NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 52

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part Shibhu. Nibir rain dance and song was perfect and thx for the pm. Feeling really bad gor Nishu.Kabira is so caring . Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome update shibu...sabr ka fhal bht hi jayada sweet tha...😆

Sapna jahan dastak na de - as u said perfect for their situation 👏

Both were lost in each other's eyes with the music giving a beautiful effect to the scene and the rain making it ethereal. -- what a perfect description

He shook his head and the water droplets form his wet hair fell on Nisha's face. -- how cute ☺️

Suddenly reality struck Nisha. The beautiful colors that had made their way on her face suddenly became dull. -- what a beautiful line

but yar nisha hamesha khud hi kyu decide karne lagti hai ki kabir usko nhi chahta..😡😡

n ur shayari... 👏 👏☺️

Pyaar karti hoon beintaah tumse... kaash keh paati yeh baat tumse...

Wajah nahi jaanti... Par tumhare sang bitaaye palon ko bhula nahi paati...

Dil mein dard bahut hai... Par tumse iss dard ke baare mein nahi kehna hai...


no sorry dear...

to know the value of love and happiness, we should go through pain and sadness -- i agree completely... 👏 👏


actually i m saying sorry for late comment..
Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NiBir's rain dance😳
Nisha and Saurav convo was sad!! :(

thankyou for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx fr d pm 😃
Aww nibir rain dance 😳 kaash show me bhi me yeh milta.felt bad fr nisha 😭
Amazing update 😃
Hope saurav kuch karega 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update ❤️
NiBir 😳
Nisha will never changeatleast confess karke kabir ka reaction to dekh leti😡
Anyways update soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super update shibu sissy..🤗
Update next part soon..👍🏼
Pls pm me sissy..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
"The beautiful colors that had made their way on her face suddenly became dull"
Thanks di fr this beautiful line😳 (akhir mere sangat ka asar hua hai😉)
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
'Superb update
Pyaar ke mamle mein kabir dhakkan tha aur hamesha rahega
Nibir raindance
Nice song selection
Tumhe Australia pasand hai kya jo London se Australia kar diya
Shayari was superb
Kya tumne khud likhi hai
Thanks for pm
Sorry for Late comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey NiBirians😃, Day 20 is updated😊. Hope it is nice😛.

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Day 20

Kabir was in the rehearsal hall, busy with a dance sequence. But all in the dance crew noticed that his mood was just too bad.

Here Nisha's state was no better. She was angry, but not with anyone else, but with herself. In the morning, she purposely fought with Kabir so that he himself avoided her. Saurav noticed the differences between the two and knew that this problem had only one solution.

He messaged UmAn, Kirti and Sukku to meet him at his place after the shoots.

*In the afternoon*

Kabir went to AshVik's place as he was too angry to talk to Nisha. Nisha was damn upset with this, but then she too had her own insecurities.

*AshVik's House*

Asha- (coming downstairs with her baby) Hey Kabir...

Kabir- Hey Asha... (taking the baby from her) Hey baby, kaise ho aap? Missed me?

The baby giggled. Asha smiled.

Kabir- Rithvik kahan hai?

Asha- Kuch important dance sequence complete karne ke liye academy gaya hai...(faking anger) Beewi-bacchi ki fiqar hi nahi...(teasingly) I am warning you Kabir, don't you behave with my to-be-devraani like this...

This reminded him of Nisha.

*Studio*

Nisha was with Umesh, Dolly and Sukku discussing about the sets and the props required.

Dolly-Mujhe lagta hai blue todha dark color hoga, nahi?

Nisha- But white will give it a good contrast naa?

Umesh- Sahi kaha Nishu, Dolly blue hi accha lagega...

Dolly-(teasingly) Ha, ha, Nishu ko toh blue hi accha lagega, Aakhir Kabir ka jo favorite color hai...

Nisha looked at her and faked a smile but her heart was yearning for Kabir.

*AshVik's house*

Kabir's trance was broken when he heard the baby wail. He tried to calm her down, but she just wouldn't. He didn't know why, but he started humming the lullaby Nisha sung in the hospital. Rithvik entered the house and was surprised to see Kabir.

Rithvik- (happily) Hey Kabir...

Kabir- Hey...

Rithvik-(to baby) Hey jaan...(side hugging Asha) Hey Ashu...

Kabir handed the baby to him. He sat on the sofa.

