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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res 😆
UNRES NO:13😆

Chapter 10 😉

Rema Y r u saying U have written "Blah" ???😲
No dr U have again written a wonderful part👏👏👏
I loved it...❤️ Bcz We Got Our Nishu back upto a certain extent
Was Missing The old Nishu very badly 😭 But this update made me Smile Wide😃😃😃

I m happy dat Atleast Nishu tried to Be Normal again for the sake of her parents & Cousins..👏👏

Viren & Rupan😡😡😡 Selfish People🤢🤢🤢

Liked the way How Nisha Retorted back 👏👏👏
Dolly's Reveleation was a tight slap to Viren..👏👏👏 Loved it..😃

Wonderful Update Rema..👏👏👏
Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

thanks saru...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Scene- 11


The lamp in front of the idol was burning brightly. Dolly stood staring at the lamp for a while. Then she looked at the idol for a while, weariness about the happenings fell heavy upon her causing her to sit down on the floor. Dolly was sad. How could she not be? Her Nishu was having a tough time with life. Again. As she joined her hands in prayer, a lone tear slid down her cheek.

"God please...do not give more sufferings to Nisha...please...the poor girl has suffered so much till now...you know everything...please give back our Nishu ...please." Dolly felt someone sitting down beside her. She opened her eyes to find a crying Jwalu with joined palms. The incident that just took place had affected her. Seeing her Nishu bro like this, sad and disturbed, Jwala was unable to bear. Dolly moved to her side and hugged her. Jwalu hugged her back crying.

"Dolly di... I can't see Nishu bro like this anymore...Why does all the bad things happen to good people...what did Nishu bro do wrong?...She- she don't deserve this...after all she has been through." Dolly stroked her hair gently. The last trifle between her father and Nisha also made her think of this. She is so good to everyone; understanding and caring for everyone yet people don't understand her. Her pain. That is why Dolly burst in. She couldn't take hearing another word against Nisha. Her father and aunt will never learn. But she had to try to stand up for her. Dolly hugged jwala tightly trying to console her. She felt another pair of arms around her and looked to find Kirti hugging her too.

A hand was placed atop her head and Dolly looked up to find Umesh bhaiya, Sukku Aman and Bunty with him. All were feeling restless and unhappy and couldn't find a better place than the mandir to lighten their minds. All of them were worried for their Nishu. They didn't know what to do. The person who took care of them was in need of someone to take care of her, except they didn't know how. They didn't know how to make her happy. And they didn't know what to do.

"Umesh bhaiya..." Dolly whispered her voice heavy with emotion. "What are you guys doing here?" Umesh settled down on the floor, placing a hand on her shoulder. Sukku Aman and Bunty sat down with him. "The same as you...you are worried about Nishu?" Dolly nodded slightly and looked at Sukku. Sukku's eyes glistened with tears, he too nodded and looked at Kirti. Kirti blinked off the tears. Bunty moved forward and hugged Dolly. Kirti and Jwala joined in followed by the others. They shared a soulful hug, the six, only one was missing. And that left a void, a void they knew which cannot be filled by anyone else. Nishu was their strength, their binding rope, their leader and she was not herself anymore.

"Nishu... I am worried about her bhaiya... Our Nishu..." Dolly whispered. Sukku wiped a tear off his face." Yes dolly dii...everyone of us are...how will all this turn out... I don't want to lose my sister..." His voice cracked as he said the last line. Umesh didn't know what to say. They were looking upon him for advice when he himself didn't know what to do. Umesh placed a hand on Sukku's shoulder to give him the strength, the hope he himself didn't feel. Nishu's aloof behavior had brought a fear upon him. What if time didn't heal? Umesh tried to shrug off the thought.

A silence very unlikely of them settled among the cousins. It was suffocating yet none were able to summon the strength to break the silence. They stayed in the hug as they thought of their Nishu.

