Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi

Wow mansi... It's interesting...⭐️

Continue soon...👍🏼

Originally posted by: ammu4u

intrestng prologue manu👏

serial killer🤔 kaun😉

update nxt part soon

Originally posted by: Shats

Wow interesting 👏
luved d concept 👏
update fast can't wait 😃

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

Hm...So it begins with Nisha have nightmares. Could the dream perhaps be foreshadowing? So maybe in the future she gets attacked?

And Ramy is her boss. That's interesting. So no father-daugher vibe. Perhaps a mentor-mentee vibe instead? Speaking of which, Private India. So Nisha works as a private investigator? I liked the touch about how the building was different from the outside and inside. I feel like it probably reprents the characters and their jobs -- it's not what it seems like.

And she doens't like Kabir? Or she likes Kabir? 😆

Interesting start Mansi! As it's your first time writing, you've done a good job! Some grammer mistakes, tense problems, and punctuation. But other than that, you're good! Good luck writing! :)

Originally posted by: maniwood

Finally you read it

I am writing for first time so grammatical mistakes were bound to happen

Please pm me the mistakes whenever you are totally free

About the mysteries in next part things will be more clear

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

WOW WOW WOW Mannu Diii👏
Suprb Prologue...👏👏👏 & Mysterious tooo😆🤣
And Haan CV' s ki tarah no Cheating 😡diii😉😆 Matlab aap Samjhi ya Samjhavuu??😉😆🤣
Pls Do Continue.. 🤗& Feel Free to PM ur Choti sis😆🤣 SYS😉

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