NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 97

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

epilogue 1
shibu sho cute
kabira kitna k h...bt nishu bhi bohot tez h
she could feel his presence
one month anniversary
super cute update
sorry for late comment

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

epilouge 2
shibu 👏 👏
awesome update 👏
sab apni life ma well settled h
nibir mansion
the last chocolate cake part was sho shweet
nishu ki cravings n mood swings 😆 "shut up or else I vl kiss you" ☺️ ☺️
I already mish this story 😒
loved it

Shibu meri jaan ❤️

Fantastic epilogue Tune kya surprise diya hume😃 mann khush kar dita yaar 🤗

Iss baat ko jitni baar bolun utna kam hai ki I loved it thoroughly 🤗🤗🤗

Loved how in a few lines u were able to give closure to the readers about the lives of Nibir and their friends😃 Well glad to know that everyone is now settled in life and well established in their careers😊 ab toh sab ke bacche bhi ho gaye hain ya hone waale hain😆 Also glad to know that Kabir shares a great bond with Nishu's family😃😃

Main itni khush hoon ki ab bas tujhe har line pe bas emoticon hi dikhenge sometimes without any accomapniment of any words also😆😆😆

Nisha caressed her 5 month baby bump as she watched Kabir perform. This was the fifth time she was watching the video, but she just couldn't stop herself from admiring her husband. She was busy with her choco-chip ice cream, when her mobile rang.- Hayyee 😳 Chapter ka kya intro likha hai 👏👏 Main to mar jawaan Nibir ke cuteness pe So romantic, cute, adorable🤗

She smiled as she read the caller id. It was Jwala.

Jwala-(scared) Hello, Nishu bro... aap please mera ek kaam karoge? Jaldise Saurav ke naye ghar jaao... Kabir jiju ne bahut badi gadbad ki...

Nisha- (shocked) Kya kiya uss gadhe ne?- Gadha Kabir🤣🤣

Nisha got down from the car in a hurry, but stopped when she read the name plate, "NiBir Mansion"-

She was confused. Saurav ke ghar pe NiBir ka name tag? She turned when she heard Kabir's voice, "Don't be confused Nishu, this is our house... Humne tumse jhoot bola tha ki Saurav ne ghar kharida hai, actually yeh ghar maine humare liye kharida hai..."Kabir kitna caring hai yaar😳 so sweet😊

Nisha was surprised and all she could was hug him. - super adorable yaar🤗

Harsh was now Nisha's best friend, much to Kabir's annoyance- This line really cracked me up 🤣🤣 Bechara kabir 🤣 I m sure woh Harsh ka khoon karne ka mauka dhoondhte rehta hai😆🤣🤣

They had decided that if Nisha gives birth to a baby girl, they would name her Mishri, and their son would be named Nibir. Both the names signified their relation, sweet and passionate.- awww 😳 so sweet😳

@green- Loved this analogy Shibu👏👏👏

Nisha went in the kitchen to drink water, but her eyes sparkled when she saw the chocolate cake on the counter. Making sure that no one is around, she picked one slice, but winced when Kabir slapped her hand lightly.- 😆😆 well Nibir ek doosre ko bahut acche se jaante aur samajhte hain toh Nisha Kabir ki nazron se nahin bach sakti😆😆

Kabir- Kitna chocolate khayegi tu?

Nisha-(innocently) yeh cake yahaan pe akela pada tha, bichaara, isiliye socha taste karu...😆😆😆 Bechari Nishu ko cake ki kitni fikar hai 🤣🤣

Kabir- (explaining) Nishu, you are eating a lot of chocolates and that's really not good for you..- aww the loving and caring husband Kabir 😳😳

Nisha- par your baby loves chocolates... what am I supposed to do?- Sahi kaha Nishu ne🤣

Kabir- (a bit sternly) Control your cravings...

