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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naina.majik



awwweee...
u desrve dis dear ...
everyline of ur story is meaningful n ful of emotions...
very nice

thank you naina.. thank you so much... u made my day dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UNRES NO:25😆 Silver Jubilee Of My Unres Mission🤣🤣🤣

Awesome Update Mansi👏👏👏 Loved it...
Ramesh- Nisha Scene made me remind My real life incidents When Me & My Papa Talk..😳
I m My Pap's Girl & He is My Best Friend❤️
(Ramesh papa was wrong... I believe Papas r Beti's Best Friends❤️)

Quoating my fav parts..😳

Nisha sat beside him. He looked thoroughly at her, her gloomy face was saying her plight. He couldn't bear to see her like that. His heart squeezed painfully, he felt like his life was leaving his body. He pulled her into his chest and hugged her tightly. She couldn't control herself, she know he is her solace. She cried... cried her heart out. " Kabirr... papa... papa... ko...kitna dukh dia maine... mai bhot buri hu kabir... vo...vo... kabhi itne udas nhi hue... sab meri wajah se... aaj tak... maine unhe kabhi rote hue nhi dekha... par aaj meri wajah se unki aankho m aansu aae... mai unka happy wala gaana thi kabir par... maine hi unhe itna hurt kia... mai kaise sab thik karu kabir... kaise..." she cried harder. With her every tear his pain was increasing manifolds. He know what it meant when you can't talk to ur father. He knew that pain very well. " Shhh... nisha... stop crying... all will be ok... m with you always... I will talk to ur father" kabir tried to pacify her. Her cries had now turned into her sobs but she was still in his arms. " I know this is all because of me... I will correct it... I promise u that I will" kabir said. His words tugged at her heart. She looked at him...hurt. " how could you say that... I don't regret loving u kabir... u aren't responsible for this... its me who have messed it up... u r the best thing that had ever happened to me... don't u ever blame yourself for anything" she said looking in his eyes. He smiled lightly at her " but I still want to talk to him " he said. " Sirf ek shart p... u won't blame yourself... promise me" she said. " Ok my jaan... I won't... but u promise you won't hurt yourself more by crying like this.." he said. " Promise" she said. He hugged her once again and kissed her eyes.

@Red Aww.. Such a Cute & Strong Bond NiBir Share.. 😳Adorable Loved it..👏👏👏

@Violet They care eachother So Welll again well written Mansi👏👏👏

NiBir KISS☺️😳 & The Hug

Nisha closed her eyes firmly and waited for whatever is going to come. He smiled at her and leaned over her. She can sense what is coming back to her. She waited with a hold breath, when his lips touched hers. Softly he kissed her... trying to take all her pain. Nisha let a lone tear escape through her eye. She can feel his unconditional love for her and she kissed him back. He smiled between the kiss and broke apart before he goes further. He kissed away her tears. She opened her eyes smiling. She didn't shy away from him because she isn't needed to be. He is what she has yearned for years. She thanked god for giving her kabir.

@Pink Mansi.. 🤗Kya batavu yaar.. U made me Blush, U made me Aww, U made me Dream, U made me Love more & more NiBir In this just one para... 😳Ur words & Writing Skills I tell U Magical yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved it To the Core❤️🤗👏👏👏

Kabir was rt he has Magical Powers..😉😆🤣

Loved Ramesh- Kabir Convo..👏👏👏 again wonderfully written..👏👏👏

" Uncle... I know u are angry on nisha and I think one of its reason is me. But uncle please forgive her... she doesn't do anything wrong. I know what it meant when you can't talk to ur father. I know what she is going through now. I didn't saw my father ever uncle... I have always felt that void engulfing me. There was no one when I needed my father in my life. I have always seen my mom trying to be my father too. But she had responsibility of our survival. I was alone... no one was their when I first tripped from my cycle to catch me. No one was there when some boys try to bully me... no one was there when I bunked my classes for dance rehearsals..." kabir wasn't looking at ramesh anymore. He was somewhere else. With every word his heart was gripping in pain. Ramesh was looking at him reading every expression of his. He can his pain and felt bad for the poor boy. " Nisha loves u very much uncle... she can't bear ur silence... I know u r hurt but u too need to listen to her... I know its hard to forgive us but pls give a thought to it" kabir said trying to read his expressions. Ramesh was still lookong at him with a no. Of emotions readable at his face.

