Nisha rolled her eyes. But this was enough to anger Amar. He signed all the boys to look at Nisha and the guys. Kabir was teaching the girls.

Yug-(softly) dekh, I know you are angry, but gussa control kar...

Amar- (angrily)Are you serious? Woh creep mam ko pareshaan kar raha hai and you Yug?

Swayam- Amar, dekh, mam bacchi nahi hai...she is handing it her way, aur Sir ko bilkul accha nahi lagega if we do something like a fight.

Amar nodded. Suddenly, they heard Nisha shout, "What's your problem, huh?" All turned to look at her. The guys had taken her stole and were playing with it. This was enough for Kabir to get angry. He went and pulled the stole from the guys.

Guy1- Oye! Kaun hai be tu?

Kabir-Her husband... now get lost...

Guy2- Married? Oh ho...we missed our chance...

Before anyone could understand what happened, Amar punched him. The guys' friends came and the two groups started fighting with each other. The girls and NiBir tried to stop the boys, but that didn't help. Suddenly, they heard someone shout, "Yeh kya ho raha hai yahaan?" They turned to look at the lady, dressed in black dress. She was one of the judges of the competition, Meera Deewan.

Meera- I am asking something! What's going on here?

Kabir- Mam, I can explain...

Meera- sorry Mister... but yahaan dance competition hai, koi boxing championship nahi...

Nisha- Mam, actually the boys...

The chorographer of the team came running there and understood what had happened.

Chorographer-(lying) Mam, these people passed comments about our team's girls...

Yug-(defending) Mam, they are lying...

The students started blaming and accusing each other, when Meera raised her hand to silence them.

Meera- Names of your team?

Kabir- Dancing Rock stars...

Choreographer- Sizzlers...

Meera- Sorry to announce, but Dancing Rock stars and Sizzlers are eliminated...

All gasped in shock. The teams begged her to reconsider her decision.

Meera- I'll have to talk to other judges about this.

She looked at her assistant, who handed her the walkie-talkie in a few seconds. She moved away, while the team threw angry glares at each other. Nisha was almost into tears. The girls tried to calm her down.

Meera- Fine! I give you a chance... Tum logo ka face-off hoga, aur jiski performance acchi hogi, wahin select hoga...but only one team, between these two teams will be selected... Sizzlers first...

The boys of the sizzles pushed the Rock stars as they moved towards the stage. The completed their routine and the auditorium burst into applause. The other teams were asked to perform and only a few were selected. This increased the nervousness of the team and NiBir. Finally, it was their turn.

*Music*The girls started with hip-hop moves

Jaan le ki kismat ne baante hain
Raahon mein kaante hain
Aur main bhi hoon ziddi,
Aaun kismat ke aade
Naa roke rukoon, tu gira main utthun
Pinjre todkar, phailaaunga main par

The boys continued the routine

Tujh mein jitna hai zor,
Tu lagale magar
Hans ke kat jaayega,
Na jhukega ye sar

The girls and boys perform a face-off

Jaan le ki kismat ne baante hain
Raahon mein kaante hain
Naa roke rukoon, tu gira main utthun

Regzaaron mein, aag hai jitni
Hai lahu kholta mera,
Inn ragon mein phir bhi
Khaaksaaron ko, khaak hi kaafi
Raas mujhko hai khamoshi meri

Swayam, Sharon, Yug, Diya do lead the contemporary steps while others follow them

Bezubaan kab se, main raha
Begunaah sehta, main raha
Bezubaan kab se, main raha
Begunaah sehta, main raha

Jaan le ki kismat ne baante hain
Raahon mein kaante hain
Kismat ne baante hain
Raahon mein kaante hain

Girls perform a few steps of belly dancing

Sau sawaal hain, sau hai laalatey
Mere taraano pe, lagi hai kaalikhey

Ye aag sapno ki, raakh haathon mein
Sooni aankhon mein,
Chalti umeed hai aakhri
Na mila mauka, na mili maafi
Kehdo kitni sazaa aur baaki

Bezubaan kab se, main raha
Begunaah sehta, main raha
Bezubaan kab se, main raha
Begunaah sehta, main raha

The perform the signature step

Jaan le ki kismat ne baante hain
Raahon mein kaante hain
Aur main bhi hoon ziddi,
Aaun kismat ke aade
Naa roke rukoon, tu gira main utthun
Pinjre todkar, phailaaunga main par

Tujh mein jitna hai zor,
Tu lagale magar
Hans ke kat jaayega,
Na jhukega ye sar

They end the dance in with a hip-hop dance routine,

The whole auditorium echoed with claps. Meera gave them a standing ovation. Kabir and Nisha, who were standing backstage, squealed with joy and hugged each other. They joined the excited team on the stage.