Nisha's eyes welled up with tears. Kabir closed his eyes and cursed himself. How could he forget Nisha's mood swings?- 🤣🤣 Dhakkan Kabir 🤣🤣 bhale hi 5 saalon mein woh bahut famous aur successful ho gaya ho magar Nisha ke maamle mein woh dhakkan ka dhakkan hi raha😆😆

Nisha-(crying) Tum bahut bure ho... I hate you... Humesha mujhe bewajah daant dete ho.. main baby se bolungi ki tumse baat na kare...

Kabir tried to stop her, but failed. She continued with her blabbering, until Kabir said, "shut up or else I'll kiss you..."- Kya tareeka nikala hai Kabir ne Nishu ko chup karwane ka 😆😆👏 Bada hi romantic aur asardaar tareeka hai☺️

Nisha looked at him in surprise and then closed her eyes as he leaned in. He gave her a peck on her lips.- ☺️☺️

Nisha- Kabir, I promise ki apni chocolate craving control karungi (Kabir smiled) but kya main cake ka ek slice kha sakti hoon? (Kabir face palmed and Nisha giggled)-chooo cute 😳 Waise Nishu apni baat manwana janti hai😆😆

She picked a slice and took a bite and then fed Kabir. They shared the slice of cake. It was just like their relation, sweet and perfect.- Maar dala, maar dala ☺️Nibir ne toh mujhe apni cuteness se maar hi daala I m dead ❤️

Kuch kahaaniyan khatam hoti hai... toh kuch kabhi nahi...

Kuch kahaaniyan chehre pe muskaan laati hai, toh kuch padhkar paani aata hai aankhon mein ...

Par har kahani ki ek nayi shuruwaat hoti hai...Shayad panno par dil ke ...ya rishton ke gherayion mein...- Hayee So deep 😳 Loved ur shayari 👏 Sach mein yaar tum itni si umar mein itni gehri baatein likh jaati ho ki sometimes I wonder if u r a schoolgirl😆😆 Fabulous indeeed👍🏼

It indeed was a pure delight reading ur story and hope I get to read more such amazingly sweet, adorable and Nibirlicious stories from u🤗🤗

Love u❤️

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Shibu meri jaan ❤️

Fantastic epilogue Tune kya surprise diya hume😃 mann khush kar dita yaar 🤗

Iss baat ko jitni baar bolun utna kam hai ki I loved it thoroughly 🤗🤗🤗

Loved how in a few lines u were able to give closure to the readers about the lives of Nibir and their friends😃 Well glad to know that everyone is now settled in life and well established in their careers😊 ab toh sab ke bacche bhi ho gaye hain ya hone waale hain😆 Also glad to know that Kabir shares a great bond with Nishu's family😃😃

Main itni khush hoon ki ab bas tujhe har line pe bas emoticon hi dikhenge sometimes without any accomapniment of any words also😆😆😆

Nisha caressed her 5 month baby bump as she watched Kabir perform. This was the fifth time she was watching the video, but she just couldn't stop herself from admiring her husband. She was busy with her choco-chip ice cream, when her mobile rang.- Hayyee 😳 Chapter ka kya intro likha hai 👏👏 Main to mar jawaan Nibir ke cuteness pe So romantic, cute, adorable🤗

She smiled as she read the caller id. It was Jwala.

Jwala-(scared) Hello, Nishu bro... aap please mera ek kaam karoge? Jaldise Saurav ke naye ghar jaao... Kabir jiju ne bahut badi gadbad ki...

Nisha- (shocked) Kya kiya uss gadhe ne?- Gadha Kabir🤣🤣

Nisha got down from the car in a hurry, but stopped when she read the name plate, "NiBir Mansion"-

She was confused. Saurav ke ghar pe NiBir ka name tag? She turned when she heard Kabir's voice, "Don't be confused Nishu, this is our house... Humne tumse jhoot bola tha ki Saurav ne ghar kharida hai, actually yeh ghar maine humare liye kharida hai..."Kabir kitna caring hai yaar😳 so sweet😊

Nisha was surprised and all she could was hug him. - super adorable yaar🤗

Harsh was now Nisha's best friend, much to Kabir's annoyance- This line really cracked me up 🤣🤣 Bechara kabir 🤣 I m sure woh Harsh ka khoon karne ka mauka dhoondhte rehta hai😆🤣🤣

