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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update 👍🏼 loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Awww.. Nisha ek Mazak tak nahi sehan kar pai.. tna pyaar karti hai Kabir se...😳

AsTi scene.. cousins teasing Kirti😆

Kabir in the GH lets see kya hoga aage😉

😆 thanks niya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: star394

Nice update👍🏼loved it!

thanks buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally updating my comment😆 God knows how many times I have used this opening line😆🤣
Chapter 25- Another great update Mansi👍🏼👏
Kabir teasing Viraj was really nice😆 Love Rajbir 😳
" Vo to bade bhaiya ko milne hi wali h... jaise hi kaira wapas aaengi... hai na bade bhaiya" kabir teased him. " Kabir aap bhot badmash h" viraj said as he blushed at kaira's mention. Ramesh and nisha laughed as viraj pulled kabir's ear. " Ouch ouch... bade bhaiya sorry sorry... " kabir said.- Adorable😳

The way Viraj and Ramesh convinced the family to allow Kabir to stay with them was nice and tactful👏
Ashish-Kirti scene was nice😳 They care for Nibir so much😃
" Are yaar... vo kuch esa nhi karenge... ur agar karenge bhi to hm hai na.." she said. " believe me... ok".-We have full faith in Ashkir😆

Nisha's dialogue when Kabir was sleeping was cute😳
She was playing with his fingers " thank u bhagwan ji... kuch jyada bura nhi hone dia aapne.. ise kuch ho jta to pta nhi mai kaise jinda rehti... I couldn't imagine my existence without him... he is my reason.to live... ye to hai hi bander... bilkul akal nhi h isme... par pls bhagwanji aap isko kabhi kuch mat hone dena " she was still in same position when kabir wake up.

He admired her beauty as she was busy in her thoughts. Her touch was so soothing that his pain was vanishing.- My favorite line in the chapter. Nibir connection is so deep at so many levels

Nibir nok-jhok was funny😆 Loved it😆K kabira trying to make our Nishu jealous😆He certainly knows what to do to make her jealous ." Hu to... pta h tjhe kitni ladkia marti h mjhpe..." kabir smirked as he saw a ting of jealousy arising in her eyes. He decided to tease her some more. " kitne naam ginau tjhe... rashmi, ria, pooja, kiran, anjali... waise vo anjali h na... vo bhoot sunder thi pta h...Aish jaisi aankhe... kareena jaisa figure... lambe lambe baal... usne to mjhe sidha shadi k lie propose kar dia tha ur mai to bilkul raji hi ho gya tha..." kabir looked at nisha from the corner of his eyes and saw her fuming. " par kya karu jab kismat m ho bandariya to angoor to hath se jaega hi na" he said making a sad face. " us ladki ki aankhe kharab hogi jo tjhe propose kia... bda aaya... huh" - 😆😆

Nisha ko kya bola... ro rhi h vo bahar " ashu said angrily.- Kabira ne Nishu ko rula diya😭😭 Dhakkan Kabir😡
" Kya yaar kabir.. vo waise hi pareshan h ur tu h ki" ashu said. " kabir... nisha ko aaj tk kisine nhi bola na kisi ne jataya ki vo kitni sunder h... is baat ko usne kabhi realise hi nhi kia... aaj tmne use shayad dra dia ki ur khoobsurat ladkio m vo piche rh gyi... ur shayad isilie ye sab..." she sighed.- Poor Nishu😭😭

Kabir was hell guilty for his prank. " mjhe nhi pta tha... m so sorry... " kabir said. " Sorry hmse nhi usse bol jise rula dia h" he said. " ha abhi jaake manata hu" kabir tried to jump out of the bed in hurry. - This is the beauty of Nibir's realtionship that even if they hurt each other unknowingly, they will make all efforts to rectify their mistake and care so much about each other😳
Dono dhakkan hain but bahut zyaada pyaare dhakkan hain😆😳

" Idea" kirti jumped in joy. " Ho gya ho to bta bhi d" kabir said anxiously. Ashish glared at him. " Ok suno" she explained her plan.

