The Broken Bond - Moresh SS (Epilogue, Page 49) 9/9 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

That SS is different yar...That's joint one na...Standard is really high there...This one...It's stand alone and I can take it the way I want...😆

I am actually fast tracking...I want to complete this SS soon...It's like a responsibility.

That's something I always wondered. There was only one time where Ramesh reached saturation point, when he left the house. But that again was more of his own personal limits. But in this SS, though I don't know the reason, the saturation point is because of some family problem is all I can sense..😆

Originally posted by: maniwood

I know even you don't know why this family falling apart 😆

Don't say like that ur standards are also high you had written so well in previous ss 😃

About ramy I always felt that if I was in his place I would have left the house but ramy was strong

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Nice update 👏 👏 👏

superb part yaar... ramy wanting to play cricket with viren was lol... that happens in real life too... my chutku cousins always sticks with his elder bro when he goes to play irritating him... when he runs between wickets chutku also starts running... 😆

Originally posted by: Teogapi

superb part yaar... ramy wanting to play cricket with viren was lol... that happens in real life too... my chutku cousins always sticks with his elder bro when he goes to play irritating him... when he runs between wickets chutku also starts running... 😆

loved the way u used the things shown in nauc... how did u even remember the radio thing, ramy failing and laughing and viren changing his marks etc??? loved the way u used them...

and why is ramy sad in the end??? is it coz lakshmi is forcing him to unite the family for GKS??

lovely part... the past incidents are so cute..i have read the whole thing thrice back to back... superb update... loved how u write about simple things... u are very observant..

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Thanks yar...😃

I have watched DaRa battle scene, after Nisha's past revelation and Holi episodes many times to remember those details...😆

I still haven't figured out why Ramesh is sad...But all the three brothers are having a fall out.

Thanks again. Its easier to write and also keep it simple because Moresh have never been explored.

its very interesting to read about moresh's childhood... and u have included scenes which we see all day but never adore... baby holding fingers,younger sibbling irritating younger one... when i started reading i am like arey haan us bache ne bhi aisa kiya... can u show ramy crying to school and coming and sitting in moren's class too????😆

Originally posted by: Teogapi

its very interesting to read about moresh's childhood... and u have included scenes which we see all day but never adore... baby holding fingers,younger sibbling irritating younger one... when i started reading i am like arey haan us bache ne bhi aisa kiya... can u show ramy crying to school and coming and sitting in moren's class too????😆

I LOVED THIS PART!!!

Originally posted by: Anagha.

I LOVED THIS PART!!!

it was superb yaar!👏

the way viren twisted ramesh's ears and ramesh making cute faces...really nice!

i really like the way the plot is developing...nice!!!

and lakshmi's grand entry!

do continue!😊

I don't know how to feel about this as Viren has never been my favourite character but...you're really good at humanizing him and making him a tolerable person. It appears like it was definitely not easy being him and Dada Ji had a HUGE influence on him. It's kinda sad when you think about it.