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You still want to read this story right?
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Updating soon 😆
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Fantastic updates 👏 👏 👏 👏
Nibir chat Superb 😳
As usual very nicely written... Loved it 😊
Waiting for new beginning 😉 😳
Write more!!!! miss your writings...
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Finally I am updating this story😳
Double update and the story ends today😊
Sorry for so much delay and not replying to your comments
And this story won't have an Epilogue as I don't want to end it here with a "Forever Happily After" I want this to be their new beginning. 😳
Not proof read both of them so please ignore the errors😛
Hope you enjoyed this journey, thankyou everyone who have supported me through out this journey🤗

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Chapter 17

The next morning they all were about to leave but Kabir had messaged Nisha to meet him early in the morning, Nisha walked towards the garden bare feet to let the morning dew tickle her feet, she smiled as the breeze played with her hair making them dance, she closed her eyes to feel these beautiful moments when she felt some warmth behind her, two pairs of strong arms grabbed her from her waist pulling her backwards, she knew it was Kabir but was annoyed at him as he spoiled her beautiful moments.

Nisha: Kya Kabir, pura mood spoil kar diya...

She freed herself from his hold and sat on the ground, Kabir sat next to her or instead we say that he laid down keeping his head on her lap

Kabir: Toh kya hua? Phir se bana deta hun na...

He caught her hand and started making patterns on it making her giggle and pull it back...

Nisha: Kabir uth koi dekh lega

Kabir: Arey, abh toh sab ko para hai na ki I love you and you love me... toh abh kya problem hai tujhe?

Nisha: Kabir

She said sternly and he sat straight making a sad face, Nisha felt guilty for spoiling his mood early in the morning

Nisha: Sorry, tera mood kharab kar diya

Kabir looked at her expressions and understood what was wrong

Kabir (annoyed): Yaar Nisha teri yeh bachpaan ki aadar jayegi nahi na? Har cheez ka blame khud pe lena! Main Mazak kar raha tha yaar...

Nisha: Jab janta hai main aisi hun toh aise Mazak karta hi kyun hai?

Kabir: Mujhe maza aata hai issliye

She slapped his arm and started walking

Nisha: Subah sabh time pas karne k liye bulaya hai? Main ja rahi hun

She blabbered while walking out of the garden only to be followed by Kabir

Kabir: Rukh, tere chakkar main bhul gaya ki baat kya karni thi..

Nisha (shocked): Mere chakkar main?

Kabir: Haan, waise vo sab chod aur meri baat sun

Nisha: Sunayega toh sunnungi na...

Kabir: Toh sun, tujhe nahi lagta ki Kaira Ma'am aur Viraj sir ke beech main kuch hai?

Nisha: Ma'am ke side se toh pakka hai, Sir ka pata nahi..

Kabir: Sir ke taraf se bhi hai yaar

Nisha: Tujhe kaise pata?

Kabir: Bo Ma'am ko bikul uss tarah dekhte hai, Jaise Krish kehti hai ki main tujhe dekhta hun

He again started adoring her and Nisha smacked his arm to bring him back to reality

Nisha: Iss matalab ki dono ke maan main feelings hai

Kabir: Hume baas unse vo confess karana hai

Nisha (shocked): Hum kyun?

Kabir: Toh aur kon karega yeh kaam?

He replied casually shrugging off his shoulders

Nisha: Agar koi gadbad hui na Kabir toh bohut problem ho jayegi

Kabir: Aur agar nahi hui toh do dil kil jayenge

He sat on his knees and started pleading joining both his hands

Kabir: Please maan ja na Nisha, please, please

He made the cutest expressions he could and thus she couldn't keep deny him anymore

Nisha: Abh yeh cute act ki dukaan bandh kar, main ready hun help larne ke liye, but koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye...

Kabir: Abh tune haan kar di toh koi bhi gadbad nahi hogi

He pulled her in a hug and she smiled reciprocating it, soon they heard someone coughing and broke apart only to find Saurav there

Kabir (annoyed): Cough syrup doon?

