Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I am starting a new ff and i will dedicate it to anu who motivated me to write something 😉.


PROLOGUE

He was slowly coming towards her with a knife in his hands, blood dripping from it. She screamed, but there was no one to listen to her screams. Suddenly, her head started throbbing and she woke up. Shaking terribly, she realized her phone was ringing.

She picked it up. It was her boss Ramesh Mittal who replied, "Nisha come asap. It's an emergency."

Nisha got ready and reached an old, decrepit looking building. She went inside and climbed down a creaking wooden staircase. She took her id card and flashed it infront of the keyhole. The door opened and Nisha went inside.

The office of Private India was invisible to outside world. It's interior was totally opposite to it's exterior. Where one was old and decrepit looking, the other was modern and plush.

She went straight to conference room and greeted her friends Jwala and Kirti. She turned and saw Kabir sitting there with Saurav.


Nisha (monologue) - "What the hell is he doing here? Just focus on work Nisha, ignore him."


Ramesh entered the room looking tensed. He said, "Guys we have a serial killer on loose."


i am writing for first time so sorry for crappy language and grammatical mistakes 😆. i assure you i will try to improve .

So guys if you want to me to continue please like or comment .😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue - pg1

Part 1 -Page 8
Part 2 - Page 17
Edited by maniwood - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start Mansi..😊 Private India? 😉 Serial killer..Wow! That's a great genre to start with.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Great start Mansi..😊 Private India? 😉 Serial killer..Wow! That's a great genre to start with.


thank you so much i am so happy you liked it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc prologue mansi!!
best debut award mansi😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshiss

nyc prologue mansi!!

best debut award mansi😆

thanks khushi 😃
i hope i am able to keep the suspense 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so good yaar.. Ramy is nisha's boss.. So they will be investigating serial killings.. Superb. Excited to read the b xt part...
Edited by Teogapi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start mansi...it's sounds interesting n mysterious...keep writing n update soon...n ty for the pm
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Adi.. Story seems to be too cute.. Just continue soon .. Iss main thrill hai.. Drama hai.. Action hai.. Aur Romance bhi 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

nice start mansi...it's sounds interesting n mysterious...keep writing n update soon...n ty for the pm

thank you so much 😃

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