Revival : Conquering The Past - A Joint Venture updt scene 15 pg 41

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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: arshiss
awesm rema!!👏
rn 😭
i loved that part where nisha asks ramy whether he hates her? could imagine that scne
that lullaby part and ungli made me emotional😭😭
missing rn all over again..

ps: i wrote the same fr shwetha
don't ever say that u can't write..
you all are fab writers😛😊

thanks khushi...

i wrote this part in 2 halfs... phele i wrote the ending phir starting... i iritated shweta a lot for this part..😆

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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Arey...what's there to get irritated yar...I lvoe reading the part before hand...😆 it's like watchin the premier of a movie before its release...😆

lekin itna pm kiya maine.. dont worry for the next parts too i will do the same...i cant write without ur help... 😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

I'll be honoured to help yar...There is nothing to get irritated...😊

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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
I'll be honoured to help yar...There is nothing to get irritated...😊

thanks yaar... u really helped a lot..i was so confused pehle..😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Teogapi
thanks yaar... u really helped a lot..i was so confused pehle..😆

You catch my point so well yar...😆😆

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Teogapi

@Teogapi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

You catch my point so well yar...😆😆

coz uexplain it so well😆

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

res😆
Mujhe PM nahi mila..😭 Main abhi dekh rahi hu update.. Kal Unres karungi😊

UNRES NO:9😆

Hello Rema 😃Me Saru😉 Sorry 4 late comments😳

👏👏👏👏 This is 4 U Rema...👍🏼 Tumne RN bond ko apne Words se itne ache se describe kiya...!!!👏👏👏 I wonder Y u were crying & saying U cant write😲
U wrote Father- Daughter scene so beautiful dat mujhe meri aur meri papa ki bonding dikha 😳
I m also My papa's Girl.😳 He always supports me Wenevr I face problems in my life..😃

The scene where Nishu pleads Ramesh "Not to hate her" & Ramesh made her understand that Whatever problems comes to ur life ur parents wl be there 4 U...

It was soo Emotional yaar...😭😭
Well Wriiten👏👏👏

When he was about to go to the kitchen she held his finger. Ramesh turned and looked at her. Nisha was looking at her father with tears in her eyes. She just wanted him to be with her now. She believed her dad will make everything all right after all he was her superman. Ramesh understood what nisha was trying to do and smiled. He then made her stand up and walked her to her room with Nisha holding his finger all the while. They both entered the room which was dark except for the moonlight entering from the window. He made her lie down on the bed and sang stoking her hairs...

@Bold this was the Bestest part & the Lullaby made it more beautiful👏👏👏 Got emotionally Connected with the Scenes...❤️👏👏👏 Gud Work Rema..👍🏼

Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM (Dil Maange More)😳😆

Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago

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@lovely_lady

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Review for chp 3:

Dang. GH is in chaos, both inside and outside. Honestly, this was kinda sad to read -- the entire family was against Nisha and even Ramy was having a hard time standing up. I feel like somewhere, the GF was right in being angry with Nisha. The emails were a stupid thing. But at the same time, I think Ramy was also right in pointing out how Nisha was framed and needed time alone. It was a complicated situation and I'm glad that you brought that out with your writing. And LOL at Rupan, Mohan, and Viren's dialogues -- so spot on 😆

The dada ji-ramy confrontation wasn't as spectacular as the one we got on tv (sorry shwetha! 😆) but then again, the tv one was absolutely amazing and having to follow up on that is an extremely difficult thing so you did well!

That said, I LOVED how you included that hesitancy in Dadi's voice when she tries to sooth Nisha. That was wonderfully done and something I always wanted to be seen done in the show. At least Dadi has some awareness of what her family is like. And I also really loved what Laxmi said. Basically, she summarized the whole situation as best.

And the RN scene. Ahhh that dialogue where Ramy didn't know how to help her when he himself needed help was so wonderfully done shwetha! you could feel his pain! And I loved how he took Nisha away from everyone.

great chapter! some tense mistakes but great nonetheless!

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@lovely_lady

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Chp 4 review:

Remaaa! yaar you have a knack for capturing down RN perfectly and never disappointing! Frick! Such a wonderful scene!

Loved Nisha asking if Ramy hated her! Really brought out how vulnerable she was and how shaken her confidence was! Bechari! Wonderfully done!

And loved loved LOVED the tie-in to the show with the Dolly terrence incident. Wonderful how you brought in older memories to supplement newer memories!

And the ungli and the song!! I wasn't able to read all of it -- too much hindi (?) but I read some of it and I liked the door door part -- very apt for her situation.

You've maintained the simplicity of RN and captured them so well. Amazing Rema!