Revival : Conquering The Past - A Joint Venture updt scene 15 pg 41 - Page 25

Awesome update dear nisha nightmare and rn bonding written very well loved their bonding very much

Awesm update dear...the emotions of father daughter duo was wonderfully written...dis makes me speechless...and d bst part was when nisha woke up frm nightmare she found her father infront of her...d conversatn betn dem and der emotions...made me loose myself ...yr words makes me think dat its not nisha its me who is going through all dis pain...u made me cry yr...u r an awesm writer ...n wen nisha says to her father plz dont leave me dat emotion was beautifully portrayed...

chp 10 review:

very nice.
u made me cry again.
really good.

res 😆
UNRES NO:13😆

Chapter 10 😉

Rema Y r u saying U have written "Blah" ???😲
No dr U have again written a wonderful part👏👏👏
I loved it...❤️ Bcz We Got Our Nishu back upto a certain extent
Was Missing The old Nishu very badly 😭 But this update made me Smile Wide😃😃😃

I m happy dat Atleast Nishu tried to Be Normal again for the sake of her parents & Cousins..👏👏

Viren & Rupan😡😡😡 Selfish People🤢🤢🤢

Liked the way How Nisha Retorted back 👏👏👏
Dolly's Reveleation was a tight slap to Viren..👏👏👏 Loved it..😃

Wonderful Update Rema..👏👏👏
Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

Scene 6

Awesome Lekha...the essence of NAUC was nicely captured...loved the way the cousins came to Nisha apologizing...how they were equally sad ...and how bunty broke the ice...loved how Nisha was thinking of her cousins when she asked for ice cream...very good lekha

Beautiful update ...
Loved it 👏

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res again😆

UNRES NO:11😆

Chapter 6(By Lekhs)

Lekhsss😲 U r also a part of this SS??😉😆 Mujhe nahi patha tha yaar..😆 Pm bhi nahi mila😕

Anyways Lekhs..😉 Loved ur part yaar👏
You portrayed Nishu+Cousins+Saurav Bond well👍🏼

Loved this portion where U compared Nishu's State with a Lone rain drop👏👏👏

A raindrop was dangling from the edge of the roof window all alone just like she was. Nisha was holding onto the last thread of her emotional strength. She couldn't hold it in anymore. As the raindrop freed itself from the roof the young girl let go of her strong facade and broke down.

Loved the way Cousins made Nishu Smile👏

Loved Dolly's Mu tod jawab to Mrs. Sharma😡 Senseless lady🤢 Well done Dolly👏👏👏

Bunty's Fun antics brought some light moments😃 & Bechari jwalu😆

She watched her cousins laugh and be happy and realized that th most beautiful music for her is this laughter ringing in her ears.

@Red Loved this line to the core👏

Do write more Lekhs...🤗Q ki DMM😳😆🤣



Chapter 7(by Puneet)

Gr8 work again Puneet👏
Liked the Glacier River part👏👏👏

Glacier of their pain was still melting, but the river of their tears was had dried. Their promise they had sealed the reservoir which was going to fill until the storm had not stopped. The wall was to break once Nisha was alright, they were going to cry, cry their heart out. But not till Nisha's tears had stopped, not till she was there to wipe their tears, not until she was strong again.

Viren😡😡😡 Like alltime just thinking abt His SAMAJ😡🤢
Dadaji??😲 Too Insensitive😕 Marriage is the Solution??? Really???😡😡😡

"Family Name is trashed, it's laughable Bhaiya. For protecting family name you can trash your daughter" stressing the word "your" Ramesh took Viren by surprise.
@Bold Liked it 👏

Nishu Y did u agree to marriage yaar??? See How Much ur father is Shattered with ur quick decision.. I knw U dont want ur parents to get insulted b4 ur family dats Y u tuk this decision.. still Felt bad 4 Ramy😭

Do Write More...👍🏼

Hellooo🤗
Have Unres ed all my Res posts in this SS & Had PM ed respective Authors...!!!
Do Read 😳& Do Write More👍🏼 yahan par bhi keh rahi hu pg number..😉

@Rema unres ed on Pg 17 &32😊

@Puneet unres ed on pg 19 & 26😊

@Lekhs unres ed on pg 26😊

@Anu un res ed on pg 32😊

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Originally posted by: lovely_lady

chp 10 review:

Really liked the bit where you had Nisha again attempt to reject her femininity and instead revert back to the garb of a tomyboy in an effort to suppress her pain -- reminded me quite a bit of pilani actions. It seems like Nisha is quite predictive when it comes to handling traumatic actions.

And Viren and Rupan were vicious as always. Liked how Nisha subtly implied what went on in the shop with Viren framing Ramy for his mistakes. Although I'm not quite sure if the family members really knew that? So it kinda comes across as weird? The kids knew and yet tolerated it?

And thank goodness Dolly finally had the sense to bring out the truth about terrence incident. Hopefully it left the impression she hoped it would -- esp coupled with that line about his behaviour.

Question -- in this fic, Sumit is still semi-good right?

thanks isha..