" Good idea" ashu hugged her in excitement. " Control bhai sahab " kabir said. 😆😆🤣Kirti blushed " chalo shuru jo jao" she said. - yaar yeh Ashkir and Nibir bond is Adorable😳

Nisha got blank at what has happened to kabir. She rushed inside and saw kabir in pain.- Nibir forget themselves and all their worries when they realize the other is in pain❤️

Now I loved the next Nibir scene❤️. My favorite part of this chapter🤗Have no words to describe it. It was surreal And ur description was on point👏

Nisha got blank at what has happened to kabir. She rushed inside and saw kabir in pain. " kya hua kabir... tu thik h na... kha dard ho rha h... bhot jor se dard ho rha h kya... doctor ko bulau...doo" she couldn't shout as kabir covered her mouth with his hand. " Shhh... mera ilaaj doc nhi sirf tu kar sakti h..." he said. Her eyes got widened as he turned her around with such a force that she landed straight on his chest. She lost herself in those dark brown pools of love. She was half on the bed lying on top of kabir. " bhot dard ho rha h nisha... esa lag rha h jaise jaan hi nikal jaegi meri..." he said in an intense voice. " kha dard ho rha h Kabir" she was still in her trance. " Yha... mere dil m" he indicated towards his heart. "Tera dil jo dukhaya h... tjhe bola tha maine tera har aansu mjhe kitna tadpata h" he said without breaking the eyelock. " mjhe pta h nisha... tu bahar ro rhi thi... m sorry nisha... mai bus majak kar rha tha... tjhe lgta h tere ilawa mai kisi k baare m soch bhi sakta hu... " he asked her softly. " waise bhi dunia ki sabse sundar ladki to mjhe pyaar karti h fir mjhe kisi ur ko dekhne ki kya jarurat h" he said pinching her nose adorably. " Tujhse jyada ur kuch nhi chahie mjhe... because u complete me... my beautiful angel " kabir said kissing her eyes. She saw him with a look that contains all her love care and respect for him. She was overwhelmed by her own emotions so she just rested her head on his chest with a dreamy smile and a content look at her face. Kabir smiled and kept her close to himself. " kabir... " she said after some time which felt like eternity. " Hmmm " kabir replied. " khana nhi khana h... medicine ka time ho rha h" she said. " Hmmm " kabir replied and tighten his grip on her. " Are mjhe chhod kabir... " she said. " Achha thik h..chhod dunga par tu bhi to kha le... dekh kirti ur ashish tere lie khana lekar aae hai" he said and try to sit. " Dno sath khaenge... " she said and held his plate while kabir held nisha's plate. They both start feeding each other.They both kept talking for a long time and didn't realise when sleep took over them. Kabir held her hand close to himself while she kept her head on his arm. A smile was lingering on their faces which reflect the satisfaction and feeling of being complete with each other. -❤️❤️❤️ Hayye 😳 Cuteness, romance, adorableness, everything overload😳😳 I m in Nibirland right now

Kirti was looking through the window when ashish came and stand by her side. " kya dekh rhi h" ashu asked. " dekh rhi hu in dno paaglo ko... kitne cute lagte h na sath m" she said. " Ha.. hai to... par kabhi idhar bhi najar ghuma lo yaar... yha bhi koi aapki nighaho k noor ka intzaar kar rha h" ashish said. " Wah kya baat khi h maine" he patted himself. She looked at him with are u serious look. " Are ese ghooro mat yaar" ashish said. She hit him and he held her hand pulling her to himself.- Waah kya dialogue bole hai Ashu ne👍🏼

" Cute to tum bhi bhot ho" he said. She blushed pink and hide her face in his embrace.- Yaar Ashkir are also very cute😳

