NiBir FF: Teri Meri Love Story(Chp 17&18-pg 93)*8/4*COMPLETED

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#691

Such a heart warming response K's 🤔

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#692

awesome updates...
loved it niyu mumma 😳
kabir ko duffer 😲🤣
he is... #mostwantedmunda ❤️
the chat in last was soo cute..
happily ever after types na karke acha kiya😃
I like it 😉
do write more bolne ki zarur nai h coz ye nibir fever aisi bukhar h ek baar chad jaye to utarta nai 🤣
our mind can't stop from thinking new concept and stories on nibir... 😳🤣

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#693

both d parts were fabulous...
movie me karan ko mila hi diya..
Kabir's cute antics-i luv dem..
a cute end..
keep writing..

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#694

Faboulous ending to a fab journey... uuhuh... no faboulous start to a fabolous couple ❤️

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Res

unres

amazing niyu

double updates

both were awesome sweet and cute

nibir made viraj and kaira confess

the confession was so sweet and simple and adorable

krisha was nice poor kabir

Nibir scene at nisha's room was nice

loved the phone convo

The song was beautiful

Totally made for them

it was flim song or u wrote

Their new journey full of happiness and love started😳

Srry for late reply

ritika

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago

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Krishi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#696

Mind-blowing updates..
I loved all of them.. Viraj-Kaira confession, Nisha-Kabir texts were highlights..
Loved the whole story.. ❤️
Niyu finally completed the story 🤣

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Mind-blowing updates..
I loved all of them.. Viraj-Kaira confession, Nisha-Kabir texts were highlights..
Loved the whole story.. ❤️
Niyu finally completed the story 🤣

Finally🤣

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poornima_15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#698

awesome updates both were superb ... and u described ur words "not the end bt a new beginning" through the updates beautifully ... 😊

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plaksha2002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#699

Read all the parts of in one go.. Arrrhhh.. Kya bolu mai?.. Suuupppeeerrrbbb writer u r 👏

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#700

Two updates at once! 😲

Chapter 17:

Such a sweet chapter Niya! 😳

You described the serenity of the surroundings, Nisha's calm mood and her reflecting on how this trip brought in major changes in her life, she remembering her love confession, very beautifully!

Kabir's K-panti, his cute way of apologising to her when she got annoyed and their cute moments that followed were very well written! 👍🏼

Kabir wanting to help Viraj and Kaira to realise their feelings for eachother was such a sweet gesture by him and him begging Nisha to help him was too cute 😆

The Saurav - Kabir - Nisha scene where an irritated Kabir asks Saurav if he wants cough syrup and Saurav giving it back to him, their chase and Nisha getting annoyed seeing them was nice and funny 😆

The game was a smart move by Kabir to make them aware of eachother's feelings 😉

The Krisha-Nisha-Kabir scene was good too 👍🏼

A very nice chapter on the whole!

Chapter 18:

Lovely chapter this was!

The welcome by the cousins, them realising their need to rest, Kabir being reluctant to go back were nice moments.

The next KN scene was too good!

Nisha blushing thinking about her proposal, Kabir sneaking into her room, him asking her to unpack his bags too as he is her would be hubby and she threatening him that he may remain would be itself and Dolly Kirti teasing them were lovely moments!😳

The 'Viraj offering Nisha to join his academy as a trainee and dadaji telling it depends on Kabir and his family after her marriage and Kabir stating that Nisha is free to do whatever she wishes to' scene was beautiful! 👏

The following convo between Kabir and Nisha was very well written and also was a very nice moment!

Loved how you ended the story with those lines! Very apt! 👏

Surely a wonderful end to the story and a beautiful beginning for them! 😉

Do write more dear and thanks for pm 😊

P.S: sorry for the super late comment! all thanks to the exams 🤔