They had decided that if Nisha gives birth to a baby girl, they would name her Mishri, and their son would be named Nibir. Both the names signified their relation, sweet and passionate.- awww 😳 so sweet😳

@green- Loved this analogy Shibu👏👏👏

Nisha went in the kitchen to drink water, but her eyes sparkled when she saw the chocolate cake on the counter. Making sure that no one is around, she picked one slice, but winced when Kabir slapped her hand lightly.- 😆😆 well Nibir ek doosre ko bahut acche se jaante aur samajhte hain toh Nisha Kabir ki nazron se nahin bach sakti😆😆

Kabir- Kitna chocolate khayegi tu?

Nisha-(innocently) yeh cake yahaan pe akela pada tha, bichaara, isiliye socha taste karu...😆😆😆 Bechari Nishu ko cake ki kitni fikar hai 🤣🤣

Kabir- (explaining) Nishu, you are eating a lot of chocolates and that's really not good for you..- aww the loving and caring husband Kabir 😳😳

Nisha- par your baby loves chocolates... what am I supposed to do?- Sahi kaha Nishu ne🤣

Kabir- (a bit sternly) Control your cravings...

Nisha's eyes welled up with tears. Kabir closed his eyes and cursed himself. How could he forget Nisha's mood swings?- 🤣🤣 Dhakkan Kabir 🤣🤣 bhale hi 5 saalon mein woh bahut famous aur successful ho gaya ho magar Nisha ke maamle mein woh dhakkan ka dhakkan hi raha😆😆

Nisha-(crying) Tum bahut bure ho... I hate you... Humesha mujhe bewajah daant dete ho.. main baby se bolungi ki tumse baat na kare...

Kabir tried to stop her, but failed. She continued with her blabbering, until Kabir said, "shut up or else I'll kiss you..."- Kya tareeka nikala hai Kabir ne Nishu ko chup karwane ka 😆😆👏 Bada hi romantic aur asardaar tareeka hai☺️

Nisha looked at him in surprise and then closed her eyes as he leaned in. He gave her a peck on her lips.- ☺️☺️

Nisha- Kabir, I promise ki apni chocolate craving control karungi (Kabir smiled) but kya main cake ka ek slice kha sakti hoon? (Kabir face palmed and Nisha giggled)-chooo cute 😳 Waise Nishu apni baat manwana janti hai😆😆

She picked a slice and took a bite and then fed Kabir. They shared the slice of cake. It was just like their relation, sweet and perfect.- Maar dala, maar dala ☺️Nibir ne toh mujhe apni cuteness se maar hi daala I m dead ❤️

Kuch kahaaniyan khatam hoti hai... toh kuch kabhi nahi...

Kuch kahaaniyan chehre pe muskaan laati hai, toh kuch padhkar paani aata hai aankhon mein ...

Par har kahani ki ek nayi shuruwaat hoti hai...Shayad panno par dil ke ...ya rishton ke gherayion mein...- Hayee So deep 😳 Loved ur shayari 👏 Sach mein yaar tum itni si umar mein itni gehri baatein likh jaati ho ki sometimes I wonder if u r a schoolgirl😆😆 Fabulous indeeed👍🏼

It indeed was a pure delight reading ur story and hope I get to read more such amazingly sweet, adorable and Nibirlicious stories from u🤗🤗

Love u❤️

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

I guess mai epilogue ke liye comment karna bhool gaya...so sorry for that...

This is the concluding comment from my side..

Shibu I must admit this today this is my favourite romantic story.

The reason is that it has a kind of charm associated with it that draws me towards it.It has a originality with it, the story line is simple but very very beautiful the way characterization is done is the most amazing thing about it.For me it didn't appeared to be a story but seemed real and it shows the high standards of your writing skills.

It had superb twists which took the story a notch higher and portrayed evey emotions perfectly whether it was friendship or it was love .Keeping everything drama comedy romance and emotiona in right quantity was the requirement which u did it with perfection.

Alls well that ends well so thanks for this epilogue... And do write more...