NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute and nice update 😳
Loved it ...
Continue soon n thanks for the pm... 😳
Edited by A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A - 10 years ago
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awweee nibir playing with kids...it was so ssswwweeettt...tysm for the pm
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Finally updating my comments 😆😆
Chapter 6- Lovely chapter Shibu❤️
A delightful read 😆👏
Thoroughly entertaining😆
Loved it so much🤗

Kabir- (now in a mood to tease her) (Full on serious mode) Tumne, kal (looking down) Woh tumne... I mean... You and me... humne... We...

Nisha was getting impatient and tensed. Nisha pulled him closer to her holding his collar and shouted

Nisha- KABIR, TELL ME THE TRUTH, WHAT THE HELL DID WE DO LAST NIGHT? ANSWER ME!!!- 🤣

kabir is such a K 🤣🤣🤣

Kabir- Toh, tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya?

Nisha- KYA???

Kabir- yes, you kissed me...

Nisha- Kya? I mean how?

Kabir- Aise... (he pouted and leaned forward. But Nisha pushed him)🤣 Kabire ko Nisha ko kiss karne ki badi jaldi hai 😆☺️

Kabir- Manana hai toh maano, warna mat maano...Sweetheart... (he winked)- Hayee I love this Kabir😆😆 He is just too good😆😉

Nisha-(damn hesitant) l...i...ps... pe?🤣🤣🤣

Kabir was choreographing a dance sequence and Riya was assisting him. But she was trying to flirt with him. Nisha's blood boiled. She angrily called out to Kabir. Kabir looked at her.

Nisha- Ek minute idhar aa, tujse baat karni hai..

Riya rolled her eyes as Kabir walked towards her.

Kabir- Kya hua?

Nisha- (searching for words) Woh actually... Main... woh... (she found an excuse) Thanks bolna chahti thi, kal ke liye...- J Nisha😆😆

Kabir- Drama mat kar Nisha... We are a couple, tera dhyaan rakhna mera farz hai... (he hugged her and whispered in her ear) I mean we are friends, so I took care of you... Riya thi naa... isiliye... (he broke the hug and smiled at her. She smiled back and left from there) - This was so romantic and cute ☺️Kabir is so understanding😳

Saurav's trick on Nisha was damn entertaining😆

Kabir hanged the call and Nisha unknowingly said, "I'll miss you..." She then realized what she said and face palmed.- Cuteness overload😳

So all in all, I had a huge continuous smile on my face while reading this chapter😃🤗






Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Chapter 7- Nice chapter😊

"Nisha- (entering the kitchen) Kya kar rahe ho?

Kabir- Ghar saaf kar raha hoon sweetheart...

Nisha smiled when she heard him calling her sweetheart."- This was so cute😳

Nisha- (annoyingly in mind) Let's spend time together naa? Kal kya kar rahi thi Kabir ke saath? Mt. Everest ke upar se kudne gayi thi kya?🤣🤣 This dialogue was Hilarious😆🤣

Nihsa- (murmuring) Mere ghar main mujhe hi betne ke liye keh rahi hai... chudail... Loved J Nisha😆

Vrinda teasing Kabir was nice😊
Kabir imitating Samaira was 😆 Kabir can act imitate girl very well😆

Sach kahoon toh I hate Vrinda dawda so I imagined Vrinda's character to look like Sanaya Irani😆😆 But Vrinda as a character is nice😊

Kabir hugged Nisha in his happiness But feeling sad that he will leave soon


Chapter 8- Lovely chapter Shibu👍🏼
Loved the cousin's plan to unite Nibir😆😳

The cousins and friends of Nibir are so caring😳

"Nisha woke up in 15 minutes and saw that Kabir was hugging her so tightly, that if she moved a muscle he would wake up. But waking Kabir was the last thing in her mind because he was looking so innocent in his sleep that Nisha planted a soft kiss on his forehead".- Cuteness overload

"She realized what she did and was startled. She tried to remove Kabir's arms which were wrapped around her but he woke up. He let her go. Nisha hurriedly rushed in the washroom and splashed water on her face. She couldn't understand why she kissed him."- This part was so cute😳The kiss☺️

"Kabir's excitement doubled as the back seat's door opened.

His jaw fell down and eyes widened as Nisha stepped out of the car, dressed in a pink gown. He stared at her. Nisha looked at him and was admiring him. They both were lost in each other.