Judge 2- Mind-blowing performance! This is the real standard of DDS! Keep it up guys...

Judge 3- I am so amazed...Saare dance-forms ka ek fusion, isn't a joke, but you guys did it... Very good...

Meer- Want to know the result?

The occupants of the stage nodded in anxiety.

Meera- (excited)You guys are selected from Jaipur for DDS!

Everyone cheered and clapped as the team and NiBir hugged and congratulated each other


Everyone was on cloud nine since they heard the news, rejoicing it while nibir was still in each other's embrace when the students came and it turned in a group hug. Nibir laughed out loud when they squished the living day light out of them.


Kabir - bus bus... ab jaan hi nikaloge kya... mere bina hi jaoge competition m...


They all laughed and dissipates. Nisha and kabir took dramatic heaves looking like they were hyperventilating.


Tanvi - aapke bina to hm yha bhi nhi pahunchte sir...


Aaliya- aage kaise jaenge...


Everyone holler in agreement creating ruckus to which everybody threw some glares and curious looks at them. Nisha hushed them with a happy glint in her eyes. She took a side as everyone started talking to kabir, congratulating him and fussing over what happened on the stage. A wide grin spread on her lips as she saw kabir answering everyone and laughing with them. She admired her hubby who is an amazing person and who on any part won't hurt anyone.


Kabir who was busy with the kids took a look at his wifey who was smiling looking at him with admiration and love. He smiled back at her. She is what he isnt. She was his perfect puzzle. The way she handles herself is so admirable that he many times find himself learning from her. He never thought he will find someone without whom he couldnt live but then she entered and changed each and every belief of his for good. That glint of her eyes, that breath hitching smile, that warmth of her body against his... He is going to miss her... miss her sooo much that he isnt sure if he will last a day without her. His smile flattened as the thought entered in his mind.


Ruksar- sir... sir...


Kabir - huh... Kya hua?


Rohan - SIR PARTYYY...


Kabir laughed out loud nodded and all of them went out to a restaurant and partied for a while.


Nisha - (hugging kabir) m so proud of u kabir...


Kabir - thank u milady...


He bowed dramatically and she bursted out laughing.

~~SCENE 2~~

**Gangwal House**


kabir and nisha reached gh with glee written all over their faces. They decided to break the news to the family so have called all of them in gh. As they reached onside, they were greeted with eerie silence.


Kabir - kamaal h... aaj chidiaghar k saare members kha gye...


Nisha - (glaring) what did u say???


Kabir - i mean... mere pyaare pujniya sasural wale kha h... jinse mai itna saara pyaar karta hu.. jo dunia k sabse... sabse... sabse achhe log h...


He grinned as nisha rolled her eyes but a smile played on his lips.


Nisha - (screaming) mummyyy... papppaaa... Daduuu... dadajiii... taijiii... tauji... Sukkuuu... Jwaluuu...Bunty...Kirti... dolly diii... sau...mmm



Nisha glared at kabir who closed her mouth with his palm. Kabir chuckled loudly beside her and closed the distance between them. His breath fanned across her earlobe as he spoke sending those all too familiar sparks which make her dizzy.


Kabir - (whispering) bus meri jhansi ki rani... itna chillaegi to gala baith jaega tera... fir mere lie cheer kaise karegi...


Nisha turned to look at him with heaving breaths as he closed in and pecked her temple. They still were in thier sweet little moment when all of them came hollering in the living area and they had to part ways.


Dadiji - ka hai... aaj kal je bachhe jab dekho chhikhte rehte h... kal umesh aaj je nisha...


Rupan - ur nhi to kya... esi bhi kya baat h ki sabk kaan kharab karne p tule ho tum dno...


Nisha - (squealing and spinning her daadi with her) daadi... daadi... daadi... aapko pta h kabir jaa rha h mumbai... he is selected in the biggest reality show... aapko pta h kitna bda h ye... m sooo happy dadi...


Dadi - ab manne nhi pta tu kay keh rhi h par jo bhi kh rhi h usse kabir ka achha hoga to bhali baat h...


Ramesh - kya baat h kabir... m so proud of u beta...


