Nibir SS : Sab mera tu last part on pg 26 (song's link added) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Sorry for commenting late pooja

Loved it
Nisha is so j😈
N ittu sa update🤣
Thanks for pm n co tinue soon


Sry for such a small update, nxt time it will b longer update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
hi
just read the update and it was amazing
luved this J nisha and as usual dhakkan kabir
keep it up dear
could u plz pm me the next time
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

hi
just read the update and it was amazing
luved this J nisha and as usual dhakkan kabir
keep it up dear
could u plz pm me the next time
ritika


Thnx for reading
Nd for pm buddy me 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

Nisha was burning inside seeing sanaya nd kabir together but could not do anything. Cousins were watching this thts y they started wid their planning.

Sakku:(on mike) ladies nd gentleman, this party is getting boring lets make it interesting (guests got excited) lets start dance but in different style. Everyone has to start dance with their partner but they will end up dancing wid the partner chosen by music.

Saurav: Confused?? Let me clear ur confusion guys. Everyone has to come on dance floor with their partner but ur partner will keep on changing with music, and at the end u will b with some new partner and it will b fun.

All the guests were excited for this. Cousins forced nisha for dancing at first she refused but then when she saw sanaya is dragging kabir to dance floor, she agreed. To give her company sakku became her partner, saurav nd dolly were partners, umesh nd aman nd bunty has to dance with jwala, kirti danced wid one of her colg frnd. Music started.

(Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai,
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai)

nisha was not looking at sukku but her whole attention was on kabir nd sanaya.

Nisha(monologue): Why shez behaving like fevicol, she can dance after mainting some distance. Chipku kahiki. Nd why kabir is not saying anything to her? Does he like her? May b, afterall she is his best frnd cum family (in sarcastic tone).

Sukku noticed nisha nd he shook her by her shoulders. nisha nodded her head as indicating nothing. she saw sanaya was dancing very passionately with kabir. Sanaya noticed nisha is watching them and thts y to make her jealous nd to make her realise her feelings she did it. Kabir was in dilemma bcoz she was dancing infront of nisha like dis nd he could see anger in nisha's eyes but as per sanaya's instructions he has to do it. Sanaya was getting more closer to kabir.

(tute to tute teri bahon me aise jaise shakho se patte behaya
Bikhre tujhise aur simte tujhime,
tu hi mera sab le gaya
Naa fiqar, na sharam, na lihaz ek baar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre me didaar aaya hai,
Phir zarre zarre me didaar aaya hai,
behad aur beshumar aaya hai...
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai,
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai)


Then partners changed nd nisha was paired with umesh nd kabir was paired with kirti. Kirti was coming closer to kabir nd kabir was feeling bit awkward then kirti whispered in his ears tht its our plan to unite him wid nisha. His first reaction was shocking bt he felt relief then sanaya nd cousins are wid him. He smiled then nd seeing kabir smiling wid kirti while talking nd dancing nisha was hell jealous. She was cursing kirti nw. After few time again partners changed nd kabir nd nisha came together. They bth stood like statue for moments nd had eye lock but soon they came back frm trance when music played. Kabir held nisha with utmost care, nisha saw it in his eyes. Cousins nd sanaya was feeling awww seeing them. They started dancing.

(tu hi meri aawargi,
tu hi dua har shaam ki,
tu khamkhan tu lazmi Tu hi raza, tu hi kami,
Aur tu hi wo firak hai jisko hai silsilone mere paas laya hai
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai,
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai,
behad aur beshumaar aya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai,
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai)


Song ended nd kabir decided to talk to nisha abt his feelings nd he told her to come wid her.

Kabir: Nisha...wo..mu...mujhe..na tujhse hai na...kuch kehna hai.

Nisha: Ha bolo na...kuch medicine me changes hai kya?

Kabir: Stop it nisha...mein tumse medicine k alawa bhi baat kar sakta hu na..nd its abt me.

Nisha: If its abt u then i think u should share with ur BST FRND CUM FAMILY sanaya not me..*sarcastic tone*

Kabir held her wrist nd pulled her to the tarrace. Nisha was bit hasitant bt she liked it bcoz she could feel his concern.

On terrace

Kabir: Nisha wo actually im sorry for taking u like this bt i actually want to tell u something very important. Jst listen me first nd then say whatever u think but plz let me complete first. Otherwise i would not be able to talk.

Nisha: Ok say (still being little bit rude).

Kabir: Ohk...i will come to the point. Actually i was bit hasitant to tell u this but sanaya told me to say this.

Nisha: Ohhh...to ur talking to me jst because she said. Good going yaar, anyways what she wanted u to say?

Kabir: Plz nisha let me finish..nd y r u so angry on sanaya, whats wrong wid u??

Nisha: Yaa right, something is wrong wid me only. Shez always right, actually yaa ur made for each other. U r perfect, nd she is perfect so what m i doing here.

Kabir (cutting her off): Stop it nisha.. *hell angry* i was here to tell u tht i love u bt i think u r nt interested at all to listen to me. U jst want to blame sanaya for no reason.

Nisha was shocked hearing this. She was feeling guilty for saying all this to kabir but she was ready with her answer. She gathered all her courage nd started to say.

Nisha: Sry kabir, i don't have any feelings for u. U r jst my frnd, very nice frnd but i hv never thought abt u dis way. Plz dnt spoil things in between us wid dis. We could b frnds right. ( she was holding her tears very hard) nd plz leave me alone for sometime nw.

After hearing her reply kabir was shattered. He didnt knew how to react. His whole world was broken into pieces. Tears started to roll down on his cheeks nd nisha saw it. She was feeling damn guilty but she thought she has to do it. Kabir left terrace but he was walking like dead body while is living but not live. After he left nisha started to cry her heart out.

Nisha(while sobbing): Sorry kabir, bt i dnt want to spoil ur life. Im a widow kabir nd u can get someone better than me like sanaya. Plz move on kabir, plz move on.

She slept there only, crying.

Tbc...

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Edited by poo10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Awesome👍🏼...

Sanaya and cousins😆...
NiBir😭
update soon😊
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Awesome episode 👏
Thanx for PM
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Haiii 😃Dnt knw ur name😛
Me Saru... 😉
First time commenting to ur story... 😆 But Have read all parts.. & I loved every part..👏👏👏
Suprb Concept... Executed very well too👏👏👏
Loved the Title of the Stry..😳👏

Abt this part...😉
J Nisha... I love J Nisha...😉😆🤣
NiBir Dance.. Awieee😳☺️
Sanaya n Cousins r in Mission NiBir Milan👏👏👏
Felt bad for Kabir Nisha pls dont do this yaar...
NiBir ko jaldi milwa doo yaar...😭

Update soon.. 😉N Wl Surely Comment...😆

Do write More...🤗 Q Ki Dil Maange More..😉☺️😆🤣

PS: I m a Groupbie.. So Posts restricted hai 😡🤣
So aage reply nahi hoga.. wl reply U thru PM😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Nice update ... 👏 👏
But Nisha shouldn't have done that 😡 ...
My Kabir , he was crying ... why did she hurt her 😭 😭 😭

Plz continue soon n thanks for the pm... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼...


Sanaya and cousins😆...

NiBir😭

update soon😊


Thnx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Adeenafari

Awesome episode 👏

Thanx for PM
Continue soon


Thnx for reading 😊

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