Saurav: Nahi, main toh theek hun

Kabir: Toh khaans kyun raha tha?

Saurav: Tumhe tumhare naam se bulata toh tum konsa meri awaaz sunte, issliye khansne laga...

Kabir: Rukh main tujhe bata ta hun kya karma hai

Saurav started running for his life and Kabir chased him while Nisha sat there holding her head in her hands looking at the two.

She stood and left the place as these two kept running in the entire garden.

Everyone was in the bus except Kabir and Saurav

Kaira came and sat next to Viraj giving him a smile, he smiled back too and again got lost in his chain of thoughts.

Gayatri: Hum kiska wait kar rahe hai?

Kaira: Bua Ji, Kabir aur Saurav ka

Priyanka: Vo dono kahan hai?

Nisha: Dono pagal khane gaye honge shayaad

Priyanka: Huh?

Kabir and Saurav came inside trying to catch hold of the breath completely soaked in sweat

"Sorry we are late" they both said together

Gayatri: Oh my my... yeh kya haal bana liya hai dono ne?

Nisha looked at them angrily and spoke sarcastically

Nisha: Bus main kyun aaye race karte karte hi aaj jate na wapas...

They both looked down guilty and went to their seats, Kabir sat next to Nisha and muttered a sorry but she ignored him... Saurav too sat next to Gayatri who made a face looking at him and he rolled his eyes

After a while when everyone was silent Kabir got up and spoke

Kabir: Hum itne shaanti se kyun ja rahe hai?

Nisha: Sab thak gaye hai issliye shaanti se ja rahe hai...

Kabir: But yeh kitna boring hai yaar...

Nisha: Teri bakwaas se better hai...

He huffed and others giggled...

Priyanka: Hum koi game khele?

Saurav: Haan chalega...

Kabir: Haan, hum word game kehlte hai...

Ekta: Matlab hum ek word bolenge aur dusra uss word se related jo pehla naam ya cheez yaad aayegi vo bolega, right?

Kabir: Right, aur sab iss main part lenge...

Priyanka: Sounds cool, chalo start kare...

Kabir: Ok, start...

He turned towards Nisha "Kabir"

Nisha: Duffer

He pouted and others giggled she turned to Saurav and continued the game ignoring him "Dosti"

Saurav: Masti

He asked Priyanka "Passion"

Priyanka: Shooting

She looked at Gayatri and asked "Fashion"

Gayatri: Style

Before she could ask Kaira, Kabir asked her "Pyaar"

Kaira: Viraj

She said absent mindedly and then looked at Viraj's reaction who was pleasantly shocked and others were sitting with their mouths wide open and eyes popped out, Kaira blushed as she saw Viraj smile a little from the corner of her eyes.

Kabir gave Nisha a winning look and she gave him a fake smile indicating that she was still angry on him and he gave her the cutest smile that made her roll her eyes at him.

Kaira looked at Viraj to give him an explanation

Kaira: Vo hum...

Viraj: Its ok, hum jante hai aapne vo kyun kaha, aapko hume explanation dene ki zaroorat nahi

Kaira: Agar aap sab jante hai toh jatate kyun nahi?

Viraj: Kuch baatein jatana zaroori nahi hoti

Kaira looked in his eyes and blushed at his statement as she could see a glimpse of same feelings like hers in his eyes. Soon they all had fallen asleep as they had to go a long way.

As soon as they reached the academy one by one they started getting down, as Nisha and Kabir got down two pairs of arms came and hugged Nisha from behind, she turned in the hug and found Krisha there

Krisha: I missed you so much Bhabhi...

Kabir came to them and ruffled her hair

Kabir: Sirf Bhabhi ko miss kiya?

Krisha acted as she was in deep thoughts and then replied

Krisha: Haan sirf Bhabhi ko miss kiya

Kabir made a face and rolled his eyes, Nisha and Krisha giggled at him and then Nisha asked

Nisha: Tu kab se yahan wait kar rahi hai?

Krisha: Shayaad ek ya dedh ghante se...

