NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 64

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Posted: 10 years ago
oops, double post...
see below...
Edited by do0dleR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
HI SHIBU...🤗

read all the updates...😊
Shibu, u r doing a marvelous job...👍🏼👏
u put both of them on J mode together...🤣🤣
God knws ab kya2 jalega...🤣🤣
Jaldi se propose karwa de...😉
kahi fire brigade ki zarurat na padh jaye...🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx fr d pm 😃
Amazing update 👏
N toh poori ki poor I J ho rahi thi 😆
Shantanu 😛 (my 1st fav 😳 )
Kabir kept ice cream fr hr awww 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bhanju🤗

Padh lia maine Day 23 & I was ROFL ng🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kitni J ho rahi hai Nishu...🤣🤣🤣🤣

Mujhe shaq toh pehle se hua jab Kabir ne achanak phone pe "BABY" bola...😉 So It was all Saurav-Vrinda's Plan🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I want Kabir to be More J Now...😉🤣🤣 Q akela Nishu ki J hothi rahe har baar?? Y dont U make Kabiraa more J???😆🤣🤣🤣🤣 (Waise Pichale Update pe I loved his J ness...😆🤣🤣 Voh Arabian sea wala dialogue I told U nahhh🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣) So make Kabira Also J😈

Ab toh NiBir ke liye Sab Plans pe Plans kar rahe hai... Jaldi Confession bhi ho jaaye toh🥳🤣🤣

My fav part @PINK Aww...☺️ So Sweet..😳 Door rehke bhi Ek doosare ki Muskurahath ban rahe hai NiBir

Smiled because of him and that was enough to make him happy.

Nisha relished the ice-cream. So what if Kabir wasn't with her, his memories were there and that was enough to make her happy.

Superb Shyayari 👏Do write More..🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣🤣
Going to read Day 24😆
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Day 24 updated. hope you like it😊
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Day 24

Nisha was late. She had woken up late and she was scared of Viraj's anger. But when she reached the studio, she found that Viraj would be an hour late. She looked at her growling stomach. In hurry, she forgot all about it.

Grumbling, she entered the canteen and all her irritation vanished. Kabir had already ordered coffee and noodles and was waiting for her.

Smiling, she sat on the chair and started eating. Kabir shook his head at her craziness.

Kabir- Nisha, you seriously need to grow up. Thank God, Viraj nahi aaya, warna mar jaati na tu.

Nisha- (sipping coffee) Adat ho gayi hai, teri bakwaas sunte hue uthne ki...

Kabir- Aur jab main Australia jaunga, tab?

Nisha-(without thinking) I'll miss you...

Kabir looked at her with his eyes wide in shock. Yet he was happy that she'll miss him. Nisha looked everywhere except him.

Kabir- Tu sach mein mujhe miss karegi?

Nisha-(poker face) Nahi, I'll miss your salt coffee.

She forced laughter to reduce the awkwardness and both knew that she would miss him, and he would miss her too. Suddenly Saurav messaged Nisha that Viraj had come and he was searching for her. Thanking her stars, she excused herslef and left.

After shooting for a scene, Kirti told Kabir that Vrushika wanted to see the choreography of the dance sequence.

*Rehearsal hall*

Vrushika, Shantanu, the dance crew and Nisha were watching Vrinda and Kabir dance. In the movie, it was an imaginary dance, that helps the female protagonist realizes her love, so the dance was a bit close.

Sun Saathiya

*Tune*

Nisha closed her eyes and Kabir walks to her.

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya(Kabir wrapped his arms around Nisha's waist)
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan(Nisha hugged him)
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main(They broke the hug and he kissed her forehead)

Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun(He lifted her)
Hoon piya bas teri main(He twirled slowly)
Ho chhu le toh khari main(placed her on the ground)
Toh khari main khari main...(caressed her face)

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan (Contemporary steps)
Music

Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu (She walked away from him)
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re (He held her hand and pulled her back)
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu(Her back collided with his chest)
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri(She turned to face him)

Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun(She walks to the steps at the end of dance floor)
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee (Climbed them without breaking the eye lock)
Ishq ye paake main tera(He looked at her with a smile as she jumped)
Nikhar jaaun ri... (He held her in his arms)

Piya bas teri main(He helped her stand on the floor)
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main(She wrapped her arms around his neck )
toh khari main khari main... (She stood on his feet)

Music (They danced with she standing on his feet)

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya(She steps down)
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan(He walks away while she stands there blushing)

Nisha was shocked to hear claps and opened her eyes. She saw Kabir and Vrinda smiling as everyone praised the choreography. Nisha fumed in anger. She went out of the rehearsal hall. Shantanu saw this and smiled. After all, his plan worked.

After an hour, Kabir and Vrinda went to watch the shooting. It was dark except for a spotlight on Vrushika. But that didn't stop Kabir from noticing Nisha.

She had tied her hair in a lose bun, with a strands falling on her neck. With the back of the pen in her mouth, she was reading the dialogues.

Kabir- (murmuring to himself) yaar, why are you so cute?

Vrinda heard this and giggled.

