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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3 (A)
As the week passed Kabir took Nikita to his dance sessions with him so it would not disturb Nisha's practise but he could not be around Nikita for long as he also had major choreography competition coming up next month. Nikita would be around with the staff employees who would look after her but she didn't readily mingle with them and would wander around.
One day while playing she went near the wires which were open and got a shock. Thanks to the guard who saw it and rescued her with his presence of his mind and informed Kabir who rushed his second love to hospital.
There he informed Nisha who came running to hospital for sake of her daughter.
Nisha : How could you be so careless.If anything happens to My girl I won't leave you
Kabir : You think I would have done it intentionally? Have you lost it .She is my daughter too
Nisha : Yes kabir we have a daughter and its time you realise that You need to stop being a kid and take responsiblity . Everytime we won't have shoulders to help us
Kabir: Nisha look I know you are worried but doctir said she is gonna be fine.
Nisha : and that lessens your mistake?
Nisha broke down sitting on the chair adjacent to her .Kabir sat beside her trying to control his own tears .
Kabir (to himself) : I lost it . I could not save my daughter. How could I be so careless. Perhaps I didn't realise What responsibility I have towards Nikita. Bhai How Am I going to face you . HOW AM I GOING TO LIVE IF ANYTHING HAPPENS TO OUR NIKITA.
NISHA : I should have not sent Nikita with Kabir Its my fault. Being her mother I could not protect her . HOW COULD I DO THIS .
All they realised is that in past three and a half years they had not bonded with nikita well. They were always out for some or the other competition while she stayed back with Viraj her Bade Papa.
Doctor : Mr. And Mrs. RATHORE I must say your daughter had a strong will to survive. She is completely fine.At first we thought her voice could have been gone because of shock atleast the reports suggested that but then when she woke up after treatment she asked for Bade papa. May be your daughter didnt want to go leaving him . Strange case . Sucha shock and a three and a half year old survives. Amazing.
Nisha : ofcourse amazing . Kabir do you think we should inform Viraj.
Kabir : No later.
As Nisha and Kabir went towards Nikita's room their eyes were filled with tears of joy. NIKITA definitely had got the traits of her uncle who had fought with paralysis to survive.
They hugged their daughter.
Nisha : I wont compete . Enough of it. I wanna be with my daughter.
Kabir : are you mad . Everyone has been waithing for it and now you say you backout.
Nisha : you dont realise. Our daughter came from gallows of death. And asked for Viraj and not us. This shows we have failed as parents .
Ramesh(Nisha's father) : No you havent . Nisha Nikita is close to viraj just as you were close to your dadaji. You rememeber as kid if you were hurt you would go to him first.
Nisha : but.
Lakshmi (nisha's mother) : No ifs and buts . You are gonna compete for Nikita and me and kabir and viraj and for everyone in our family post that if you want to quit shooting . You may do it.
Nisha looked at Nikita bent over to kiss her and saud yes If my daughter can put up a fight so can I .
Kabir: Thats like my wife and VSR 's best student.

Kabir backed off from his competition to stay with Nikita. HE had a huge responsibility to shoulder and though Nisha's parents were around he wanted to spend time with Nikita and let Nisha focus
Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3 (B)
I have iimagined pak actreess Saba qamar as shefali... here is the pic