She replied casually and Nisha was so touched by her gesture that she waited so long just to meet them

Saurav came with their luggage and they all retired to their respective houses.

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Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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The one in Blue is Kabir's text and Pink is Nisha's


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Chapter 18

Nisha and Kabir came home with Krisha and were completely exhausted, the cousins ran to them welcoming them and started questioning them about their trip and they answered all their questions despite of being so tired...

After a while when the cousins realised that they should let them rest they let Nisha and Kabir go to their rooms, Kabir was not willing to go but Krisha grabbed his arm and took him out of the house as all giggled at them...

Nisha was in her room and she was unpacking her things when she saw the dress that Kabir had given her that day, the flashbacks of that night came in her mind and she blushed a little, she jerked when she heard some noise from the balcony, she quietly tip-toed there and found Kabir over there stretching his arms and looking down to see if anyone saw him, she shook her head and came back to the room to finish her work, Kabir too entered the room after her in a few seconds

Kabir: Kya kar rahi hai?

Nisha: Saaman samait rahi hun

Kabir: Oh acha!

Nisha: Tu yahan kya karne aaya hai?

Kabir: Aise hi ghar pe bore ho raha that oh socha yahan aajaun

Nisha folded her last top and placed the bag down as she bent down to keep it Kabir jumped on the bed and made himself comfortable

Kabir: Tu na mere saath ghar chalna baad main

Nisha: Kyun?

Kabir: Mera saaman unpack karne ke liye

He smirked and looked at her, even she smiled at him before throwing the pillow from the couch in his direction

Kabir (giggling): Arey, abh se mera har kaam tujhe hi toh karna hai na... toh aaj se hi shuruvat kar de

Nisha: Main tera koi kaam nahi karne wali samjha

Kabir: Nisha, very bad, main tera hone wala pati hun, tujhe meri baat mani chahiye

Nisha: Hone wala pati hai, zyada uchal mat warna hamesha hone wala pati hi rehga...

She warned him and he placed a finger on his lips and sat like a disciplined child, he raised his hand as if asking for her permission to speak something. Nisha tried controlling her smile seeing his antics and nodded her head positively

Kabir: Mujhe na yeh trip hamesha yaad rehgi...

Nisha: Mujhe bhi

Kabir: Akhir maine sab ke saamne tujh se tere dil ki baat bulvai hai, uss din ko main kabhi nahi bhul sakta

Nisha: Aur maine aapne darr ka samna kiya hai uss din, usse main bhi nahi bhul sakti...

They both smiled as they remembered their moments of the trip, their chain of thoughts broke when they heard someone clearing their throats, they found Kirti and Dolly at the door step smiling at them teasingly

Dolly: Tum kab aaye Kabir?

Kirti: Kab nahi kahan se aaye, yeh puchiye Dolly Di!

She pointed towards the balcony and they both giggled as Nisha and Kabir blushed

Dolly: Don't worry, hum kisi ko nahi batayenge, abh jaldi se neeche chalo sab wait kar rahe hai

They all went down and saw everyone including Viraj and Kaira over there assembled in the court yard

Viraj: Darasal hume aapse ek permission chahiye thi, humne haal hi main Nisha ke shooting skills dekhe aur hum chaht hai ki vo humari academy main as a trainee kaam kare...

He looked at Dadaji who looked at Nisha asking her for her answer and her eyes gave him the answer, he then looked at Viraj and said

Dadaji: Hume koi aitraaz nahi hai, agar Nisha chahe toh vo aapka prastav manzoor kar sakti hai

Everyone rejoiced but was calmed by Dadaji once again as he still wanted to say something

Dadaji: Magar shadi ke baad Nisha yeh jari rakhegi ya nahi yeh Kabir aur uske ghar walon ka faisla hoga

Kabir smiled at him and replied

Kabir: Dadaji, agar Nisha apna sapna pura karna chahti hai toh mujhe uss main koi problem nahi hai, aur main janta hun ki Maa ko bhi nahi hogi, infact, hum hamesha Nisha ko support karenge

He looked at Nisha and blinked his eyes in assurance, Dadaji smiled and looked at Viraj

Dadaji: Phir toh koi baat hi nahi hai, hume koi dikat nahi hai

Everyone started rejoicing once again and then sat for dinner, they had asked Viraj and Kaira to join them too. Viraj gave them a few details about Nisha's schedule and everyone was satisfied with it

After dinner everyone dispersed to their respective rooms and Viraj left with Kaira, followed by Kabir after a few minutes.