@Blue each word is stressing Kabir's pain & cravings for his father😭😭😭 so emotional & U wrote it so well dat it just passed to my heart😭😭 juss hope RaKa soon came & Kabir"Papa" bole "uncle" se 😃😃😃

Last part where Nisha- Ramesh Convo too I loved it👏👏👏 again reminded me my real life😃

Awesome Update Mansi..👏👏👏
Thanks 4 PM..😳 Sorry 4 Late Comments😳
Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆
🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 chap 25😆

UNRES NO: 26😆

Mansi Suprb Update again yaar👏👏👏

So.. 😳Finally Viraj & Ramesh made GF to agree 4 Kabir's stay at GH👏👏👏

Kirti-Aashu talks so cute😆🤣

Loved NiBir Scenes again bcz U wrote it so intense & Well dat i can see them B4 My eyes👏👏👏

@Bold Liked Nishu's Thoughts while Kabir was sleeping...😳

" thank u bhagwan ji... kuch jyada bura nhi hone dia aapne.. ise kuch ho jta to pta nhi mai kaise jinda rehti... I couldn't imagine my existence without him... he is my reason.to live... ye to hai hi bander... bilkul akal nhi h isme... par pls bhagwanji aap isko kabhi kuch mat hone dena " she was still in same position when kabir wake up. He admired her beauty as she was busy in her thoughts. Her touch was so soothing that his pain was vanishing.

@Red Juss Wow.. Mansi loved the sentence.. 👏👏👏👏 gud use of words👍🏼

Kabira 😡 tera Prank Made Nishu Cry nahh😭😡 apne pranks par kabo rakh SYS😡😆

Loved the way Aashu- kirti helped NiBir to patch up👏👏👏

NiBir patch up scene made me agin go Awww😳 Mansi How do u write so well??👏

@Red I was Juss Awww.. Aww... & Aww...😳😳😳

Nisha got blank at what has happened to kabir. She rushed inside and saw kabir in pain. " kya hua kabir... tu thik h na... kha dard ho rha h... bhot jor se dard ho rha h kya... doctor ko bulau...doo" she couldn't shout as kabir covered her mouth with his hand. " Shhh... mera ilaaj doc nhi sirf tu kar sakti h..." he said. Her eyes got widened as he turned her around with such a force that she landed straight on his chest. She lost herself in those dark brown pools of love. She was half on the bed lying on top of kabir. " bhot dard ho rha h nisha... esa lag rha h jaise jaan hi nikal jaegi meri..." he said in an intense voice. " kha dard ho rha h Kabir" she was still in her trance. " Yha... mere dil m" he indicated towards his heart. "Tera dil jo dukhaya h... tjhe bola tha maine tera har aansu mjhe kitna tadpata h" he said without breaking the eyelock. " mjhe pta h nisha... tu bahar ro rhi thi... m sorry nisha... mai bus majak kar rha tha... tjhe lgta h tere ilawa mai kisi k baare m soch bhi sakta hu... " he asked her softly. " waise bhi dunia ki sabse sundar ladki to mjhe pyaar karti h fir mjhe kisi ur ko dekhne ki kya jarurat h" he said pinching her nose adorably. " Tujhse jyada ur kuch nhi chahie mjhe... because u complete me... my beautiful angel " kabir said kissing her eyes. She saw him with a look that contains all her love care and respect for him. She was overwhelmed by her own emotions so she just rested her head on his chest with a dreamy smile and a content look at her face. Kabir smiled and kept her close to himself. " kabir... " she said after some time which felt like eternity. " Hmmm " kabir replied. " khana nhi khana h... medicine ka time ho rha h" she said. " Hmmm " kabir replied and tighten his grip on her. " Are mjhe chhod kabir... " she said. " Achha thik h..chhod dunga par tu bhi to kha le... dekh kirti ur ashish tere lie khana lekar aae hai" he said and try to sit. " Dno sath khaenge... " she said and held his plate while kabir held nisha's plate. They both start feeding each other.They both kept talking for a long time and didn't realise when sleep took over them. Kabir held her hand close to himself while she kept her head on his arm. A smile was lingering on their faces which reflect the satisfaction and feeling of being complete with each other.

I m giving My NiBir & their Cute Relationship A KAALA TEEKA☯️☯️☯️☯️☯️☯️ (Sab Buri nazar se bachaye)

Finally Kabir is at GH... U knw Mansi I like Love stories where Aashiqzz chup chup ke milthe hai Ghar walom ke nzar se bachthe.. Functions ke beech.. U knw Wat I meant to say😉😆🤣

Mansi pls Yaar aise scenes GH main bhi NiBir ke saath kar dena..😉😆🤣🤣🤣

Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣


Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👍🏼
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆 soch hi rhi thi mai ki where is the res post
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆 shibu yaar... tu bhi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome update👍🏼

thanks buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry 4 the late comments

Chapter 23
Wow👏
Okk this update is totally dedicated to viraj
He was so understandind n he also told ramesh the whole scenario😊this guy is a gem👏
N kabira ka accident i thought u r going to introduce a memory loss track but thank god kabir ka dimaagi santulan thik hai😆
Nibir convo
Waiting for ramesh's reaction
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 24
Nibir scene😳 n kiss☺️
Loved raka convo...they r my fav😃
RN convo😊 i always liked their understanding
The best father daughter duo😃
N finally ramesh accept kabir yayy😃
Viraj n kabir convo my rajbir😳
Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago

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