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Days passed . It became a routine for Viraj to get Shefali to his guest house have food with her and then drop her back..
Gradually Shefali started opening up to him. She told him about her family , Her father , she mentioned that she was a bright student but her father pulled her out didnt let her study beyond 12th and forced her into this business after her mothers death . As she told him about it she sobbed . And that day Viraj consoled her . He hugged her. That was first conscious touch he made with her. Shefali held him for long . As if she never wanted that moment to go away..
Viraj's phone rang and the trance was broken.
She felt odd and went to the room where Viraj always directed her to speak.
She saw Viraj speaking on phone with utmost concern . As she heard the word daughter she pinned her ear close." Is My Daughter all right " she heard Viraj say.
She thought to herself his daughter means he is Married and has a daughter. She felt a needle pierce her heart .
Shefali (to herself) : And what did you think . A future with this man .How could you think He could you out of your hell like life. No I am better as a prostitute than being a second woman and destroying someone's home.
Viraj :Shefali?
He found her sound asleep in room and moved out .
Next morning when Viraj woke up .He saw Shefali gone.He wondered where? They had breakfast together and she used to pack some if it for her siblings.
Viraj drove to her place .He saw her trying to explain her siblings that she didnt get food today.
He went in and gave the kids the food he got for them.
The kids took it at once while Shefali looked everywhere except for Viraj.
Viraj held her hand and pulled her out in his car. (Trying not to be rough)He drove to hill area. Where he got her out and took her to a hilltop.
He then turned to her and moved towards her. Shefali stepped back as she avoided his touch. Viraj was surprised.

It started to rain . SHEFALI tried to move down but she slipped and Viraj held her by her waist. His touch giving currents in her body. He made her stand straight. His intense gaze tensed her. She noticed he looked charming with drops falling from hus face like a brooke.
Turing to top he moved ahead. I love you Shefali he shouted thrice.
Only to be slapped by her.
Shefali : How dare you .You think I am a fool to be played around . You married man . I f you wanted pleasure you could hv it what was the need to play with my emotions
Viraj : so I was right you heard my conversation last night. So madame. It was my niece . You have seen her photo in my vallet with her parents . I am very much single. But i feel it did gud atleadt I get to know you have emotions forbme.

Viraj bent forward on Shefali taking her lips in his and holding on to her waist for support . Shefali didnt respind initially but as Viraj forced his way through her mouth , she could not hold back and respinded . Running herhand through his thick hairs .

Precap : World championship. Kyra shefali confrontation

Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Well I would like to request readers to put comments .It actually hurts when you see people are not reading when you have put in effort.

and are you satisfied with the way story is shaping up?
Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 4 (a)

Viraj moved back and scooped up Shefali and took her to his car downhill. As they sat in car Viraj took her hand in his

Viraj : Give me one chance Shefali, I will take all your pains away just give me a chance( HE KISSED HER HAND AND GAVE HER A PECK ON HER CHEEK)

Shefali: You and me I mean us . we are not possible. You know My dad . He said he is going to sell me off to the area's police officer and if I don't agree He will push my younger sister into this .

Viraj: Sy yes and just say yes. Don't you love me? Don't you trust me? I will set things right.

Shefali: I don't know you seem like to be a dream .

Viraj: Touch me feel me I am not a dream.

He leaned over her kissed her again .

Viraj and Shefali continued kissing each other as if there was no tomorrow. Shefali held him hard as she didn't want him to go. Finally physical needs got over them and they moved apart as They gasped for air .
Shefali : Take me wherever you want but I will take my siblings along .I am not gonna desert them.
Viraj : Everything as per your wish Mam
They reached Shefali's place. Shefali told her siblings to get in the car and they headed for Viraj's home.

As Viraj went to open the door he saw it was unlocked and there stood Kyra who now hugged him seeing him .
Shefali was startled seeing Kyra's proximity with Viraj.
Kyra noticed Shefali staring at her.
Kyra moved towards Shefali.
Kyra: Unique taste VSR. You surprise me as usual. Do you think this girl wait this prostitute can get into our society. How many people she might have slept around.
"Kyra" Viraj shouted as he raised his hand on her.
Kyra : Perfect so now you raise your hand on me for her . Gud going .
Kyra smiled and hugged Shefali
Kyra : I am sorry I didn't mean a single word I said. I was just checking if Viraj respected you and loved you as a person so what lengths he could go for you and Believe me this man can fight the world for you if he can get into a brawl with me for you.