Vrinda- Adhere mein bhi you saw her... Wow...(faking admiration) That's true love when you feel your partner's presence.

Kabir hit her on the back of her head lightly.

Later that day, Kabir entered Saurav's house with tiredness clear on his face. He entered in the bedroom and smiled as he looked at Dolly, Nisha and Saurav's picture in a photo frame near the bed. He felt as if his tiredness just vanished somewhere looking at Nisha's smile.

She sat on the sofa with a bowl of soup in her hand and switched on the T.V. and smiled as she saw that "Tumko toh Aana Hi Tha" was playing. Nisha blushed remembering their dance in the club.

Kabir too was listening to the song and smiling. Saurav entered the house and was taken aback to see that Kabir was listening to a romantic song. He changed the channel to a sports channel to watch the match.

Kabir- (out of the trance, annoyed) What the hell?

Saurav- (confused) Kya? What made you so annoyed; it's a cricket match dude, India versus New Zealand. And by the way, kabse aap, Kabir Kumar, romantic gaana sunane lage?

Kabir sighed. "Main gaane mein todhi interested tha, main toh Nisha ke baare mein soch raha tha." He said to himself.

Nisha remembered that she had to call her dad because he had called her in the morning, but she couldn't talk to him. She saw her mobile's wallpaper and sighed.

Nisha- Yaar, ab toh tu mera peecha chod do...

She said to Kabir's smiling picture and looked at their group picture which they had clicked on his birthday.

They were missing each other. Something or the other made them remember the other and blush or smile thinking of the wonderful moments they shared. And anyways, love is equal to smiling and blushing for no reason which will make the onlooker think that the person is mad and has to be sent to the mental asylum.

~~~~~~~~~

Tu agar saath nahi hai... toh har pal mein khaalipan sa hai...

Tu jo saath hai... Toh har pal khoobsoorat hai...

Teri yaadien bhi hai utni hai pyaari... doobi hoon main unmein bani deewani...

~~~~~~

Day 24 ends. I am not good at writing dance steps so bare this one.


Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aag dono taraf barabaar ki lagi hai
I am loving the way everyone is helping them 😳
But story is going to end soon 😭
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bhanju🤗

Le aayi main Mera comment on Day 24 lekar 😆🤣🤣🤣

NiBir having BF Awww...😆🤣 Nishu Ke Muh se niakl hi gaya "I wll miss u" ab "ILU" bhi bol de plss...🤣🤣🤣 taki Kabir ki eyes jo abhi 25m wide thi voh "N " metre wide bane🤣🤣🤣

Dance seq was nice Bhanju...👏👏👏

Aree Mujhe Kabir ko J dekhna hai.. 😡😆bechari Nishu ko kab se J karwa rahe ho yaar???🤣 Ab thoda ROLE REVERSAL Kar bhi dooo...🤣🤣🤣

My fav part @PINK

Something or the other made them remember the other and blush or smile thinking of the wonderful moments they shared. And anyways, love is equal to smiling and blushing for no reason which will make the onlooker think that the person is mad and has to be sent to the mental asylum.

Thanks 4 PM😳(B4 Pm I res ed..🤣)

Do write More ...🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Nice Shayayari👏
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm update shibu
nishu late ho gyi but thankgod viraj b late ho gya bach gyi nishu
kabir kinna sweet h usne nishu k liye bf already order kr dia
loved d way she said aadat ho gyi h teri bakwaas sun k uthne ki
pta nhi kabir k jane k baad nishu ka kya hoga
loved nishu's dream n song selectn was superb
finally der plan works n nisha was in anger
kabir to pura dhakkan hi h

loved d way kabir notices her

She had tied her hair in a lose bun,
with a strands falling on her neck.
With the back of the pen in her
mouth, she was reading the
dialogues.
Kabir- (murmuring to himself) yaar,
why are you so cute?
Vrinda heard this and giggled.
Vrinda- Adhere mein bhi you saw
her... Wow...(faking admiration)
That's true love when you feel your
partner's presence.
Kabir hit her on the back of her
head lightly.


@BOLD loved it totally

dono ghar laut k tv dekh re n blush krre...
loved d way saurav teased kabir wen he was watchin song n he said to himself mai songi thodi dekh ra tha mai to nishu k bare me soch ra tha

They were missing each other.
Something or the other made them
remember the other and blush or
smile thinking of the wonderful
moments they shared. And
anyways, love is equal to smiling
and blushing for no reason which
will make the onlooker think that
the person is mad and has to be
sent to the mental asylum.


@BOLD again i really loved dis para...

ur shayari was awsm as always
update nxt day soon
sorry for late comment n thnx for pm
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shibu ek badi wali hug for this part 🤗
kabir nishu ka acche se jaanta h pehle hi coffee or noodles taiyaar
that miss u part was too cute
nisha j ho rhi h vrinda se 😆
haayyeee kabir ne nishu ko andhere ma bhi dekh liya ☺️ ☺️
nibir missing eac other
awesome update 👏
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update shibu
Can't wait what will happen next
Countinue soon

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