Nisha-Kabir and Viraj SS : TERI RAZA (complete) page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue /Background.
Nisha Gangwal and Kabir Singh Rathore are blissfully married and have a daughter named Nikita. Viraj Singh Rathore is single and is living with the his brother and his wife under the same roof ever since he found that Kabir is his brother. Vasundhra stays away in Dubai because none of her sons wanted her to further mess with their lives .
The story is about how Nisha and Kabir manage the turbulence of married life and how Viraj stands strong in supporting them in their dreams taking a backseat in his own career so that Kabir and Nisha move ahead and finding his love of life finally.

The story would be running basically around six characters.
1. Nisha Kabir Singh Rathore
2. Kabir Singh Rathore : Nisha's Husband
3.Viraj Singh Rathore : Kabir's elder brother
4.Nikita : Kabir and Nisha's daughter
5.Shefali: Viraj's love interest
6. Kyra : Viraj 's best friend

Nisha's POV.
I don't know what I should be feeling now. Happy because my husband believes me despite all those nonsense media reports or sad because all this has forced the two brothers to go on separate ways. & what about Nikita .How is she going to take in the fact that her uncle without whom she would never had her foid without throwing her tantrumss...

Kabir's POV
What is wrong with everyone. Why does the media leaves no stone unturned in creating a mockery of my brother and my wife. I believe them more than my life but I can't save them for all the mental torture they are going through. I have no idea what ought to be done . Bhai you should have thought once before going away.Atleast about Nikita . Her first words were Bade Papa. How proud you were that day.

Viraj's POV
I don't know why I am punishing that child . She is so attached to me and here I am running away . How are they going to manage without me . More than Me they need me at this time. But I dont want anything that happened between my mother and father to happen between them.

Shefali ' POV
He was different than any male species I know . As he removed his jacket and came towards me I knew what was to come. He didn't have lust .All he had was genuine concern .As he took me to his bedroom by covering my half torn kurti by his jacket my heart raced fast. There lie down on bed and sleep peacefully he said and ..I did sleep peacefully on a comfortable bed in 16 years of my life.

should I continue?????????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the prologue.. its interesting..
Please continue soon
can you please pm me.. 😛
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Looks interesting... continue soon😊.
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Intestesting starting
eagerly waiting for next part
plz continue soon
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Wow it sounds amazing .continue soon. .
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Hey lovely concept to ur story
Would love to read more
Plz could you pm me wn u update

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Rathore Residence

Nisha , Nikita (Nibir's 3.5 year old daughter) and Viraj are in the living room

Kabir has gone to london to recieve the best choreographer award. After all his career took a shot when Viraj surprised him with interview letter London School of Dance and Nisha was now Lakshya Academy's Prime shooter after she resumed shooting on Kabir and Viraj's insistence. She could not accompany Kabir because she had the world championship coming up next to next week .

Nikita (Nibir's daughter ) was playing with Viraj and she pulled his hair . Viraj let out a scream .Nisha smiled and said "Probably the only person on earth who can dare to pull your hair so hard . Ha Rathore Prince's hair pulled by his neice . Check if some of them are out . You know you are ageing fast"

Viraj made a frowny face and looked first towards Nikita who let out a laughter as it seemed funny to her and then Viraj looked towards Nisha and said "Ageing yes that reminds me you husband and wife are ageing too. I think its time to get Nikita a brother and me a nephew."

Nisha blushed and walked out of the room .Viraj smiled at Nikita and said " now your mumma will not disturb us."

"Bade Papa Shoot shoot " Cried Nikita in her voice as she lifted her toy gun. Viraj chuckled as he clearly saw Nikita was more inclined towards Guns than dolls. Exactly like Nisha and not kabir he thought and wondered what to do next. Sleep was far away from Nikita . So he called for Nisha and told her that he was taking Nikita for a walk outside in the garden.

"Ok I might join you in sometime".Nisha said .

It was getting late as Viraj walked around the garden with Nikita when suddenly all lights went off. Nikita started crying Viraj patted her to assure her he was there and she stopped and slept as she was tired. Then Viraj moved towards the house . He had to search Nisha . He stumbled in dark and saw It was Nisha sitting down in the Garden her hands on her face and face buried deep in her legs. Viraj quickly made Nikita lie down on the bench and touched Nisha.