Laxmi - mjhe to pta hi tha ki mera beta kuch na kuch bda karega hi...


Kabir - maa abhi to pehla padaw hi paar kia h... pta nhi aage kya hoga...


Dadaji - abhi se is baat ki fikr kyu karte ho beta... abhi jo mila h uski khushi mnao... aane wali baat ki abhi se chinta kyu...


Mohan - ur waise bhi mjhe to pta h jeetega to tu hi...


Viren - ha bhai... par isi baat p mithai to bnti h na...


Everybody laughed as kabir took blessings from everyone.


Kabir - ur ek isse bhi badi khush khabri h... nishu ka selection ho gya h national games k lie... she is going to take part as the scouts were really impressed with her... kal subah ye delhi jaegi apna sapna poora karne...


He looked at her with pride while she grinned at him with love.


Everyone started rejoicing again, hugging both of them congratulating for their achievements while both of them held each other's gaze all the time.

~~Scene - 4~~

**KNH**



They reached their house after one hell of a day. The euphoria of happiness was lingering around them. They were happy. There is no denying in it but a sadness of being apart from each other was brooding inside their chest giving them a heartache. Nisha noticed the sad smiles he passed to her and she can easily read those hypnotising orbs of his which were screaming whats inside. She was in her thoughts when kabir mobile rang piercing the silence covering them.


Kabir - (on phone) ha alisha bol... ha mai aata hu abhi... tu vhi ruk...


He hang the call and looked at her guiltily. He was planning on spending each minute of this evening with her but...


Kabir - nisha... mai bus abhi aadhe ghante m aaya... vo alisha ko kuch confusion h academy ko lekar bus vo smjha k abhi aaya...


He looked pleadingly at her. It was their silent agreement between them to spend the remaining time with each other. Nisha smiled at him and nodded giving him permission. He too smiled half heartedly and left in a jiffy so that he can come back on time.


Nisha sighed and went to their bedroom to start packing their belongings. She was half the way in her packing when an odea popped into her mind leaving mishevious yet shy grin on her face. Oh how she is going to miss his husband in these months so why not make this night a perfect one instead. The one they can remember for these few months. Rolling her eyes at her own perverted thoughts, she started arranging what she thought would be a good idea for a night to remember.


Kabir was hell tired and annoyed as he saw it had been 2 hours since he left his home. He was longing for a hot shower and not to mention his hot wifey to be in his arms now. It was one hectic day and now all he wants is to love his wifey. He is so going to miss her. He pouted at the thought of not being able to hold her in upcoming months. If it wasnt for her game, he would never leave her here and would have took her with him. Sighing and shooking his head at the thoughts, he ignited the engine and drive towards his home.


Upon Reaching his home, kabir didnt expected it to be so dark. He turned the knob and pushed the door to open it.


Kabir - kamaal h... ye nisha ko kya hua h.. ese andhere m kya kar rhi h... khi kuch...


As some unwanted thoughts of something bad happening to nisha crossed his mind he dashed towards bedroom and opened it with a bang. But the sight which greeted him took his breath away. Nisha was there standing in the middle of their room wearing a red knee lenghth nighty with a little make up on her face. The look moonlight was giving her was so alluring and seductive, it gave him goosebumps just by looking at her. Her hair was loosely hanging on one of her shoulders were hiding her shy smile giving it a crooked look. She can see his eyes darkening like a starless night as he took predatory steps towards her. She wanted to shy away and hide somewhere but she stood her ground. His eyes danced upon her body setting it on fire. She could feel his caresses without even him touching her, that was the intensity.


Kabir - (low husky voice) u look... remarkable wifey...


He took her hands in his and a jolt of electricity surged through their bodies. Such was their chemistry.


Nisha - (in a whisper) took a look around dear hubby...


She smirked as kabirs jaw dropped while he looked around. The whole room was scented with lavender and there were flickering chandliers and diyas around. The fairy lights were covering all the dark places around. His breath hitched as she circled her as around him giving a grin of her own.

Nisha - like it???


Kabir - (pulling her through waist flushed to his body) love it... (a deep sigh escaped) m gonna miss u so damn much...


Nisha - forget whats coming hubby... live in the moment...


Kabir - right... lets live in the moment then...


And with this he smashed his lips to hers as her giggle resonated in entire house. Kabir picked her up and took her to bed to show her how much he love her and how much he is going to miss her. She was just as eager to for him as he was. There was fire... sparks... lightning... fireworks and most importantly love and passion in the night.

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