"Are we going to sit like this?" Kirti stood up rubbing her tears. Everyone looked up at her. "Are we just going to sit here while Nishu is sad? Yes we are sad that our Nishu is broken." Kirti took a deep breath. "But are we not going to do anything abt it? Are we not going to fight to get back our Nishu? Our captain jugadu." All of them looked at her pondering her words

"No we are not" Sukku was the first one to speak. "We are going to fight for our Nishu guys " He said as he stood up. Umesh also stood up with him followed by the rest of the gang. "Nishu would never give up trying and we shouldn't too" Dolly said.

"Then think everyone , what we can do as a start to mission cheer up Nishu bro?" Jwalu said. Everyone began walking around the prayer room thinking. The cousin gang was lively as ever as they thought about various ideas to cheer up their Nishu. Finally it was the youngest who found the perfect plan.

Bunty announced his plan as everyone looked up. "Nishu dii cannot resist a challenge, let's make her do this...she will be good as ever after this " Everyone looked at him shocked.

"Bunty...My genius bro" Sukku came up and hugged him as everyone clapped.

"Perfect" Jwalu said as she held out her hand. Everyone placed her hand on top of her hand as they said together." Mission Cheer up Nishu bro begins."



ps-, sorry its short guys...and please bear with the writing...i kw its not much...i will try my bes to do well nxt time.

Edited by -Lachu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Lachu Nice writing ya...Starting was really good. Also the part where Kirti asks if they are all going to sit simply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesm update lachu...
d feelings of all cousins was beautifully portrayed for der captain jugaadu... 😊

"God please...do not give more sufferings to Nisha...please...the poor girl has suffered so much till now...you know everything...please give back our Nishu ...please." Dolly felt someone sitting down beside her. She opened her eyes to find a crying Jwalu with joined palms. The incident that just took place had affected her. Seeing her Nishu bro like this, sad and disturbed, Jwala was unable to bear. Dolly moved to her side and hugged her. Jwalu hugged her back crying.

The emotions in dis para...was so heart touching...& loving which cant be described by words 👏

A hand was placed atop her head and Dolly looked up to find Umesh bhaiya, Sukku Aman and Bunty with him. All were feeling restless and unhappy and couldn't find a better place than the mandir to lighten their minds. All of them were worried for their Nishu. They didn't know what to do. The person who took care of them was in need of someone to take care of her, except they didn't know how. They didn't know how to make her happy. And they didn't know what to do.

in dis u represent d strong bonding n der unsaid emotions of all cousins...beautifully

loved sukku's emotions
loved kirti's stand for nisha attitude
& at last bunty crack it...
superb update dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lachu this was awesome..really loved the while part... Cousins hug planning everything was perfect... I could actually hear the cousins BG when I read rhre cousins planning... Loved it... It was worth that wait...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing cousins scne lachu!!😊
liked the way kirti asked them to do smthng instead of simply sitting😛😆


ps:saurav kahan hai?
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was awesome lachu👍🏼...each n every line touched my heart...the cousin's feeling were so perfectly expressed...loved this update...out of the world...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Lachu superb scene
Cousins feeling sad for nisha loved it
And the way they are trying to cheer her nice
Totally loved cousins update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Scene 12

Lakshmi held Ramesh's hands before he entered his father's room. "Talk calmly..." Ramesh nodded as he knocked the closed door, and stepped inside. Dadi was reading a newspaper, while Dadaji was examining his spectacles. They had no clue what had happened between Nisha and Viren.

"Come Rames..." called Dadi closing the newspaper. Dadaji wore his glasses back and scanned for clues. His youngest son never came to meet him unless it was something really very important, and this time he had Lakshmi along with him. It wasn't difficult for him to understand why Ramesh was there. "It must be something relating to Nisha," he deciphered easily. Without offering a chance for Ramesh to speak, "Ramesh! Mr. Chopra and his family would be visiting our house tomorrow morning, to see Nisha."

"Why?" asked Ramesh instantly, acting like he didn't understand. He was raging inside. His father wanted to play games with him? Then he was ready to play too. "Nisha won't meet anyone Bauji...and why should Mr Chopra's family see Nisha? Nisha is not ready for marriage..."

