Nibir SS : Sab mera tu last part on pg 26 (song's link added) - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 6

while coming down from the terrace kabir felt like his purpose for living life is ended what will he do now? He questioned his existence. His state was noticed by cousins, ramesh nd sanaya. Sanaya asked him abt what happened nd why hez in such a state bt he could not say anything nd he left with sanaya. Ramesh nd cousins were shocked by his sudden action. They searched for nisha. They found her at terrace sleeping nd tears makes were visible on her face.

(on terrace)

Dolly: Nishu...nishu uth, hume tujhse ek zaruri baat karni hai wo bhi abhi...uthna nishu
(nisha woke up bt tried hard to hide her tears but failed at attempt)

Nisha: Kya hua di? Aap sab log yaha kya kar rahe hai nd wo bhi ek sath...koi zaruri baat hai kya??

Kirti: Haan...bahot zaruri nd iss baar tujhe humari baat sunni hi hogi, nd humare questions ko answer kar pehle.Nisha: Kya hua bolo to sahi...

Sukku: Tune kabir ko aisa kya bola ki wo yaha se chala gaya? Aur mujhe ye question ka ans chahiye nd wo bhi sidha sidha ans dena...gol gol ghumana mat

Nisha: Aisi koi baat nahi hui humare bich (nd she faced opposite to them, avoiding their eye contact)

Umesh: Dekh nisha hume tum dono ki feelings k bare me pata hai to plz humse chupane ki jhuthi koshish mat kar...hume bas ye bata k problem kaha hui??(nisha was now crying again as she failed in hiding her pain nd she hugged umesh)

Nisha: Bhaiya, wo mujhse pyaar karta hai par...*crying*

Aman: Par kya nishu?? Hume batana...hum teri help karna chahte hai nisha plz hume bata

Dolly: Wo tujhse pyaar karta hai wo aaj humne dekha nd tu usse pyaar karti hai ye toh hume pata hai.. Tune khud accept kiya tha

Nisha: Wo mujhse pyaar karta hai di nd mein bhi par mein ek widow hu na...nd kabir ko mujhse bhi better life partner mil sakti hai jaise wo sanaya *sobbing*

Kirti: Ek thappad khayegi agar ye 1970 ke zamane ki baat ki to...we r in 21st century nd u miss nisha gangwal talking abt widow can not fall in love again!!!!...,,pathetic u r. I never thought u miss nisha gangwal u will think like this

Umesh: Seriously nishu??? U r thinking abt being widow nd thts y u rejected kabir??

Nisha: Bhaiya me uske layak nahi hu

Saurav: Bahot ho gayi teri ye bakwas... Tune kabir ko ye reason bataya?? Agar batati to tujhe tera javab mil jata

Nisha: Meine usse bol diya ki we r jst frnds

Sukku: Sacchi thappad khayegi ab to...apne hatho se apni life kyu bigad rahi hai tu, pagal ho gayi hai kya

Dolly: Nishu, ye tune bilkul thik nahi kiya...kabir ko tera pura past pata hai nd fir bhi usne tujhe apnaya nd tune uski feelings ki insult kardi...thts nt fair nisha(nisha realised her mistake)

Nisha: Bt ab me kya karu di? Meine to usko mana kar diya..

Kirti: How blah nishu, usko mil nd usko teri feelings bata nd baadme sab uspe chod de...he will decide

Nisha: Aap sahi keh rahe ho di...thnk u guys for helping

Sukku: Ab tu hume thnx bolegi(they shared a group hug)

Kabir nd sanaya reached kabir's home.

Sanaya: Ab batayega bhi kya hua? Muh kyu fulake rakha hai? Pure raaste me ek to tune kuch bataya nahi nd abhi bhi maun vrat leke khada hai...hua kya?

Kabir: *almost crying* she don't love me

Sanaya: If u r joking nd let me tell u it's a worst pj

Kabir: Im serious u grl...she considers me as her close frnd, nothing more than that...im feeling like an idiot, wat im gonna do now

Sanaya: R u sure? Because i hv seen love for u in her eyes, nd i can't b wrong...

Kabir: Bt this time u r, in my whole life i never fell for any girl nd wid whom i fell in love she doesn't love me *crying*

Sanaya: Plz calm down kabir...i think there is some misunderstanding between u guys..bcoz she loves u man, i hv seen this in her eyes

Kabir: Plz dnt try to pacify me, i hv faced d truth nd now we r not going to talk abt her at all...shez my patient nd im her doctor, not more than that

(he went to his roo, sanaya sat there thinking abt d situation. She was busy in finding reasons nd at that time her phone rang)

Sanaya: Hello

Dolly: Hello, dolly here...nisha's cousin

Sanaya: Ohh hii...u called me at this time anything serious?

Dolly: Yaa actually we wanted to talk abt nisha nd kabir

Sanaya: I think we should not talk abt it

Dolly: No we have to...this stupid nisha has spoiled everything, she loves him bt due to some stupid reason she told him no nd we r requesting u to plz bring kabir tomorrow to velvet lounge, we will bring nisha there nd they will clear their misunderstandings.

Sanaya: U guys r sure we hv to do this?

Dolly: Yes...only v guys can do something...of we will leave dis on these idiots then ho chuka inka pyaar ka izhaar

Sanaya: Ohk then...anything for my buddy *cuts the call*

TBC...
Part 7- Page 21

Edited by poo10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for chotu update...njoy reading 😳
Plz do like or comment, it motivates to write more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha ki thinking itni backward kaise ho sakti hai
sab spoil kar diya🤔
But why fear when cousins and Sanaya are here😉
Vo sab theek kar denge😆
cont soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Paagal nishu 😡
Awesome update 👏
Chotu tha par next time long one please 😆
Hope cousins and sanaya succeed
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Posted: 10 years ago
ye bhot chotu update h... par achha bhi h... ab jaldi update karna... mjhe dekhna h how the dhakkans clear their misunderstanding
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Posted: 10 years ago
chotu update but a nice one
waiting for their meeting at the velvet lounge
update soon
thanks for the pms
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 😃
Continue soon
Edited by Anshi1509 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Loved it 😳
Continue soon n thanks for the pm ... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read the prologue intrigued . will comment soon . last day hai na firum pr toh i m sinking in everything i see
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved kirti's dialogue. So apt. Nice update😛
Thanks for the pm

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