Nisha was tossing in her bed thinking how this trip had actually changed her life once again, she went to the place she never dreamt to visit ever in her life again, she overcame her fear and even confessed her love so easily in front of everyone, she tried sleeping but at vain, she took her phone and texted Kabir but had no hopes for reply as she thought that he might have slept by now, but to her surprise her phone beeped and Kabir had actually replied to her text

"Neend nahi aa rahi?"

"Nahi"

"Kyun?"

"Pata nahi"

"Huh?"

"Kabir"

"Haan"

"Thank You"

"Kis liye"

"Har Cheez ke liye"

"Maine kya kiya?"

"Mujhe mere darr ka samna karne ki himmat dene ke liye, meri taqaqkat ban ke mere saath hamesha rehne ke liye... aur mujhe itna pyaar karne ke liye..."

"Tu pagal hai Nisha, tu inn sab cheezon ke liye mujhe thanks bol rahi hai? Ek pal main hi paraya kar diya tune toh mujhe, huh"

"Sachi Kabir, agar tu nahi hota toh pata nahi mera kya hota"

"Jo hua nahi aur hona nahi uske bare main sochna hi kyun? ;)"

"Tujhe tareef bhi hazam nahi hoti na?"

"Hoti hai na, par jab tu karti hai tab nahi hoti...:P "

"Hahaha, so funny, acha bata tu abhi tak soya kyun nahi?"

"Tujhe kaha toh tha saaman unpack karna hai, uske wajah se hi nahi so paya"

"Oh, acha chal abh so ja"

"Nisha"

"Bol"

"Kuch nahi, so ja"

"Huh?"

"I love you <3"

"Good night"

"K kahinki"

":P"

She kept her phone aside with a smile on her face and closed her eyes as she drifted off to sleep, she waited for the next day to start her the new journey of her life with dreams and hope to fulfil each of them, as she knew that her Kabir will always be there with her!

Kahin dabi dabi si, kahin chupi chupi si thi


Teri Meri Love Story



Kabhi baarishon main bheegi toh meheek uthi


Teri Meri Love Story



Kabhi tum aage chal diye


Hum peeche reh gaye


Kadmoon ke vo nishaan lehron main beh gaye



Kabhi bigad bani kabhi ban ke bigad gai


Teri Meri Love Story



Kabhi baarishon main bheegi toh meheek uthi


Teri Meri Love Story




Kabhi tum kehte reh gaye


Kabhi hum chup hi reh gaye



Woh pal woh lamhe bhi


Yun khaton main reh gaye



Kabhi barf si jami paani si baaras gai


Teri Meri Love Story



Abhi baarishon main bheegi toh meheek uthi


Teri Meri Love Story ❤️



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Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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mere liye tho pyaar -kabiraaa hai😉
kabir-duffer🤣🤣🤣
pati parmeshwar hotha hai nishu bechaara kabira😆
loved it niyu 😃
dhono parts bahuth ache hai sweet cute scenes😃
next story jaldhi start karo😊
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Mera comment post se uper ho gaya 🤣
Thanks for pm
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Awesome Ending ...!!!
Loved It So So Sooo Much ...!!!

Start a new story soon ...
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Fabulous update 👏
beautifully written 👍🏼
loved it... ❤️


thnks for pm
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Niya mindblowing update as usual...👏 👏

This is really not the ending...this is the beginning of a new luv story...❤️

This was a very beautiful story...😊...will miss this story...😭

Thank U so much for this amazing story...🤗
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago

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