"But Nisha said she is ready..." Dadi began confused.

"Maa ji...Nisha isn't ready for marriage...In fact, I feel she is going into depression with whatever is happening around her..." Lakshmi tried to explain.

"And the best way would be to distract herself and what better way than getting married? Trust me...This is the right decision for her..." convinced Dadaji.

"Bauji! Nisha isn't ready for marriage...and as parents we know that. And even if she is ready to get married, as parents we aren't supporting this decision...and hence Nisha won't marry now..." told Ramesh decisively, trying to use his right over his daughter as her parent.

"Mr Chopra, without considering all the nonsense that Nisha did, has agreed to see Nisha and fix this..." continued Dadaji insensitively.

"Wow! That's so great of Mr Chopra," mocked Ramesh. "But I don't want all this pity for my daughter..."

Lakshmi stepped forward, holding Ramesh back, signaling him to be in control.

"Maa ji! Bauji! Nisha might put a brave fight in front of us, but inside she is really scared and lonely. She needs time. Time to recuperate and gain her confidence..." Lakshmi's voice pleaded for understanding as response.

Viren, Vimla, Mohan and Rupan entered the room, apparently to complain about Nisha's behavior towards Viren and Rupan.

"Gain confidence?" exclaimed Viren with disgust. "She is an over confident and spoilt girl. You know how she spoke against me, Bauji? She is an arrogant girl and it's going to be increasingly difficult to handle her in the future. She is going to bring down the family name single handedly...It's better we..."

"Marry and send off?" Ramesh completed the sentence. "She isn't a commodity to be thrown off to paperwala because it's of no use to you..." He was determined to fight and knock off anyone on the way to ruin his daughter's life.

"Rames...Just meet the family? What if the boy is perfect for Nisha?" reasoned Dadi.

Ramesh opened his mouth to tell something but decided otherwise. His family had lost their mind was his conclusion.

"Maa ji! Nisha is back to her tomboyish nature...her behavior, attitude...all that she had changed...She is back to square one before...I fear what if..." Lakshmi looked at her entirely family. She desperately looked at Dadi wanting her to understand what she wanted to say, wanting her to understand her fear. She was the only one who could understand what she was trying to imply. Lakshmi looked helplessly at Ramesh.

"Bauji! Try and understand. It's important for Nisha to be given time to come out of all this...Else...There are chances she closes herself from others..." Ramesh looked disappointed seeing no change in his parents' reaction. They hadn't understood.

"Close herself?" taunted Rupan. "She is always open with her comments and actions...Her behavior is atrocious to..."

"Enough!" shouted Ramesh. He didn't give anyone time to sink his counter. "Bauji! I don't care who is coming and when they are coming and for what. You plan whatever you want...but Nisha isn't going to be married until she is completely ready and when I give my consent for it. Don't give words which you cannot fulfil..."

Ramesh left with Lakshmi trailing, giving one glance back at her family.

"Did you see how he spoke with me?" asked Dadaji to Dadi. "Does he think I don't care for Nisha? I am her enemy, I don't understand her? And Ramesh? I wonder if he really cares for Nisha? I mean...does he want to make Nisha's life like his? No..." Dadaji paused thinking.

"Viren! Call Mr Chopra and invite them for lunch tomorrow..." told Dadaji. He can't accept defeat in front of his son.

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Posted: 10 years ago
ramy back in his fighting spirit... i always loved the way RL supported nisha in the show and u brought the same essence in this part... and dadaji is so egoistical... just because of his ego he is hell bent on ruining nisha's life and dadi... what can i say... she and her gks.. why is she so pati vrata that she cnt see her poti's condition... viren i just want to bang this guy in his head... he is so insensitive and selfish... rupan toh chodo...
amazing part... loved it... abhi i a scared ki what will i write..😭 ye tune kya kiya
Edited by Teogapi - 10 years ago

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