Rithvik- Kabir, baby ka Ashvika' naam kaisa lagega?

Kabir-(confused) Thodha weird nahi hai?

Rithvik- Haan, par mera aur Asha ka naam join karke Ashvik hota hai, aur ladki hai, isiliye naam ke baad "A" add kiya tha...

Kabir-sounds nice...

He remembered "NiBir" and smiled.

*Studio*

Dolly and Umesh stared at Nisha, who was in trance. They had been calling her from last 5 minutes, but she was in her own world.

Dolly- NiBir...

Nisha came out of her trance at once and looked at her.

Dolly- Hmm... Kabir aur khud ka naam ek saath sunke dekho kaise hosh mein aayi...

Nisha blushed.

*In evening at Saurav's house*

All settled down.

Saurav- Guys, I won't beat about the bush, it is just that Nisha and Kabir aren't dating and they are sharing a house from past 2 weeks.

The house was filled with gasps, shock and "WTH" "WHAT?" "KYA?" and many more reactions.

Saurav- Guys, calm down, mujhe poori baat toh bataane do.

Then he told them the whole story.

Saurav- And now the best part, Nisha loves Kabir, Kabir loves Nisha, but both aren't ready to confess...

Kirti- (shocked) WTH? How blah...

Saurav told them the previous night's conversation.

Dolly- Humare paas ek plan hai, but I am not sure, whether it'll work.

*Saxena house*

Kabir entered and saw that Nisha was sleeping on the floor. He realized that she was crying because her cheeks showed that clearly.

Kabir's anger vanished. He just couldn't see her like that. He picked her in his arms laid her on the bed.

He freshened up and bought packed dinner. Here Nisha woke up and was surprised to find herself on the bed. Suddenly she heard the door open and what shocked her more was that Kabir had bags in his hands and he was smiling!

Kabir-(smiling) Uth gayi tu? Chal aa jaa... aaj main khaas tere liye teri favorite Daal Makhani aur Galaxy chocolate leke aaya hua... Chal jaldi aa jaa, peth mein chuhe daud rahe hai...

Nisha sat next to him with her eyes wide in shock and confusion. He wasn't supposed to be sweet to her. While they were having dinner, it was just Kabir who spoke, Nisha didn't utter a word. After dinner, Nisha got a video call from Jwala,

Jwala- Hi Nishu bro...

Nisha- Hi, kya hua, itni raat ko kyun call kiya?

Jwala- Woh actually... (she saw Kabir who was passing from there) Nishu bro, woh kaun hai?

Nisha was shocked and her heartbeat increased when he sat next to her. As soon as he saw the screen, Kabir cursed himself for his bad timing. Nisha and Kabir was shocked and scared and Jwala was confused.

Nisha- Jwalu, yeh Kabir hai... Mere friend...actually na mere laptop ki battery ka problem ho gaya tha, toh maine isse bulaya tha...

Jwala- hi Kabir, I am Jwala...

Kabir- Hey... Waise tumhare results kab hai?

Jwala- parso...

Kabir- Oh, then all the best... Waise I know that you'll get good marks phirbhi...

And then Kabir and Jwala talked to each other as if they were long lost friends.

Jwala- Oh teri, main bhool gayi..

Nisha-(realizing something) Kya?

Jwala- Aapko Harsh yaad hai?

Nisha- (irritated) Woh American Bandar?

Jwala- Haan, woh kal kisi kaam se Mumbai jaa raha hai... Dadaaji ne usse aapko milne ke liye kaha hai...

NiBir-(shocked) Kya?

Jwala- Haan... accha, ab main chalti hoon, maa bula rahi hai...

NiBir looked at each other in shock. Kabir felt angry. Nisha was still shocked. Here she had fallen for a guy, to whom she couldn't confess her feelings and now another guy was making an entry in her life. GOD!!!

Kabir was annoyed. Here he was trying to hide his feelings and now this American monkey... Ugh...

Laxmi messaged Saurav, "Everything went according to the plan. Harsh will reach Mumbai at 10 in the morning. All the best."

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Yaad teri aati hai... Har waqt teri baatein mere saath rehti hai...

Tujhse main yun jud chuki hoon, ki ab khud ko bhool chuki hoon...

Dard hota hai jab tumse door rehti hoon, Khushi hoti hai jab tere paas hoti hoon...

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I know the update is small😭. But please adjust kar lo😭. Likes and comments are awaited😳.

Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago

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