" bade bhaiya... m ready" he said trying to stand up on his feet but stumbled back. Viraj hold him in time " aaram se kabir... abhi aap pure thik nhi hue h" he said. He smiled. Nisha came and saw them " ye sunta kidhar h meri... " she said " jab dekho apni marji karta rehta h" kabir glared at her. " Ghoor kyu rha h sahi to bol rhi hu" she said. " kabir... tmhe apna dhyaan rakhne m kya prblm hoti h" viraj said. " Ye juth bol rhi h... bandariya khi ki" kabir said. " are... mai kyu jhoot bolu..." nisha said. " Achha mjhe daant pade is lie" he said mimicking her. " Kabir jyada mat bol samjha" she said. " tu bhi chup rh" kabir said. " Offo bus kijie aap dno.. kya bachho ki tarah lad rhe ho..." viraj said. " Chalie dno... muh fulana band kijie". He shook his head and supported kabir while nisha followed them.

Ashish completed the formalities in the meantime. " Chale..." he said looking at them. He saw kabir and nisha frowning at each other. He asked viraj through his expression about it. Viraj just shrugged his shoulders. " Kuch nhi ho sakta in dno ka" he sighed.- Nibir and their adorable nok-jhok😆 Sahi kaha Ashu ne inn donon ka kuch nahin ho sakta🤣 But their nok-jhok is the beauty of their relationship😳

" Kabir r u ready..." he asked. " of course bade bahiya... pyaar kia to darna kya" he said winking at nisha. " Chalo... ander chalte h " ashish said. " Ha ye kuch jyada hi excited hai"🤣🤣 kabir smirked while others laughed.- Kabira is just too good😆

" to kal subah chale jana na please..." kirti said cutely. " Ooo..." cousins teased her.

" ha... ashu... subah chale jna..." saurav said winking at kirti. " Thik h.." he said. Kirti smiled foundly at him. " abhi khush kirti..." kabir said.- Awesome😳

So all in all, loved this update also😊

Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Res😆I think if one day I dont reserve a post and post my comment without any delay u will be shocked and ur reaction would be worth capturing😆😆

Anyway I really dont know when I will update this but hopefully I should update my comment during the weekend or latest by monday😆

ab to I have got habit of this... 😆 do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
osm update...👏
thanx for PM

BEST LINES 👏
It was almost night when Kabir was sleeping and nisha was in her thoughts. She was playing with his fingers

I couldn't imagine my existence without him... he is my reason.to live...

He admired her beauty as she was busy in her thoughts. Her touch was so soothing that his pain was vanishing.

Kabir held her hand close to himself while she kept her head on his arm. A smile was lingering on their faces which reflect the satisfaction and feeling of being complete with each other.

Shhh... mera ilaaj doc nhi sirf tu kar sakti h..." he said.

She lost herself in those dark brown pools of love.

Tujhse jyada ur kuch nhi chahie mjhe... because u complete me... my beautiful angel " kabir said kissing her eyes.

She saw him with a look that contains all her love care and respect for him. She was overwhelmed by her own emotions so she just rested her head on his chest with a dreamy smile and a content look at her face. Kabir smiled and kept her close to himself. (awwweee...so cute)

nisha's care for kabir 👏

viraj n kabir bond 👏 etc everything is just perfect 👏

Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome mansi... Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Originally posted by: naina.majik

osm update...👏

thanx for PM

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">BEST LINES👏</font>
It was almost night when Kabir was sleeping
and nisha was in her thoughts. She was
playing with his fingers

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I couldn't
imagine my existence without him... he is my reason.to live...</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">He admired
her beauty as she was busy in her thoughts.
Her touch was so soothing that his pain was vanishing.
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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Kabir held her hand close to himself while she kept her head on his arm. A smile was lingering on their faces which reflect the satisfaction and feeling of being complete with each other.</font>


nisha's care for kabir👏

viraj n kabir bond👏etc everything is just perfect👏


awww... thanks naina... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awww... thanks naina... 😃


awwweee...
u desrve dis dear ...
everyline of ur story is meaningful n ful of emotions...
very nice

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