Sukku nudged Kirti, Saurav and Dolly. They smiled looking at the couple and left from there. Nisha tucked some hair strands behind her ear and walked towards Kabir. Kabir's heartbeat was now faster. His breathing hitched".- Adorable😳

Thanks to Saurav, dono ko pata chala ki date was not planned by either of them, nahin toh Nibir toh World War III shuru karne waale the😆🤣

The dance was so romantic😳 I could also drown myself in the thoughts about Nibir's dance😃😳

Nibir understand each other so well that Kabir knew Nisha was uncomfortable😳

"Both were so lost in each other that they didn't even realize while dancing to song's beats the opponent couple had lost.. They both came out of their trance when they heard cheering and hooting.

DJ- And the winner of this game is, Mr Kabir Kumar and his gorgeous gf Nisha... Love this line❤️

The manager gifted them a box. Nisha took it from him and thanked him. They then left the restaurant.

*In Car*

Kabir- That was amazing...Waise, mujhe laga tu ek number ki bakwaas dancer hai, but you are good huh?

Nisha looked at him in anger while he nonchalantly started the engine of the car.

They bickered and fought as usual. The car passed many buildings and trees of the city. The stars decorated the sky and the moon patiently spread its calm light..."- Loved this entire part😳

A very sweet and cute chapter Shibu😳🤗




Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Chapter 9- Beautiful chapter Shibu👍🏼

Loved Nisha-Kabir's convo outside the house 🤗The necklace scene was ☺️The necklace was so beautiful

"Kabir-( shocked) Nisha, uss manager ne tujhe yeh necklace gift kiya, woh bhi heart waala...

Nisha- (confused) Toh?

Kabir-(cheekily) I think he fell in love with you...

Nisha- (annoyed) Very funny..."- Kabir's dialogue😆😆😆

"He took the necklace from his "wifey". Nisha faced her back to him. He kept the necklace around her neck and clasped it tight. His eyes moved towards the bike's rear view mirror.

Nisha stared in the bike's rear view mirror, not knowing what to do as Kabir clasped the chain. She blushed when she saw Kabir staring at her through the mirror. Both stood in that position staring at each other through the mirror."- So romantic😳 Shibu u write such scenes so well👏

Nibir blushing was extremely cute😳

"This whole while no one talked of last night, because the word yesterday was enough to make Nisha turn deep pink." - Cuteness overload😳

Thank god for Kirti and the gang, they protected Kabir from the flirt Jiya😉 Love the gang and their enthusiasm about Nibir😆

"Nisha- Woh kal raat, restaurant mein...

Sukku- (interrupting her, excitedly) Kabir ne gift kiya

All stared at him weirdly."- Sukku's behaviour 😆😆🤣

"The rest of the day was filled with teasing and blushing. Nisha and Kabir were tired of avoiding the "not-so-innocent" questions which Kirti, Umesh and Sukku asked them. But that couldn't stop them from blushing. But every time they hear the word "yesterday" they remembered their date and felt happy. The time they spent was very beautiful and that beauty couldn't be found anywhere, and the best past was that, both knew this and agreed." Loved this part😳❤️ Aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai 😆😃


Everyone was confused. Nisha was so irritated to hear the same sentence and not receive a answer, that she took her bottle and splashed the water on Kabir's face.- 🤣🤣 Nisha's slap was hilarious 🤣

Feeling bad for Nisha but at least she realized that how important Kabir is for her😊
It is interesting to note how Kabir gives the credit for his admission into the Australian academy to Nisha😃 She is so important for him that he attributes his success to her😳
Nisha looked at him in wonder. How could he be so strong?- Love the bond Nibir share ❤️

His yearning for a family could be seen in his eyes which usually had the shine that was equal to moon's soothing light. - Shibu sometimes I cant believe u are so young when u write such deep sentences👏

They both didn't say anything for some time. Those unspoken words could be heard in the beautiful silence. And this silence added beauty to their weird relation...- Love the author's note u leave at the end. Love this line❤️
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Luved the update dear
you always make me go aww at Ur updates
bechari kriti nisha ne usse chain ne bethne bi nhi diya
nibir and kids are always a treat
waiting for day 13
Update soon
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃like always fab and soo cute plz update ryt now na...sorry i was so exited thats y ...heheheheh plz update more soon 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Shayri is good too
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Awww kids nd nibir...loved it
Awesomely written shibani... 👏
Kirti's entry was hilarious 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really cute update. .continue soon. .

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