He was surprised as Nisha didn't react . He pulled her face up . She was all pale. She was unable to breathe . She was choking. Viraj shook her , Checked her heartbeat but to no avail. She HAD TO BE RESURRECTED WITH AIR. He had no option , calling a doctor would be too late. She was his responsibility in Kabir's absence. He pulled her towards him and thrust his lips on her trying to give her mouth-to-mouth. Only thing in his mind was to get her conscious. Lights were back and he kept on till Nisha gained her breathe. With a jerk they got away.

"I am sorry" was all they both said to each other and MOVED TO SIT ON THE BENCH

Viraj took Nikita in his arms. Nisha suddenly started sobbing . Viraj put his hand around her comforting her.

It is not the first time I got an attack but for the first time when Kabir was not around " It is allright . We will go to the psychatrist tomorrow. I will inform Kabir to come back soon. He needs to be here." Said Viraj.

Next morning the first thing that went viral on social media and newspapers and news channels was what seemed to be a Picture of Viraj and Nisha kissing each other passionately . Viraj was disgusted as he tried to hide the paper from nisha but to no avail. She had already seen the news. The door snapped open and It was Kabir who was back . He was already on the way when viraj had yesterday called him to surprise them but now he was himself surprised.

"I CAN EXPLAIN" viraj said as he saw Kabir staring at Nisha

"What will you explain, you don't owe me an explaination . I can very well understand what might have happened . I am fine and not a kid to be manipulated ." Kabir said as he walked towards Nisha and took her in his embrace. She cried and he hugged her tight.

Viraj left them alone. Kabir made Nisha sit on the sofa. And kissed away her tears. He then moved towards her lips and kissed her senselessly. They were apart for almost two weeks and now emotions took over them. As kabir went on placing soft kisses on her neck. She suddenly jerked him away and said " we are in our living room".

I know the chapter is small but next will be a bigger update..appreciation criticism are all welcome..

Precap : Nisha and kabir's night. Viraj's leaving and encounete with Shefali..

Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Part 2 (A)

Viraj plays with Nikita as she just woke up.Nisha runs to her bedroom and Kabir goes after her closing the door with a thud .Nikita starts crying because of the loud noise and gets inconsolable. Kabir listens to his daughter and goes to Viraj's room and finds his brother struggling to quieten her. Seeing Kabir she forces Viraj to put her down and moves towards Kabir .Viraj smiles seeing Daughter -Dad hugging each other.
Viraj : Well I told Nisha yesterday that I need a nephew now. (He spoke as he didn't know how to start the conversation after what all had happened)
Kabir: Well then even I can say you the same thing .Don't you think its high time that even I amd Nisha get to play with our nephew and niece.
Viraj :No Kabir not again .I told you so many times I am just not interested
Kabir: You can make that excuse work on me and Nisha but not on Kyra. Take a note once she gets to know what all has happened she is going to find you a match definitely and you won't escape. Vaise Kyra is herself single isn't she?
(Kabir winked).
Nikita : Papa !!Shoot Shoot
Kabir and Viraj laughed
Kabir :Is she joining Nisha too much in her practice sessions?
Viraj : May be yes.She asjed me to shoot with her toy gun yesterday
Kabir :So she might ask you to dance next week as She is going to all my dance sessions this week.
Viraj : Kabir I don't have words to explain...
Kabir cut off Viraj in between
Kabir : No explaination needed

The day went as usual Nisha met her psychaterist and then went to her shoot . Kabir rested
At home and played with Nikita while Nisha practised.

At night, When Nisha returned home She found house decorated with candles and saw kabir in the centre holding a rose . She moved in and Kabir gave her the rose with peck on her lips. She shied away only to be pinned to the wall.Kabir ran down his hand along her and then put it inside her top touching her back. As Nisha opened her mouth to say something .He took her lips in his and kissed her .Nisha responded with equal passion.They moved apart as they gasped for air.
Nisha :Nikita and Viraj?
Kabir :More understanding than my dumb wife.Laxmi ma took Nikita home and Viraj has gone to Kyra in Udaipur He wanted peace. He just left this morning.

