Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24 - Page 8

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

Oh so the nightmare from the prologue referred to the botched cast KN had. Makes sense. Good job setting that up.

And it looks like RN share a mentor-mentee relationship, so looking forward to that!

Also liked the small little convo between Saurav, Kirti, Jwala. It was actually nice to read, despite the subject matter (KN breakup) 😆

Good chapter Mansi. Set's up the story quite well and introduces you to everyone as well. Looks good -- nothing major I found that needed to be fixed.

Nice!

Originally posted by: poo10

Nice
Thnx for pm nd update soon

Originally posted by: maniwood

No major mistakes yayy

Thanks 😃

Actually kn have not break up they just worked together before and rumors of them liking each other are there

As for nisha's nightmare I am actually myself not sure of the reason 😆

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

LOL yaar mansi I knew KN probably didn't romantically break, i was talking about their professional team breakup 😆

and kya?!? so the nightmare is a mixed nightmare of two diff events?!?! lol jk jk 😆

Originally posted by: Anshi1509

Nice update mansi
What jwala has found???
Suspense mein chodiya. :(:(
Continue soon

Originally posted by: ammu4u

manuu 🤗🤗

tu ithni talented hai main pehchan nahi paayi yaar

ur story is getting intrstng yaar

Nibir investigating together 😳

both blaming themself 4 the murder of that girl

SKJ ko bohuth acha role diya hai tunee 👍🏼

Ramesh sir😉

loved it to the core manu

jaldi update karna plzzz

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Nice