NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 62

Kabir- (happily) Vrinda? (he received the call)... (happily) Awww, hi my baby... (Nisha's eyes were wide in shock)... How's my Shona..(her eyes turned red)...Awww my sweetheart is missing me huh? (now Nisha wanted to go to Australia and slap Vrinda, after a pause) Really, you are in Mumbai... Wow! (Nisha wanted to be killed or kill someone) Waiting for you, bye...

Kabir hanged the call and was surprised to see Nisha walk away.- Main bhi Kabir ka murder kar deti 😡 Isske kaaran hamari Nishu kitni sad hai Ek baar Vrinda ki behen ka naam nahin le sakta tha😡 Thank God u mentioned Kabir was talking to Rinki😊

All were happy, but no one noticed Nisha's sadness as she walked away. Harsh and Saurav saw this. Saurav signalled him to speak to her. He nodded and followed her. Kabir didn't fail to notice this. His anger started boiling, but then Harsh was also Nisha's friend and Kabir had no right to stop him from talking to her.- Well the good thing about Harsh ki entry is that because of him atleast Kabir is J and thoda possessive😆. Also as a person u begin to appreciate Kabir through this line where he hates Harsh with Nishu but he is not of the jealous and over possessive like other guys who impose restrictions on their lovers😊

"How could that Saurav ka baccha say that Kabir and Vrinda should fall for each other? Wait, was he right? Was Vrinda perfect for Kabir. After all she was his childhood friend... she knew his family... his likes... She knows him..." Nisha thought this and sadness over powered her.- Felt really bad for our Nishu But keeping that aside, u were able to pen down down Nisha's state of mind, her insecurities very well👏👍🏼 So great work😉

Kabir lied on his bed. He missed Nisha. Yet he pulled himself out of her thoughts, turned off the lights and went to sleep. His lips curved into a smile. He knew that Nisha had seen ice-cream and chocolate and had smiled. Smiled because of him and that was enough to make him happy.

Nisha relished the ice-cream. So what if Kabir wasn't with her, his memories were there and that was enough to make her happy- Loved the last part though 😃❤️ Cute, adorable and sweet 😳 Chalo duffer Kabir ne kuchh toh accha kiya 😳 Love how Kabir never forgets her happiness 😳

Let me tell u a secret now😆 I hate Vrinda Dawda😆 I hated her when she played the character of Taani in D3😈 So when u introduced her character, I decided to imagine Sanaya as Vrinda😆 But the fact is that maybe because of the name, or maybe because Nishu is sad because of her, I dont like her character much😆

Also I think I hate it when Nishu is J or sad. I think I m partial to Nishu 's character so was sad for her and hence this comment of mine was not very objective or very happy-happy 😊 I prefer Kabir being J to Nishu being J so u can perhaps undertsand why this comment of mine is not so great😆

That being said, I do appreciate the way u have written this chapter, U have conveyed Nishu's sadness very well that we readers connected so well with her so as an author u did ur job very well😉🤗

Waise tumhari shayari at the end was beautiful 👏👏👏 So deep

Sorry for a not-so great comment😉