Kabir took Nisha in his arms to their bedroom where the bed was fully decorated with rose petals. He made her lie on bed and removed his shirt .Nisha looked at his perfectly chisled body . Kabir smirked and bent over Nisha . He moved her hands towards her and undid her top . While she tried opening his jeans buttons. Within seconds they were out of their clothes exploring each and every inch of others. Nisha kept moaning Kabir name as played with her Ni**les and then drew circles around her navel. Nisha kissed his chest and rubbed her lower part to his as she could feel his erected manhood. She kissed his manhood and then Kabir lost all control .He entered as she cried in divine pleasure . He moved in and out, comforting her and playing with her ni**les.
Finally they became one again.on an errotic night

Things went on . Kabir and Nisha resumed their practises . Both had important events coming up but issues cropped up. Nikita's parenting became a problem. they both had long hours of practice but they couldn't manage. previously Viraj took care of Nikita and now they had to do it alone plus Nikita won't do anything w/o her Bade Papa. Nisha and Kabir started fighting. The work stress and managing nikita together took a toll on tehm and then.. Kabir finally took the call ...He asked Nisha's parents to come and live with them for a few days after a suggestion from His bade bhaiya..
Edited by AnjaliPunia - 10 years ago
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Part 2 (b)

Kyra(on phone): Kya viraj .You are telling me to lie that you are in udaipur when you are out there in Mumbai. I won't do it
Viraj : Kyra please try to understand Nisha has world championship in two weeks . I don't want her to take unnecessary stress.
Kyra : You are her coach. Besides they need you the most at this point.
Viraj : At present I need myself more than anyone .I am just asking you to keep telling them if they ask you that I am with you .
Kyra : Who can win from you. So whhat are you doing now.
Viraj : Driving on Mumbai roads late in night its fun.Atleast I am relieved.
Kyra : Ok . Enjoy

Viraj drove around like a crazy teenager with a cap on. He didn't want to get recognised.
As he accidentally got inside a red-light area ( Well for people unaware it is like a place where prostitutes stand and people take them and leave them back the next morning ).He was filled with disgust and turmed rhe car around when He saw a man forcing around a 16-year old girl to stand straight. Her eyes seemed heavy with sleep in them. Viraj stopped his car by their side .and the guy said 200rs sahab.
Viraj clenched his fist thinking 200Rs for a girl's dignity.He cast a look at girl .She looked scared her kurti was torn from back. Viraj took out a 500 rs note gave it to the man and asked the girl to sit .The man forced the girl to sit inside .She didnt want to get in .
Girl : I don't want to go Dad.
Guy : She is justa little notorious .You are young can tame her . He said to Viraj
Viraj threw him a glance and drove away . He looked at the girl who was shivering and removed his jacket and put around her.
She sat stil. She said nothing till they reached Viraj's Mumbai guest house .He got down and she quietly went after him . As she walked beside him she quietly took note of the huge surroundings.Their was a big garden and a huge lawn and then they went inside. She saw it was nothing less than a palace .
He glanced at her and gave a her a glass of water.
The girl looked at him in surprise.
Viraj: Have it.
She took it and drank the water. He offered her food which she took and ate as if she hadn't had anything since ages.
Viraj : What is your name?
Girl: What will you do of my name. Do you put down a list of girls with whom you sleep
Viraj was startled . He replied
Viraj : You can think so
Girl : Shefali .That man was my father .
As shefali was done with her food Viraj took her to his bedroom's washroom to wash her hands .As they came out he asked her to lie down on bed .
Shefali followed him and went and lied down on bed in anticipation of an wild attack on her and preparing to fight back.
She was surprised when Viraj walked out and then came back with a blanket and put it on her and said " Sleep" and moved out.
Shefali was surprised.What was this man . Shelled out 500 Rs to make me sleep on his bed and do nothing?
Dreams took over her as she slept .Viraj went in the living room and started reading some book and dozed off.
In morning Shefali woke up first and moved out to find Viraj smiling and sleeping with book in his hands.
She headed towards Kitchen and made paranthas as she found dough and potatoes . The smell of oil got Viraj up and he smiled seeing her . He went to freshen uo while Shefali set the table. They had food and
SHEFALI looked at him questioningly .She definitely had questions after what happenned.
Viraj took the car keys and asked her to come so he could drop her. He gave her a packet and asked her to open at her place.
He then dropped her.As shefali got her home, she saw her father drunk sleeping outside and her younger sister and brother waiting for her.
They asked her if she got them food as their father didn't get them anything to eat.
Shefali cursed herself but as she opened the packet inside she saw food packed and also a salwar suit . She smiled and gave her siblings the food and remembered the night before.

For the first time she felt she should have been more near to the man .She knew nothing about him . He atleast knew her name. As she ran daily errands she could not take his face off her eyes.Viraj on the other hand kept lying on the bed as if she was besides him.

Late at night her father dragged her out again and She cursed her fate but Viraj came thered asked her to sit inside giving her father a 500 rs note again . She hesistated but Viraj himself got her inside.

and then started a new story.


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