Shefali : It is nice meeting you.
Kyra : Same here and get habitual of me . I am the one who is going to do arrangements for your marriage . AIN'T I VIRAJ ?
Virai blushed hard .
Viraj: Ofcourse you are going to do it.
Kyra: Ok so as per law you live in separate rooms . NO ULTA HARKAT BEFORE YOU GET MARRIED.
VIRAJ : ok meri maa.
Kyra : Kids come with me . Lemme show you the room.
Viraj(to shefali) .: I am sorry .
Shefali: She is really good. But very frank. Her ways are different but I am good. SHE IS YOUR FRIEND AND NOW I NEED TO BOND WITH HER.

LATER that night Kyra and Shefali sat in the garden.
Kyra: Viraj is madly in love with you . Do you knw who he is ?
Shefali: Meaning?
Kyra narrated to Shefali how Viraj was Indiia's no.1 shooter. But got paralysed and then recovered. His failed romance with Nisha who ended up marrying his brother.
Shefali: So why are you telling me all this?
Kyra : VIRAJ'S first love was shooting. He gave it up . I want you to make him agree to participater in the world championship. I want him to shut people's mouth who still bad mouth his n nisha's relation.He will listen you.

Shefali went to Viraj who was looking at the pistol given to him by his father.
Shefali : Can I ask you for one thing.actually two
Viraj: Yes. The world at your feet sweetheart.I want to continue my studies . Make myself worth of you and second I am fond of gold like every woman so I would like to see you win a gold medal in upcoming Shooting world championship.
Viraj moved towards her and pinned her to a wall.
Viraj: And I thought you want to get nauughty tonight ( he said running his hand down hers.
Anything for you and they hugged each other for eternity.

Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4 (B)
LADIES AND Gentlemen .
We have a last mminute entry in the competition.and he is none other than VSR .
The crowd cheered and Nikita shoutec "Bade papa" as she saw her uncle walk past her in stand who smiled at her and her parents and took his position.
He looked towards the stand where Kyra stood with Shefali both had tears of joy. As he hit bulls eye. He kept clearing rounds like a child's play. And won the gold
Nisha came to the field for her chance and Viraj wished her good luck.
Nisha: You wanna particiapte in doubles?
VIRAJ:You aren't participating?
NISHA: HOW CAN I Without my partner.
Viraj smiled patted her back and said "Your bhabhi is fond of gold . She will be happy if I get her one more..
Nisha cleared the rounds .and won the gold.
Finally doubles arrived. The complete media was buzzing with The news of Rathore team playing the match.They win the gold
Kabir came over to them with Nikita . So did Kyra and shefali.
As shefali hugged viraj . Hundreds of flashes crossed. Media was too interested. Then Kabir kissed Nisha and Viraj shefali while Nikita enjoyed the romantic scene with Kyra.

Kyra: National television live telecast. Nisha and kabir meet you would be bhabhi

Nikita : Bade papa ..BADI MUMMY.
Shefali smiled and kissed Nikita on her cheeks.
Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Epilogue
Viraj :Shefali come on its gonna be fine. Its just a result.
Shefali :My graduation result Viraj
KABIR AND nISHA CHUCKLED AS THEY SAW THEM tensed.
Kabir : Bhai I never saw you so tensed.

Viraj : YOU WON'T UNDERSTAND.
Finally results declared and Shefali passed with 85% .She kissed Viraj offguard who fell on the Sofa . Meanwhile Nisha and kabir escaped.
Viraj lifted Shefali in his arms and took her to their room .
Viraj : Today on the same bed in the same blanket as one . ( he said untieing her saree)

There in other room. Kabir and Nisha licked choclate from over each other in joy of their bhabhi passing . Well they had all errotic ideas even after 5 years of marriage.
They smiled as they heard their bhaiya and bhabhi room close with a thud..

Viraj admired the beauty besides him . He was very gentle..
Viraj: I can still wait if you want
Shefali : But I cant .I want you
Viraj in me with me every second . Make me complete.

Viraj entered her with utmost care as she groaned in divine pleasure
Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...do continue soon..!!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome very different idea pls update it soon 😊
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Great ..nice update ..continue soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeppy the precap made me
Plz update soon

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